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Iniverse chapter 6 WIP

🕑 Added 2024-12-19 09:06:16 +0000 UTC

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Harkaway

Also, Daro having a bounty would attract a lot of Malcontents they'll have to take care of.

Harkaway

Fair enough. XD

TheCountsCastle

World building is great but I want this series to be more episodic with short chapters. Maybe we should merely mention the bounty and the capital city and leave it for the future. :)

Harkaway

Also, I think it would be cool to do some world building.

Harkaway

My guess is they have to go there and face the music. Or face the goats. (Stock joke. lol)

TheCountsCastle

That's better. We can do that. By the way, what about the bounty and capital city subplot?

Harkaway

Ok, how about it starts off with Iskara being punished but she eventually gets into it? XD

TheCountsCastle

So, if I'm getting this right, Daro in this chapter will: get captured, get tickled, get rescued, get thawed out by Iskara, be allowed to tickle her out of her own free will. In other words, Daro will be completely useless. That needs to be changed. We can do a "girls rule" chapter without tearing down the guys. XD

Harkaway

Because she LOVES having her feet tickled as much as she loves dishing it out. Besides, they outsmarted her, they've earned it.

TheCountsCastle

I thought the tickling was meant to be punishment for Iskara's actions. Why is she suddenly okay with it? :)

Harkaway

Also Iskara's into girls, buuuuuut for Ini's and the fact she loves being tickled, she frees Daro and lets him have fun. XD

TheCountsCastle

Oh she will be. She definitely will be. XD

Harkaway

Fair point. I would like to see Ini being the ler for once. XD

TheCountsCastle

I get you, but it would be a crime not to have those big dragon feet receive double tickles from both Ini and Daro. XD

Harkaway

True, buuuuuuut I kinda want this girls rule comic, XD Iskara wields duel Dao Blades, and her most ticklish spots her toe stems. ESPECIALLY the lateral one. XD

TheCountsCastle

That's a pretty nice plot, but it does require some modification. It's more in Ini's character to trap Iskara in a force field and wait until the ice thaws out. Also, Daro would absolutely want some payback. XD

TheCountsCastle

I saw the reference. So, what's the plot details? XD

Gavin Bickel

as i said last time, the story can be your own creation, just want more animal lickles, heh heh heh. some that're similar to that one Rapunzal and wolves art piece you did a long time ago: just having Ini being in the woods, chased and pinned by wildlife, like bears or wolves would be nice to see

TheCountsCastle

Okay.... do you have a reference pic of her? XD

Harkaway

So, Ini gets captured by a bounty hunter after Daro. It turns into Ini having to save Daro and we FINALLY see him get tickled. ^^ The bounty hunter can be my OC, Iskara.