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Chapter 218

🕑 Added 2024-09-07 02:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Ben Coffin

Well this was sudden. Maybe it’s because you found yourself being written into a wall with all the city politics. Well it seems that you’ve chosen to basically abandon the whole city arc that had some actual potential. Of course I do think there is better adventure if Anton leaves but if you wanted a personal growth journey it could have also been by himself. I mean he has spent 200+ ch. exclusively taking care of his new family. It also seems that you are not planning on destroying the city and are just having Anton and co. just somehow leave through the siege surrounding the city. Sorry I’ve liked different aspects of the story but I think you need some plan for how you want to move forward. It’s just kinda rocky to read at the moment.


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