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Dating Rules And Pretty Fools - Ch. 11

🕑 Added 2023-06-25 17:59:02 +0000 UTC

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Laura S. Fox

You've noticed well - two blind spots are present, so the two chess players have equal chances for both success and failure... Jackie's importance to the story will only grow. As for Otis... he's just too cute, and I agree!

Laura S. Fox

Watkins is living - and will live - up to his creepy appearance! I'm glad that Jackie's keeping you intrigued, and that's all I'm going to say for now :) More teaching for Otis will come up next time!

Jayce

Two blind spots are present. Jackie is Watkins blind spot, and Otis is Hudson’s. The connection between Watkins and Jackie is intriguing, and I really enjoy his villainy as he is not very likable. I surmise that Jackie may be either a relative or close “friend” to Watkins. Jasper appeared to escape for now, but whatever brought him to Watkins initially, may result in him returning. Hopefully, he escaped for the better, but it is too soon to tell. Otis’ naïveté is cute. Now, he wants a leash attached to his collar, but he better watch out since Jackie appears likely to attach that leash. Jackie seems obsessed of which Hudson does not like especially since Jackie is still an unknown quantity.

Justagirl

Brilliant as always! Watkins is as creepy as ever and should totally come with a big bold warning sign for others saying, “run away and don’t look back!” 🫣 At contrast, Jackie keeps me very intrigued as I can’t figure him out…good guy, bad guy, in between guy?? His infatuation with Otis is added gentle tension. Especially, it would seem, for Hudson! Hopefully we get more training and teaching for Otis? With an added bonus of Hudson falling deeper. Love their differences and how Hudson seems to “get” his beautiful, naive, adorable Otis. ❤️😊 Where, oh where, are you and this unusual and interesting cast of characters going to take us??


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