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Street Cultivation 3: Chapters 7-8

🕑 Added 2020-05-23 20:10:31 +0000 UTC

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Sarah Lin

Yeah, not sure what to say. It's not going to be the typical cultivation novel biases, but I won't pretend to be perfectly aware of all my own biases. In any case, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

tehlu

Hmm, i'm really conflicted on the mapping of the story world to real world geography. On 1 hand, it grounds the story even more, but on the other hand, most times I've seen this is done, a lot of real world biases (intentionally or unintentionally) carry over into an otherwise fantastic world setting. Still, I'm here for all of it. 3 books in and I can say this is my favourite story, can't wait for more.

Sarah Lin

Fixed, thanks! Offense does eventually outpace defense, but there are also two other factors to consider: the heavyweights in the tournament couldn't use any skills that would destroy the arena, and in real life people can strike soft targets.

Desertopa

Caught a typo which seems to have slipped by, "Some say they're obsolete, and it's true they don't define the world they way the major powers did centuries ago" has a "they way" in there. I'm curious if above Heavyweight, the balance of power starts leaning towards mutually assured destruction over mutual survival. When Teragen fought in the team battles, it was a context where it was generally considered difficult for any of the heavyweights to bring each other down. At the Dragonweight level of above, does offense overwhelm defense, so it's easier to field an assault that no opponent can face than a defense that can weather any assault?

LordMarksman

Plot Twist, Algar is the most benevolent among his cohorts. He's just crazy for fighting as it is his Raison d'être so seems more dangerous than he actually is and is just super direct/honest with what he wants! (though he is still dangerous just lesser compared to other two). lol

Sarah Lin

Haha, please enjoy returning to this comment later in the book. ^-^

LordMarksman

Alger's whole deal is it seems he admires those who pursue strength and true warriors. Thus he ended up fostering a group of battlemaniacs. He goes to excessive lengths to see them realize their potential enjoying the process of them growing yet not overly caring if they die or get crippled since that equals to "I suppose that is as far as they go... pity." This may not apply to his personal favorites under him who he is sincerely attached to but that is how he strikes me. Rick is an interesting case for him in that Rick has the qualities he is likes to find yet wants nothing to do with him. Everytime he think he may have been wrong about Rick, the guy does something to prove himself and bring back Alger's attention lol. Rick's luck really sucks lol, plus with how things are going I wouldn't be surprised if the guy who sponsored him was a higher up or Connected to that American Basilisk in some way. Feels like it is about time for Rick to have that level of misfortune.

Luis Costa

I hope we eventually get Granny again, she's such a good recurring villain. Alger feels like a weird obsessive creep "has-a-voodoo-doll-of-you" aura and not nearly enough snark for my tastes.

Sarah Lin

Always glad to hear people's thoughts! Yes, Rick is pretty well-suited to his event, but of course there are other issues lurking. I have fun writing the Refuge gang, but sadly they won't have as large a role in this book.

Cteatus

Ooh now we're getting going. Seems to me Rick is pretty primed for the Defensive competition in Showdown. That Dark Blood Kettle lets him rack up those resistances, and we're also seeing the benefits of exposing one's lucrim souls to so many different techniques. I mean yes, fundamentally Rick has a gimmick. But as gimmick's go, adaptation and resistance are pretty freaking good ones. As to the training, I wonder how much actual spiritual training Rick is gonna get vs hey here's how to make being a Showdown fighter entertaining. Though there is the secret aspect of Showdown we were told about earlier, and if Alger is involved it can't be all that wholesome. That being said Rick has his own couple of trump cards, with the GLA VP promising to keep an eye on Rick in the future. Also, Heather, Wemilat, and Adsila are for sure my favorites. Hope this book features all three of them.


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