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Street Cultivation 3: Chapters 13-14

🕑 Added 2020-06-13 18:38:52 +0000 UTC

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Sarah Lin

You're not the only one to dislike this line, but in this case it is what I meant.

Nandan

"That's lazy anthropomorphism" how? Rick was not "attributing human traits or emotions to non-human objects"... or did I miss something? Perhaps this was just a subtle joke on H's lazy use of language?

Alexander Dupree

Cool cool cool

Runcible Technician

Oh man, boundless energy and optimism does not equal being a good person, that guy has villain stamped all over him. He is probably willing to do anything for a challenge.

Kyle

Yeah I think the looking for something interesting and just how quirky raggest is are both points, plus he's still competition that's more familiar with the scene than he is (potential insight and learning), can converse engagingly and easily on both of their favorite topic, training, plus the dream isn't something to just dismiss either. Plus a connection to Alger, which always is worth keeping a close eye on.

Sarah Lin

Yeah, I'm trying not to repeat myself on that contrast, but you'll see how the theme develops.

Pipeman

I assume it's part stir craziness from having barely any other human contact and part sheer curiosity. Raggest is kinda fascinatingly weird.

Desertopa

So, the vibe I'm getting from Raggest is shifting from "pro wrestler," distinctly in the direction of "shonen action series hero." The contrast between him and Rick calls to mind that between the main character and another "protagonist" figure in one of your other works.

Cyclic Addict Recovering

Thank you for the chapters. "Rick found himself smiling." Haha this sentiment is what I enjoy the most about this story. It's Rick's grounded development. I like the contrast Raggest gives, and it's also a nice way of world-building.

Keifru

Honestly, Raggest is *incredibly* grating. Perhaps thats the point, but its hard to understand why Rick puts up with him outside the initial curiosity because of SpOoKy DrEaM. Raggest seems to be pure yolo energy while Rick is a pretty grounded, slow-and-methodical, gritty scrapper


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