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Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 7 - DOUBLE LENGTH!
🕑 Added 2024-05-09 19:00:05 +0000 UTCWe're making these longer and reading more chapters!!! This month it's more My Immortal and Sonic High School. Enjoy!
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Bogost
the way Dan said “you might think I’m a slut, but I’m really not” fucking killed me
Lucas Llz
Knuckles is fuck goes hard need that on a shirt
Maddz
Thank god these are getting longer, worth every one of the dollars 🤘
FuzzyOtterPaws
I was so confused what SBO in the captions meant until I realized later it was supposed to be Espio🤣
Kale Buchanan
I guarantee you, as a former maladaptive fanfiction reader, My Immortal is genuine :')
Frank DB
Yes I have, and sure, they may fade with time, but it’s not like they just go poof.
Zimvadur
Stahp flamming preppz
Zimvadur
Uh, clearly, youve never had any scars
Zimvadur
Just submit it Ask your friend for the link
Tohster
Can someone please fucking animate this. Or can I just do it? (My immortal specifically lol)
ArcadianForest
Knuckles IS a fuck.
Connor Strader
"I may be a student, but I am also a Satanist!" - Hargrid
Nikolas
Y'all are as high reading these as I am watching them
alligator haze
a: i thought draco was dead d: * genuine look of disrespect * ... no, wolfmort has him bondage. pay attention the level of investment on dan's level is supreme. step it the hell up, arin
Rin Kangamine
Who’s gonna suggest that one mcr fanfic about Gerard being the presidents son and dating frank in a mental institution It was my friends favorite but that shit was wild afXD
PillowDragon
Sonic Highschool sounds like it was written by an 11 year old boy that has had a very bad upbringing
Erryd Sho
I was having a smoke right when he said "Sonic thought knuckes was a fuck" and I almost coughed up a lung
Frank DB
I love a fan fiction so dedicated to the source material that they change almost everyone’s name and character designs. I keep having to remind myself that Bloody Mary Smith is Hermoine, Vampire is Harry, and now Diabolo is Ron? Also, scars aren’t something you just grow out of.
Persephone
sounds like something a pozer prep would say :/
April
No matter how many times I hear My Immortal, it never stops giving.
Lesbionic babeyyy
I'm so glad my immortal was made in a pre ai world so there is no doubt a human made it
Kyah Faria
Put some respect on the name of LilSoniq! Unless it's requested that you call them Lilknuckles.
Adam Morse
Brandon, they're not all doing research for their fanfic expose like us. Some of them are just trying to have a good time laughing at ridiculous things.
Brandon
What a cool community. You've made me feel very welcome, and like I for sure want to continue to engage with you. Thanks everyone!
maturepopcorn
Yikes.
Brandon
You know what? Forget I said that. It sounds aggressive and I didn't mean it to. Thank you for telling me that they said that and then saying my name at the end for, I guess impact? Your writing style and communication is immaculate and helpful, and I love you and I'm in love with you. No further comment.
Brandon
Obviously you are attuned to very specific versions of sarcasm and satire, because my comment was obviously satirical. Sard.
sard
they said like an episode ago that it was satire. they know it's satire. but it's considered the greatest fanfiction of all time, and it's still hilarious, so they're reading it. They're aware, Brandon.
Brandon
Are we really pretending My Immortal is a real fan fic? There are a lot of them where you kind of can't tell how real it is, but this one is not hard to see. It's extremely satirical and intentional. I guess it's funny, but I like the one's that are genuine because that's why they are funny. KidSonic (Or whatever his name was) actually cared about Sonic getting laid. The integrity of this show is bankrupt, and it's probably why my life is so bad. Hopefully this comment will fix everything.
INCREDABAD
stahp flamn da story u prepzz ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ (get it?)
Scott Asche
I won't soon forget the line "you poser muggle bitch!"
maturepopcorn
The “I love her for her body” line caught me so off-guard, I just sat there with a blank face for a solid two seconds before I finally fully processed it and fucking cackled
Brittany T. Gilbert
Uncut AND longer?!? YES
Everest
My immortal is amazing- I've never been so hooked into a story like this before.
Shane Hamilton
bless y’all for making these longer you don’t know how happy it makes me
Kristen Kindle
I hope this continues, it's very fun
Isaac Harvent
Love the longer episodes! Since they're only once a month feels more fun to watch
Kyah Faria
I don't think it has a set date. Just once a month. Nothing could stop them from getting to the bottom of Sonic High School and My Immortal
Doktor Vem
It's been a full month since this video was released, are we ever gonna get another installment of this series or is it like dead forever from now on?
Mia
It didn’t seem to have a set schedule like “this day every month.” No need to be snarky
Kyah Faria
Is this a serious question? Its the patreon subscription. It's every month.
Mia
How often are these posted? I need to know what they think of the end of My Immortal
Amaya Schmitt
I 've watched you guys for like 10 years and joined just now for My Immortal. Love!
Dana L Wilson
I want more of this :(
Kyah Faria
Espeo going "oh" after being told you can date someone outside the one night of a high school prom makes him my new favorite character. Just a dumb jock with a heart of gold
Ruija
God, I was eating while watching this, and I had to pause the video because I kept almost choking. 'Sonic thought Knuckles was a fuck.' "I am going to try for the football team." ... But he had a horn on his nose and that was good for attacking people in front of him. THIS TOOK ME OUT oh my god the juxtaposition of these bizarre sentences
Munchman
"No, volfmorph has him bondage, pay attention" is one of the greatest responses ever.
sethfullyclean
This is banger! They're only getting better and better! Keep it up, you PREPZ!
Ana Cristina
I never thought I’d say this but I want to hear you read the goofy screwing 🪛 Pete
Pixeldonkey95
This has to be satire
Narvré
Good to see arin showing feet.
Nathan James Yuhas
This would lose so much if anyone else was reading it aloud. Dan has a certain special something that really brings out the author's true spirit
Nikki-John-Wicky
It's clearly a typo, like, the author meant to say "Tom Riddle" but effed up triumelephantly, lol
Dakota Miller
Wait are you shitting me no way that blue-coat-yellow-boot mfer shows up
Xai
"STOP IT NOW YOU HORNY SIMPLETONS!" needs to be a phrase I adopt into my life regularly XD
JOEY
I don't know why but it makes me so mad that they keep calling MCR a goth band ☠ like blawg 😭 like "Omg yessss MCR is my fav goth band how'd you know 😍" I would die on the spot if someone said that to me
Aaron S
I agree. Also when I was an edgy middle school teen for some reason my fanfics often involved the protagonist being upset with the handsome man and the man pursuing them to make amends, which My Immortal is FILLED with.
Aaron S
No volfemore has him bondage, pay attention 💀💀💀
Kayla
exactly my thoughts! I added one to my cart.
Kayla
I thought SHS had surprisingly good grammar, so it struck me as a young native speaker who hadn’t worked out every grammar rule yet.
Kayla
They stopped right before my favorite part with “Snaketail” I’m living for this right now.
Katie Bradley
The outfits in My Immortal would have been my dream clothes in middle school honestly. Lmao Also, congrats to Sonic for recovering from itchy balls!
Christopher Tice
This brings me so much joy.
folxlore
FLOWERS FOR ALGERNON 😭😭
Katy Messenger
So my theory on My Immortal is that it started out as a semi-sincere self insert fanfiction by some middle school girl. I say this because the attention to clothing and little "gothic" details is just so in depth that it doesn't feel like it was written by someone who wasn't into those sort of things. I was also a middle school girl around this time, and my (thankfully unpublished) self-insert Pirates of the Caribbean fanfics were about the same caliber as the early chapters of My Immortal. However, I think pretty quickly, the author realized that the worse they made their story, the more attention it would get. Thus they, and possibly a group of friends, worked to make the story get progressively worse and worse. I then think that the hate for the fanfiction spiraled a bit out of control, which is why the author suddenly stopped writing it and never returned to it.
AirenMarie
Wait...so 'Lupin' (sp?) was *checks notes* chewing while watching 'Ebony' naked/dressed...and then the school "constipated" the camera...got it.
Da_Wynz
Normally I can fall asleep to Grumps content in a comforting way. I think this time my body is just shutting down. I think 'Ebony' may just be a psychic vampire
Sophie Ward
I don't think they have yet :)
Kristen Kindle
Got the membership so i can listen to these while i work. very worth it
Fluff W0lf
I need the end of that goofyxpete fiction. It wouldn't feel right reading it myself
Kim Wetzel
Honestly and truly, I wonder what the author of "My Immortal" is up to these days. 🤣
Mallory Curtin
The way Dan just accepts the insanity of My Immortal and keeps going even when questioned is immaculate
TheNonchalantNacho
Probably the best patreon exclusive. I need to know how the Goofy fic ends 😂
Sky Milton
I love "Dumbleydore"! it soulds like the shitty cartoon version! XD
Andrew Holyoak
God I love these. I'm so glad I'm giving these idiots 10$ a month to listen to them read shitty fanfics.
yankochick38
idk what it is but I really love the way Dan says “you might think I’m a slut, but I’m really not 😏”
mars
I'm so excited to listen to more! :-)
Tawnee Rios
Just my head cannon My immortal was definitely written my a horny, *edgy*, pre-teen. Sonic High school was written by another pre-teen to whom English wasn't their first language. Judging on all the butt and dick jokes, they're a boy.
CSDX
Aww, Arin left out the best part of Roger explaining the voice direction. After the voice director was like, "Perfect!" Roger went in that deep voice, "You gotta be fucking kidding me." Like, I don't mind the deeper voice acting, but him saying that was hilarious.
Andrew Salans
There is no way the author of my immortal is not intentionally trying to make this as badly written as possible.
tizzer169
This is my second time watching this and it won't be the last
tizzer169
I have a small request, show feet
Anthony K
I can't wait for the grumps to read fan fiction that's been written about them
Nukin Futs
Arin said it. "I feel like My Immortal is gas-lighting me."
Nick McKay
I feel like we've learned a lot about the author this week
Lucille Braun
everytime a fan fiction story time is posted it makes my whole month.
Beef
Thank you for all you guys do, even when it’s silly funny stuff like this it’s just nice to feel your essence
Michael Pirretti
Can we get more of "Sonic's Ultimate Harem"? That was some good stuff.
Emma Mitchell
Fangs you so much for do0bling the lngth of these vids (get it) ;3
Anthony Leeds
I live for this series. As long as I get My Immortal I'm happy 😭
Nikki-John-Wicky
Read more My Immortal and you'll meet Tom Bombadil!
Kyah Faria
Wow.
Keystroke
I just have a small request, can Arin put those dogs away?
Riley Johnson
Arin havin’ the dogs out is the *real* Patreon content Also pleeeeease continue the Goofy & Pete story
enderman
triumelephantly 😭😭😭
Sean
If theres anything we can value in this crazy world, it's that Sonic's balls no longer itch
Zakary Xavier Lorrain
So thankful for story time, and for the extra length story time 😻
Brian G.
I still think it would be worth getting one of the fancy bound versions of my immortal
AnonFromHr
I will give anything for more extra length videos PLES
Justin
so glad for the longer episodes, but would love for a little lightning round of shorter ones
Dylan Roy
My Immortal: Join Us As We Dance Madly Upon the Lip of the Volcano
Mary McCormack
this is my favorite thing in the inter-webs right now
Alyssa W
fill us up with the long epiosdes, zaddies (im sorry)
Pancakes
Plus, the script is basically already written! You don't need to change the dialogue (to keep it authentic, of course) though the plot might need a few tweaks to make it somewhat more coherent
Ol' Biscuit
Can you imagine getting to be that costume designer? Absolutely unhinged descriptions, it would be incredible
Pancakes
Right? No excuses, designers!
Stephanie Arsenault
They won't lack any detailed descriptions, thats for sure !
Pancakes
If they ever manage to make a film adaptation of My Immortal, the costume design for Ebony better be PHENOMENAL
✨ hannah ✨
cried laughing several times during this, thank you grumps for making my day!! 👏🖤
MellonBaller
Have they read "Cupcakes" yet? I forget.
Rachael Dutko
this was an absolute treat. shout out to 'triumelephantly' and 'enistein'
Dan Bellacero
It's a hilarious story, but I'm genuinely lost and have no clue what's going on.
Aria Waite
Sonic Highschool absolutely feels like satire, no way it’s genuine!
nebuloider
My god I should be in bed right now for work early tomorrow but I feel triumelephantly ! Thanks Grumpos.
nebuloider
"sandly" made my drink come out my nose thanks.
CobaltTJ
"Sonic thought Shadow was a fuck." Is the best line in any of these so far
TheMutantCreeper
Longer episodes are just what I need!
A Walking Contradiction
The "author" of "My Immortal" confusing emo for goth is just as cringe as their writing. lol
Ryan Sutherland
Triumelephantly is the funniest fucking thing I've ever heard oh my god
Thomas Garcia
Is it just me or does Sonic highschool sound like it's written by a deeply closeted homeschool kid?
Kyah Faria
This is the least comfortable comfy content I've ever experienced.
Christian Grimmett
Chapter 6 of Sonic High School is going to be the greatest moment in Grumps History
Doktor Vem
This is both the best and worst thing on the internet
Christian Grimmett
Phew, these boys have NO IDEA what they're in for with Sonic Highschool. It's like the Evangelion of Fanfic stories.
Quinn_Spooples
Lupin was masticating to it might be the funniest typo in this whole thing, just the image of Lupin standing there just chewing at something
GracefullyAutistic
Longer episodes?! My prayers have been answered! 😆😆😆 Can you guys finish the Goofy x Pete story next episode? And maybe read some other new stories that are shorter (like single-chapter one shot kind of stories)? Because the biggest reason why I was hoping for longer episodes was so that we can have more variety with the stories. I get wanting to read as much of My Immortal as possible, but now that the episodes are longer, you can still read plenty of My Immortal and then maybe read two or three (depending on the length) short stories. Full disclosure, I'm not sure if the submission I sent in was completely rejected, or if you just haven't gotten to it yet. I'm debating on whether I should submit it again.
Nicole Nostrand
Give us this day our daily fanfic
MM
“gamer words for homosexuality” lmaooo
Sophie Ward
40 MINUTES? :D
Kalli Deines
Fingers crossed we will get a whole video edited for just the my immortal readings. I need it to be all put together
Alyssa Ventrella
This is my favorite series of all time I think I'm gonna throw up from laughing thank you (AN: an if ur a prep fk OFF!!1111)
Colleen Hiltonen
just me, a beer, and trying not to spit out the beer cause I’m losing my shit
Buggy
This was amazing especially "No, Volfmort has him; bondage. Pay attention" which slayed me. PLEASE go back to Goofy and Pete I really wanna know what happens
Matthew Madruga
Why does this feel like a punishment? lol
Sara! Anne Frazier
My Immortal came out while I was up to my eyeballs in pharmacy school; I'd never even heard of it. Extra long episodes are gonna reduce my temptation to read ahead and going in blind has been a treat. Thanks 💜
Nyx
I love this series so much. It brings so much comfort, cozy relaxed vibes, and lots of laughs. Fangs guys (get it?)
Kailey Bosyk
Omg please keep doing the double length ones, it makes my whole day. My cheeks and stomach hurt from laughing.
Sarah Zac
This series brings me so much joy. Turns out there was a lot of insanity that I managed to block out and forget about in My Immortal, and this has been a great way to experience it all again. Hope y'all get to Legolas by Laura at some point, but I could ride the Sonic Enoby wave for a while!
arī the samurai
“masticating” is chewing, by the way 😭😭
Sarahmonster
What a blessed time to be aliv
Tom Small
I don't mind you riding this wave at all. Fangs guys (get it?)
han moody
the editing is 10/10, y'all
Min
Double length?! Let’s GOOOOOOOO
Reinmaker
Would love to see the 2 sequels to Garfield Maximum Speed be done
Charlotte Parker
As a writer ... it is literally painful to listen to this 😬 And yet it's great 😅
Kura Kurington IV
god this made my day thank you grumps team
Merry Merrymead
Oh yes. Please do this for 1000 years. It's so ridiculous and yet so comforting to listen to you guys. Such a weird combo! 😂
Lucas A
I think I pulled a back muscle laughing
Tegan
I also am coming to understand why My Immortal is so iconic... I thought the joke would get old after the first chapter or so but. I am riveted.
Kiersten
The way Dan said "No, Volfmore has him bondage" with such a straight face when Arin asked if Draco died is absolutely hilarious
Ellie
“really? are you sure that’s the analogy you want?” LOL
Richard Lusk
God I want these stories animated so much. Nonsensically of course
Shelby Bird
Doing eyeliner while listening to all the misspellings of Dumbledore, entitles me to a purple heart.
Tyler George
I love this series so much! Thank you guys
Casey.J
Arin’s foot.
Lauren Dautrich
I like listening to these while I work and the "No, volfemort has him bondage, pay attention" bit had me screwing up my face in tears from trying not to scream laugh in the middle of the office.
Claire
“Abra Kadavra” is one of my favorite My-Immortal-isms
RadicalSniperHD RADI
I honestly thought I accidentally went back in the video when thr scar thing happened again. Dan reads everything the same way. It's amazing
Marissa Mason
I'm also where an MCR shirt today. Very my immortal 😆
Rachel Fischer
Thank you, Dan for suffering through that reading. I feel like Im having a stroke just reading it.
Marissa Mason
You guys rock. This series is why I joined the patreon and its not disappointing in the slightest.
clockwork doodles
my favorite part was the main character essentially going "I started crying. he started crying too. what a little bitch"
AshAmphora
I cannot BELIEVE I forgot about triumelephantly. The pure joy I felt when Dan read it was something else
Jessica Capocy
YEEESSSSSS. I'M SO EXCITED.
Pete Morgan
Oh no...
Lyraniath
This is exactly what I need to get through the rest of my day :)
deathoftheendless .
Please do the goofy story next time please??
Strawberry
Something to look forward too when I get out of work
Maddibearxx
Ahhh Let’s Go!
Shane Hamilton
as soon as the notification hit me i yelled im so ready for this
Ari Wolf
YIPPIEEEE
Hope Gilbert
just in time for my lunch 😘✌🏼
Delia McDade
We are truly blessed today with this double length episode
