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Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 5

🕑 Added 2024-03-23 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Obsydian Black

Why specifically red blood when everything else is just blood? Is she drinking a vampire knockoff of Red Bull? If so, that's some okay-ish world-building.

Nickerdoodle

Dan's dead expression after he says "wait, Goofy and Pete?" is priceless.

Skippy the Alien

That part had me in stitches

Skippy the Alien

She's too busy freaking out about transgender people

Anonymous201K

17 minutes in or so Ebony apparently knows what a heartboner is. good for her.

Proudwing

the way i just lost it when they realized "the dog" and "the cat" meant Goofy and Pete respectively like 9 minutes in

Aidan

Which is wild to label it that because it literally talks about suicide and self harm

James

Hot tip: Do not eat while watching these. You might very nearly die.

Shaun Rutherford

"calmly"

Connor Strader

Incredible episode, as always. I love this version of Dumbledore who calls students "motherfuckers"

Emma Waters

You should. You would be the bravest person I know

Emma Waters

The author saying that the six year old killed herself is, I’m sorry, so fucking funny because that character straight up isn’t even in a Goofy movie. She literally only shows up in the 90s show Goof Troop. The author did not have to address her.

Kenneth D. Mohr

Oh.....that sounds prime.

Jack Tereno

Thinking the same

Sidney Hackney

K+ is essentially the equivalent of PG in the fanfiction.net rating system.

Dusty

Arin’s Pete voice kinda sounds like his Homer Simpson voice

kay

you know ive never considered the similarities between dan and arin and goofy and pete but now that i have my like will never be the same lmao

Bananas

Emeny’s version certainly had a ring of authenticity to it as I do recall the first draft and not much was altered. She is a smart one. I love that for her. ♥️

Ray Ostempowski

its crazy that My Immortal continues to make an impact on my life 10 years after I first read it.

Max Pierce

🤣🤣

Kyah Faria

Mmmmayux

Max Pierce

My name being Max is a curse sometimes.

Kyah Faria

People pay a lot more for foot content and poetry

Ari Wolf

I love how Arin gave Pete the same voice he does for Gumshoe

Greg Shields

1) Will it be doggy style, or is there even a kitty style? Something, barbed penis, something something. 2) My Immortal...I feel like there should always be an Afterward Author's Note just to bring us down easy.

Jacob Tucker

Ah yes, Count Chocoula. The perfect breakfast that a vampire can totally eat.

Doktor Vem

I wonder what J.K. Rowling would think about this "My Immortal" fanfiction...

Agent Tex

Ah, it was rated K for Kill yourself

Anonymous201K

"It's not the depression that kills you, it's the sudden stop at the end." I mean...it's not entirely wrong.

Tark the Fark

Im a little disappointed the comments aren’t just full of fanfic suggestions. Such as ‘All fair in War and Love’. You guys should read that… sorry, I wasn’t sure where else to suggest fanfics for you to read.

Kody

Count chocula is a pretty funny brand of cereal for a *vampire* to decide to eat

Eanna

I hope they read all of my immortal it sparks joy

Em Cowen

I’m tempted to suggest my own my little pony fanfiction I wrote in middle school LMFAO

Rachel Allwin

it's giving #nobetareaders #wedielikemen

P.Viper

If I'm not hearing Arin read goofy x Pete smut next episode. I'm going on strike.

Hunter hall

I'm not a bully but I think I wouldve been if I met the person who wrote my immortal

8TheKat

right, the comments. 👉👉

Alexandra Calvin

Arin's Dan Castellaneta impression is on POINT

Paige Strong

The Homer voice for Pete took me out

Buggy

Please continue the wildly irreverent Goofy/Pete one, I gotta know if Pete beats his depression before beating Goofy's meat

Thomas Garcia

Pistol ... The child toddler killed herself?

R W

I don't have a sample but my heart says a well rated Optimus Prime x Megatron would hit 😂

The End of Time (AKA Theo the Minotaur)

Thank you lol I’m asking for my “uncle”, who keeps insisting that he’s a famous author and definitely real

Aurora lane

I'm also asking this for a friend. Although a temp solution should be to send the link in the form of a google drive viewing only invite. Just some advice for you know, your friend.

The End of Time (AKA Theo the Minotaur)

If someone were to write a fanfic, can they just copy-paste it into submission form entry section or does it need to be in the form of a link like the form says?

Ricky Liedtke Jr.

I live for these

TheMutantCreeper

Someone sells physically bound copies of My Immortal on EBay. Y’all should get it to show it off in the office.

Othnielia Purcell

I literally only subbed for my immortal and it was so worth it

Turner Strait

Oh you bet your ASS I'm submitting something!

Tyler

The editing for this series really brings out Arin and Dans being playfully with each other but not to the extent of touchling each other. 10/10

Nick C

After watching internet historian read through my immortal I can practically recite the whole story along with Dan and i am cracking up waiting for him to get to certain lines

Podge

Hi guys. Long time listener, first time commenter. Just a quick question, at the end of the video you were elucidating as to where one might be able to submit fan fiction for your consideration. I understand it is to be done in the comments. As this is so, you WILL read Half Life 2: Full Life Consequences. Yours emphatically, Patrick

Nikolas

I like the idea that his scar is gone as if he's been drawing it on

Nikolas

There is a Google form

Nikolas

THE GOOFY VOICE HAS ME SENT

Kailey Bosyk

The author of my immortal could've called him Vampotter. Missed opportunity smh 😔

8TheKat

Wait but where do I submit my fanfic? In the comments?

Uncoolest_Evar

God damnit! How could you stop half way! I NEED to know if Goofy and Pete make passionate love! Also thank you for My immortal. Please read more.

Alyssa W

My Immortal is the cult classic of all time

Nyra

The subtitles during My Immortal just included almost the entire screen’s worth of “Ha ha’s” as Arin starts losing it when it says she spray painted her hair purple and when she is eating her cereal 🤣

Namnoms

I was not ready for Count Chocula with blood for milk. Best part of any story ever

ThatBlondePerson

Another great way to intake it is dramatic readings with friends; I keep a copy on my phone at all times for just such occasions!

Rennon the Shaved

I love how the Count Chocula line got the biggest laugh from Arin.

ScrapperAlex

I love that Arin and Dan have brought back “Let’s fucking go!” to be an unironic phrase.

Dachande Wuffsteiger

That's how you make a cat dog.

Make-out Funeral

I’m making banana bread while watching this! edit: i don’t want to eat this banana bread anymore. It has been tainted and I wish for gods sweet salvation in the second coming of christ.

Enrique Flores

Tristana from league of legends jumpscare

Samuel Jones

What happened to the black flying Mercedes with 666 on the back??? Was it towed to the Hogwarts impound lot??? Dracos dad will be so pissed!!!!

Steph Packard

i'd try watching it in-browser instead on your phone, i haven't had issues watching it that way on mobile

Jon G

These are amazing. Also, am I the only one having trouble with the patreon video player on mobile? It just keeps freezing and I need to restart the app.

hostilecrayon

Arin took "Show Feet" seriously.

Olof Rönn

The author’s note pointing out that Dumbledore screamed because he had a headache (which will never matter again) is such a gift to the world.

Thomas Rose

I love the idea of goofy gradually getting infuriated trying to figure out how the daughter offed herself and getting nothing but cryptic answers

GracefullyAutistic

The link is in the video description. :)

Carmine

Omg, that's so cool! My friend and I read this story five years ago on my old YouTube channel. I can't express how happy this made us lol.

CSDX

Ah, right, forgot about that(clearly). Thank you ^^

tin tanner

Stock video search terms: "Dog"; "Two Dogs"; "Cat & Dog"; "Romantic couple in forest"

Elles

Are you someone's dad? Because if yes then he DEFINITELY will

Quinn_Spooples

Critic of the first story, though they have a deep knowledge of Goofy lore they had a gap of knowledge by not remembering that Slyvia actually married goofy at the end of the 2000 masterpiece An Extremely goofy Movie, really took me out of the story as a whole. 10/10 very hot would goon again

one-true-houselight

Love thinking about the impact of Dracula and vampire lore on our society, including that it led, in one way or another, to that breakfast order in all its glory

MJ Luna

hating on, essentially

CSDX

So, remind me. What does it mean to be "flaming" in the context of the author's notes?

Merry Merrymead

Was super-distracted by the bit of crap in Dan's hair, but fab episode once again. Love these!

Charlotte Parker

It's not Goth!! It's Vamp and Vamp is lame!! Refer to the South Park episodes! Goth is cigarettes and black coffee.

ToastiiGhostii

Hyuk hyuk they were ready to fuck

Margarita Martinez

My daughter went down for a nap at the perfect time. I needed this today XD been waiting for them to get to 'Vampire'

Keith Dieter

Missed opportunity: Harry should've called himself "Vampotter."

Chris Busby

“Billy, what’s your favorite episode of Fan Fiction Story Time?” “The one where they talked about the link to submit fan fiction recommendations for A LOOONG TIME”.

angy

Arin will you kiss me

✨ hannah ✨

I need one of these videos every week to keep me happy, healthy and sustained. 🥲

han moody

wait where are we supposed to submit fic? 🤔🤔🤔 super unclear instructions://

Theenie

I've never read My Immortal before, and I'm determined to only experience it through the lads reading it to me. Please send more videos, my crops are dying and I need more regular sustainment.