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Dating Rules And Pretty Fools - Ch. 21

🕑 Added 2023-09-10 18:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Laura S. Fox

It so warms my heart when readers notice the little things... So well said, Ken. For Hudson, Otis truly is a breath of fresh air, a true genuine reason for his fight.

Ken Pilcher

Passages like these reveal why Hudson is the perfect man for Otis. Hudson is never condescending even as he yearns to understand what formed his mate. He desperately wants to unpack the pieces, but cherishes the completed picture and cares deeply about nurturing growth. ——— “After, huh?” Hudson nuzzled Otis’s cheek,…“And what do you mean by that?” “You don’t know?” This was Otis, so the question was genuine, not coquettish teasing. —— Hudson smiled. “We’ll have to work on that, right? Soon?” “Soon sounds vague.” “And you’re a man of hard facts, aren’t you?” “I try to be.” And didn’t he love him for it? Hudson knew conversation had no place anymore between them, as Otis’s scorching hot body engulfed him. His lovely neighbor was a fast learner, indeed. He was observant and focused, something that must have earned him the startled attention of people he had met along his path, but Hudson liked that about him. —— Otis’s unique perspective and logic would, understandably, appeal to a thorough sort of detective. And with Otis, there’s none of the phony b.s. and deception he endures constantly on the job. There’s just heart. That makes Otis perfect for Hudson, as well.

Laura S. Fox

Otis might provide you with a fair share of surprises by the story's end... just saying! And of course, everything Hudson says, he just takes it at face value. Therefore, he will assiduously prepare :)

Justagirl

Another great chapter! I really like the pairing of Hudson and Jackie working together to take down Watson and co. Just don’t want misunderstandings of their relationship and what they’re working toward, to break Otis. Agree with Jayce, Otis is totally a firecracker when it comes to exploring all things sex with Hudson….his future husband?! Nice little nod again, to this idea 😉 Love how it feels like Hudson “sees” him and how much his presence helps ground and recharge Hudson. Angel doesn’t give me much hope that he’s going to turn out to be mildly decent. And talk of being put in “the room” sounds proper creepy and disturbing. Definitely everything related to Watkins screams shady as fuck!


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