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The Weirkey Chronicles: Chapters 9-10
🕑 Added 2020-09-15 19:54:43 +0000 UTCI'd kind of hoped to have images of the main characters for you to look at by this point, but they're still WIP. I haven't worked with this artist before, so I can't predict exactly how long it will be yet. Quality takes time, though, and I hope you'll enjoy the eventual glimpse of the characters.
Anyway, two chapters this week, covering some important character and soulcrafting elements. I hope you enjoy them!
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Chapter 9
By the time all the students had arrived, Theo had made less progress than he'd hoped. He'd shattered the first solarstone boulder into brick-sized lumps, but they'd proved remarkably resistant to proper shaping with his chisel. Breaking apart the first had been enough to convince Nanjuma to give him a second boulder, since he'd pretended that he hadn't tried to work them further.
The problem was that the heart of soulcrafting was vague and slippery. Raw power using cantae didn't necessarily translate to being able to work inside your soulhome, and though physical fitness and dexterity mattered a little, they weren't sufficient. The core work was fundamentally an act of willpower, and even though he remembered how to do each task, his years on Earth had weakened his capacity.
Still, it was better than nothing. Theo stacked his lumps into a circular chamber and stuck hearthtree boards over the top to make a primitive room. It might look laughable, but it was a nice little trick that let him store cantae quickly. If there was another fight before he could properly create his soulhome, he wouldn't be defenseless.
Though the arrival of the last groups was celebrated with a feast, both Theo and Fiyu skipped it. He'd seen relatively little of her, but knew that they'd meet again for the first class with all the students. The day after the feast, Nanjuma called out for everyone to gather in the main courtyard. Fiyu urged him to take a position by the edge and placed him between her and everyone else.
"Welcome, welcome!" Nanjuma boomed as if he was greeting everyone, but they were still getting organized. That didn't seem to matter and he went on booming in a hospitable fashion.
While they assembled, Theo looked through the group. There were perhaps a hundred people standing in the center of the square, mostly from worlds closely linked to Tatian. He spotted Navim, Fiyu, Magnafor, and a few others he was used to seeing. Famaj was nowhere to be found until his eyes moved on to the Farmguards standing at the edges.
They wore more elaborate robes, as if they were to be teachers, but almost all of them were first tier soulcrafters. Most had well-developed soulhomes, yes, just not what he'd expected from instructors. There were three Archcrafters, plus Nanjuma. Famaj and perhaps a young woman with a forked staff were near ascending. Among the others, only a few stood out for an unusual weapon or garment, implying they had come from some distance away. Everyone on Tatian had light hair, but a few had a strawberry blond color he hadn't seen before.
"At last, everyone is organized and in place!" Nanjuma leapt from the others to the top of the nearby building, not as a show of force, but simply because he couldn't contain himself. "We hope you have enjoyed our hospitality, but I hope you will relish our joyful work even more! Unless you choose to leave, all of you will be here for a full year from this date."
So they'd planned a year of studying? Last time, it had taken Theo about a year to become an Archcrafter, but he was certain he could do better this time. If the contest for the Archcrafter sublime materials took place at the end, it would be too late for him to really need it. For the moment, he put his plans on hold and continued listening.
"Now, I know that some of you are suspicious of our generosity, so let me tell you exactly how this will benefit all of us. Landguard specialists have confirmed that the waters between worlds are at peace again, and there have been no more surprise guests. However, the small cracks that opened will mean that demon attacks will increase over this broad area, to levels that we have not seen in years.
"Thus we can help each other! In addition to stopping some of the attacks, you will be trained by some of our promising young soulcrafters. Teaching is an excellent way to learn, so together we will increase the capacity of this entire region, even if most of you find your way back to your own worlds."
Though Theo had more or less suspected that was the case, it was good to confirm, and also explained why the line of instructors was relatively weak. If they really had a surplus of sublime materials, it was a viable strategy. Not every situation could be a win-win, but Tatian was good at finding them.
"Now, you are coming to us with hugely varying levels of understanding, so I must ask for your patience!" Nanjuma waved down toward the teachers and one ducked into the nearest building. "This first class will surprise some and bore others, but it will allow us to place you in the appropriate group. To ease the pain a little bit, we'll be distributing sublime materials and blueprints!"
The teacher returned followed by several villagers, each bearing a set of sublime materials. Enough to get started, and not a trivial gift, but nothing likely to change anyone's life. No, despite what was said about easing the pain, this was fundamentally a test.
Everyone seemed to be given exactly the same set of materials, so Theo waited his turn. The basket included low grade stone and hearthtree wood, but more importantly a set of seeds and sublime materials to help them grow. He'd lacked the latter because he assumed they'd be given eventually, so he eagerly took each and sent them to his soulhome.
That left only the blueprint, which he regarded dubiously. It laid out a fairly simple single floor soulhome for a Farmguard - competent, but nothing special. Though using a blueprint was obviously better than just soulcrafting haphazardly, Theo thought they could actually be detrimental: use of them didn't teach any of the critical principles of the art. They could produce strong soulcrafters, just soulcrafters who didn't fully understand why their soulhomes were built as they were.
"All of you are familiar with sublime materials, but do you actually know what they are?" The new voice came from an old woman, so short she barely came up to Nanjuma's chest. Instead of using cantae to strengthen her voice, she simply asked the question softly and waited for everyone's attention to turn to her. "Well? Does anyone want to venture a guess?"
"They're objects touched by the gods," one of the Fithans answered, drawing immediate ire from several others. But the old woman calmly spoke over the chaos.
"Perhaps. Others say they are echoes of the first song of creation, or normal materials enriched by the waters of chaos that flow between the Nine Worlds. I asked if anyone knew, in part because I certainly do not. I take a more practical approach." She reached into her sleeve and revealed a flamefruit in one wizened hand. "For our purposes, sublime materials are anything that resonates with cantae."
There was a long pause before Nanjuma eventually jumped in to ask the next question himself. "And what is cantae, grandmother?"
"The power that undergirds all worlds. Some say that it exists within all life, but this is false. Cantae is a power of reality itself, completely absent in most plants and animals, while greatly concentrated in even dead stone. It is one constant that exists in the same form across all worlds."
Though Theo was beginning to let his attention wander, since this lecture was remedial for him, her final words distracted him. Because they weren't quite true: cantae didn't exist on Earth. As far as he could tell, nearly none of the phenomena in the Nine Worlds did. That was a mystery he didn't think he'd easily crack, not when he had so many higher priorities in the form of Vistgil and his demons.
"As you will soon find, sublime materials resonate with cantae in different ways. For those of you capable of using it, the most notable fact - common to all sublime materials - is that they can be absorbed into your soulhome. Now, I hope that most of you are already familiar with them, but for those who are not..."
Theo let the words slip into the back of his mind, barely paying attention as he shifted into his soulhome. He might as well get some work done, though not just work: if any of the instructors were watching, they would be judging his capabilities. Being completely comfortable absorbing sublime materials and soulcrafting might put him ahead of some, but he needed something more impressive than his pile of rocks.
So he sat down and began to set up the boundaries of a vestibule. It wasn't a common type of chamber to find in soulhomes, and in his past life he hadn't even heard about them until he'd become an Archcrafter himself. The small room could store cantae, but more importantly it was excellent for transferring it. Building one would let him absorb it more rapidly, use it with less loss due to inefficiency, and even release it more forcefully.
Of course, at the moment his door and vestibule led to absolutely nothing except an empty clearing. It was certainly an irrational way of going about things, so he could only hope anyone worthy of being his instructor would understand. No matter what he did with a central plant, foundation, or walls, the vestibule would be a helpful addition, so it was an excellent use of his time while he waited.
"But not all sublime materials contain cantae within themselves, nor do they resist it. Certain classes are known primarily for generating cantae, and it is to those that we now turn." The words broke through his own thoughts and Theo found himself paying attention again as they moved to the flamefruit seeds.
Most of the lesson was straightforward, but he used it as an opportunity to reflect. Useful soulhome chambers generally required three kinds of sublime materials: one to generate cantae, one to protect and store it, and one to make it more useful.
The flamefruit would in theory grow into a tree that generated plenty of cantae and sunstone was an excellent material for building the walls. But to be an effective soulcrafter, he needed more than that. Using the hearthtree wood for other features would strengthen him a bit, but not substantially. He needed a truly rare sublime material to form the heart of his main chamber. His plan was to acquire an exceptionally hard stone or wood and place it as a centerpiece. Using it, the cantae he stored could make his body more durable than steel.
"You may find all of this a bit confusing," the old woman continued, "but within your soulhome, everything will be clearer. Cantae don't operate by distant spiritual truths, they're deeply intuitive. Will thin boards with holes make good walls? Of course not! In just the same way, in your soulhome, walls that appear weak to you will leak cantae. Everything operates according to your deepest rational intuitions."
Though that was a good lesson for beginners, Theo had found that was only true up to a point, because intuition wasn't always a good guide to the real world. Not to mention, some worlds didn't operate by rules that seemed normal to him. Some of the most valuable sublime materials he'd ever seen had been from Siata, where plants naturally floated in the air and grew without sunlight. His plans would require him to cross the Nine, which meant learning the "obvious" rules of many worlds.
Nothing in the lecture helped him with his problem. Theo stopped working on the vestibule walls and instead walked to the center, examining where he'd planted the flamefruit seed. Far from having sprouted, it seemed to be dead. Just to be sure, he planted a brand new seed and gave it water and fertilizer. He had a feeling that it was going to die as well.
That had something to do with the fundamental foundation of the soul, which was being skipped in the introductory lecture... and had caused him trouble in his past life. Not everyone was equally suited to every sublime material for reasons that weren't entirely clear. That was the main reason he was avoiding soulcrafting his core chambers: he needed something perfectly compatible.
But the flamefruit were just a temporary measure, not an important part of the blueprint that he'd come up with together with Brigana. He could try different plants on Tatian until he found one that felt right. Whatever it was, it would need to be compatible with the solarstone base and walls, providing a rock solid foundation for his soulhome in the future.
As the lecture drew to a close, Theo returned from his soulhome. Around him, he saw that some were struggling to absorb the sublime materials, or their soulcrafting auras were wavering weakly. Hopefully he'd proved that he had mastery of those basic techniques, which would prevent him from getting placed into the lowest groups that would repeat fundamentals and no doubt end up pushed toward Farmguard blueprints. Beyond the basics, however, there was no point showing off - he needed to look alert and potentially useful to the instructors. Many others already had soulcrafted first floors, after all.
"Now, since you have all been such good listeners, we will move on to choosing new families!" Nanjuma rubbed the old woman on the back as he stepped up beside her. "We know you are all far from home, even those of you from Tatian, and we did not want you to be alone in a formal school. For that reason, you will all be placed in small family units that can support one another in more than soulcrafting."
Theo managed not to roll his eyes: Tatians might phrase it that way, but there was no getting around the fact that they were choosing teams. The instructors moved onto the stairs and looked over the group of students carefully. As Nanjuma explained how they would be chosen, Theo realized that it was going to be like schoolyard games: picking teams one at a time. It struck him as oddly competitive for Tatian, but at least he wouldn't be matched based on their assumptions about personality.
The first instructor was an older man who chose Navim without any hesitation. That made sense, as the Mundhin held both decent strength and very useful abilities. As Navim moved forward to stand beside his instructor, Theo looked to the others, wondering as to their strategies. If they had information about their previous fight, then Fiyu would no doubt be picked immediately. Theo himself wasn't sure how long it would take and sat in irritation, hoping his progress wouldn't be inhibited by childish politics.
To his surprise, the second pick was a young Deuxan woman. She didn't feel exceptionally strong, but a glance at her soulhome revealed an intricate web of silver and glass. Perhaps access or familiarity with new sublime materials was being prioritized? Then again, he might not have taken the Deuxan woman's proper measure.
Famaj stepped up as the third instructor and Theo found himself waiting, irritated at his own anticipation. It might not make sense for Famaj to choose Theo first, but he had seen Fiyu in combat. That would shift the nature of the choosing, making him hope that he would be skipped until Famaj could choose him during the second selection.
Except Famaj didn't choose Fiyu.
Instead he picked a Tatian man who Theo hadn't even noticed until that moment and now reconsidered. It was true that he held a lot of cantae, but his soulhome was essentially just a large stone dome. Good for gathering cantae, but not much else. Comparing him to Fiyu's efficacy... Theo had to consider whether or not he was biased, and he was definitely too involved.
Next, an unassuming Tatian woman chose Magnafor. That was an odd choice, leaving him considering whether or not he had missed some essential element of the exercise. Perhaps Magnafor had further distinguished himself, or perhaps-
"The young Ichili woman, if she would be so kind."
Fiyu gasped aloud, while Theo quickly looked to find who had chosen her. It was one of the young Tatian women he'd noted earlier: relatively unremarkable, though her clothes were cut for easy movement and her short hair was a whiter blond than average. The most notable thing about her was the staff she carried, a wooden shaft studded with black stones at the bottom and along the forking top. It felt like a soulcrafter armament, though not one he knew.
At first he worried that he'd need to herd Fiyu in that direction, but she understood what they were doing and reluctantly went to stand with the other woman. The two of them spoke to each other too low to hear while other group leaders continued to choose their teammates.
Most of those were unremarkable, leaving Theo increasingly irritated as he wasn't chosen. He noticed that many of the leaders chose the Tatian soulcrafters, even though they weren't generally among the stronger candidates. Could it really be simple provincialism?
He realized that one of the team leaders actually wasn't Tatian, instead a Deuxan man wearing similar robes. In the warm sunlight his hair looked Tatian blond, but it was actually silver. Whatever the case, he broke the pattern by choosing a Fithan woman who Theo judged was probably the strongest person remaining, so that was logical enough.
As the second round began, Theo wondered just how long he would have to wait. When it was Famaj's second turn to pick, Theo tried to make eye contact with him... only for Famaj to choose one of the last Tatian candidates. Remaining with the others, Theo reflected on the inadequacies of Tatian culture. The downside of the all-encompassing warmth was that their loyalty was only skin deep.
Then he noticed that Fiyu was pointing directly at him. It seemed to be a disagreement between the two, though he still couldn't hear any of their words. Theo stayed still and tried not to respond in any way as the Tatian woman regarded him with a cool skepticism he didn't often see in that world.
"You, then." She wasn't as polite as before, but she did point at him. Theo nodded and rapidly moved to join them, trying to decide if this was really cause for irritation or if he was being childish. His ideal team would have included Famaj and Navim, but he'd have to make do.
Once he drew close, Fiyu smiled between them and the Tatian women regarded him without expression. "She said that your name was Jake?"
"Yeah. And you are?"
"My name is Nauda. I trust that we can work together as a wholesome community despite the nature of this choosing."
Her statement was so generic he gave her a second glance, but he saw nothing but a bland Tatian smile on her face. Resolving to keep an open mind, Theo stepped behind her alongside Fiyu to let the choosing continue, though several others had chosen in the meantime.
Nauda continued to look through the candidates thoughtfully and Theo didn't have anyone to suggest. On her third opportunity, she chose a Tatian man named Kuber without hesitation. Though not the most polished soulcrafter, his soulhome had an unusually broad foundation that was worthy of note. Of all the instructors, only Nauda, the old man who went first, and a middle-aged woman made choices that Theo thought were rational.
After the third round, it was obvious they were down to less ideal candidates. Of course Tatian society couldn't allow anyone to be last, so the patterns were changed and those remaining were scattered at once. Their group ended up with five more people: two Tatians, two Fithans of opposite coloration, and a Deuxan. None of them struck him as showing any particular potential as soulcrafters, though he had to admit that some people might think the same of him.
"You all have your new families, yes?" Nanjuma looked over them all with his hands on his hips and a smile of immense satisfaction on his face. "Wonderful! We will be providing instructors, classes, and materials at various times, as well as competitions later in the year. But your group leaders will decide which are most important for your family, so please take care of one another!"
Then part of his growth was in the hands of Nauda - it was a small comfort that she was open to being swayed, given that she had listened to Fiyu. It was obvious that the Ichili woman considered their group much too large and shrank behind him... but also behind Nauda. Odd that the Tatian woman seemed to have earned a little trust so quickly.
With that, the ceremony was over and the groups began to split up. Theirs only made it a short distance away before the bluish Fithan regarded Nauda with a scornful look. "What gives you the right to decide how we soulcraft? I can't trust in your judgment, given how you chose me last."
"Please forgive me." Nauda clasped both her hands and bowed deeply. "I was judging not your considerable strength, but your flexibility in soulcrafting. I admired how you showed great facility with stone but I was deeply troubled that we could not provide you with better natural materials."
Her abject apology seemed to mollify the man, but Theo found himself considering. Despite what she said, the Fithan wasn't particularly strong, so he couldn't decide if that was poor judgment or simply Tatian flattery. But her other statement, if accurate, was a sign of a clear strategy: she wanted a group that would be capable of rapidly soulcrafting the sublime materials available to them. A perfectly sound strategy, if a bit boring.
"The remainder of the day will be devoted to introducing instructors, organizing classes, and familiarizing ourselves with one another." Nauda smiled warmly at all of them. "I hope that we can work well together, but I will not impose on you tonight. Please restrain your celebrations so that we can begin in the courtyard tomorrow at dawn."
So all he needed to do was suffer though one more night of Tatian hospitality, then the training could begin. Theo told himself that he could master even this challenge.
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Chapter 10
The next morning, Theo was soulcrafting in the courtyard before the sun had risen. He'd hoped to have some time to analyze Nauda, but as she didn't arrive until exactly sunrise, all he accomplished was further breaking up his solarstone. Soon enough he would need to begin crafting bricks, hopefully aided by all of the classes instead of hindered.
Fiyu emerged on time and sat soulcrafting in the corner nearest him, and the others arrived not long after. Soon they were only missing Kuber, who wasn't on time in typical Tatian fashion, so the Fithan man who had made trouble the previous day was sent into the men's quarters to retrieve him. In the meantime, Theo learned that his name was Trathis, just in case he turned out to be a problem.
Actually, he was introduced to all of them - Nauda had them sit in a circle and give their names and origins - but Theo let most of the names run through his mind like water. Most likely none of them would interfere or assist with his goals in any way. Still, he paid attention as Nauda began what seemed to be a lesson.
"Nanjuma and the others will provide us with more knowledgeable instructors," she said, "but I hope that I can contribute some small insight to our soulcrafting. Perhaps not any great strength, but understanding. For that reason, I wanted to begin by touring one another's soulhomes."
"You can't enter a soulhome." Trathis didn't bother to hide a sneer. "Not unless you're a legendary king in some kind of children's story."
Nauda lowered her gaze in an apologetic bow. "This is true. I meant something slightly different, so thank you for your essential correction. Though I am certain that you have seen thousands of techniques superior to mine, please bear with it. Now, link hands and relax any cantae defenses."
Of course Tatian training was going to involve sitting in a circle and holding hands. Theo held his tongue, as he was curious just what Nauda intended, and extended his hands to either side. Kuber immediately grasped his wrist on his left, but his right hung in the air... Fiyu had been holding back from the circle. She reluctantly shifted closer and laid a finger on his hand as if it would bite her. That put her between him and Nauda... and then a rush of cantae sent him spiraling.
Not into his soulhome, but somewhere else. Theo pushed against it, and realized he could easily resist the effect, but instead allowed himself to be swept away. His soul and body remained motionless, it was as if his mind was being given a new vantage point.
He floated just above the ground of a soulhome, yet it felt insubstantial instead of deeply grounded in himself. When he tried to shift his weight, he saw that his feet didn't truly touch the ground - he was a blur of blue light as if he was soulcrafting. Around him, he saw the others as spirits, many of them spinning in confusion. Fiyu was a perfectly calm shadow, as if having her mind transported into another soulhome was less distressing than holding hands.
Nauda stood in front of them, the only person who remained fully concrete, so this was clearly her soulhome. The field surrounding the main structure was bright Tatian grass and the clouds overhead glowed as if an orange sun lay behind them. Her soulhome itself was impressively built, with sturdy stone walls covered in artfully growing vines.
Somewhat smaller than he had expected, given her status as a group leader. His gaze slid upward and he noted the pyramid structure under construction atop the building. It pressed into the clouds overhead, which pressed back, the occasional chip of paint flaking away. So she was attempting to push past her first floor to ascend to Archcrafter as quickly as possible.
"This is my soulhome, such as it is." Nauda smiled at all of them and swept a hand to encompass it. "Since you are not truly within my soul, you should be able to float simply by willing it. Please follow me as I show you my soulcrafting."
Though a few had trouble, Theo found that floating came naturally and he flowed after her. Nauda checked to make sure everyone was following, then opened her ornate wooden door. The first room was spare, but the air hummed with stored cantae.
"This first chamber is a humble room with no special purpose," Nauda explained as she continued onward. "But it is essential for your soulhome to have balance for stability. I have three chambers that serve an essential purpose, so creating a fourth gives me symmetry."
Perfectly logical, though he wondered how she intended to expand in the future. Unless she had some truly exotic sublime materials, her second floor couldn't be broader than her first, and having only four chambers per tier would be very limiting, no matter how stable it was.
"The most important room in my soulhome is this: my heart chamber." Nauda led them into the second room, which was dominated by a large tree - though it looked Tatian, it was a variety that he hadn't seen before. She didn't explain that, instead telling the others basics about how the tree generated cantae and she used the chamber to channel the majority of it.
Ignoring that, Theo looked into the next room. It was another spare chamber, but there was a large window to the outside... and a telescope of golden brass. His eyes widened and he had to resist drifting closer: it was a finely crafted object for a soulhome, and almost certainly the source of this technique to let people view other soulhomes directly.
"Why's your staff here?" Kuber's question broke through his own thoughts and Theo looked back as he realized that he'd missed a detail. There was an exact copy of Nauda's staff standing in the chamber beside the tree, easy to miss because the trunk had partially grown over it.
"This is the spiritual reflection of my weapon in reality." Nauda walked beside the tree and ran her finger along one of the forked prongs. "Anyone can pick up a weapon and use it, of course, and even make it powerful by forcing cantae into it. But by including my personal weapon here, it can naturally hold cantae and I can use it more effectively."
"If it's a soulcrafter weapon, doesn't it need its own chamber?"
"Ah... my staff is a weapon used by a soulcrafter, but it is not a 'soulcrafter weapon' if you mean an armament with great power of its own. It is only a tool. If I held a powerful armament, yes, it would require a dedicated chamber for its full use, but that is beyond my current needs."
Kuber floated back, apparently satisfied, but Trathis spoke up before Nauda could continue her tour. "What's that telescope thing?"
"That is the spiritual construct that allows all of you to tour my soulhome." Nauda smiled over all of them. "I am quite proud of it, so I hope-"
"But what's it made out of? I haven't seen sublime materials like that on Tatian, so did you get them from somewhere else?"
Nauda frowned slightly, though she still responded. "I have lived my entire life on Tatian and I do not believe those materials were taken from another world. They are simply less common, especially in this region. Now, if there are no other questions, perhaps we can move on?"
The soulhome around him began to fade and this time there was nothing he could do to resist the process. Theo couldn't help but take a final glance around, noting two critical omissions. First, he doubted that such an elaborate telescope existed solely for the sake of pleasant little tours - most likely it allowed her to examine the soulhomes of others far beyond what the unaided spirit could see.
Second: Nauda had a fourth chamber that she kept locked tight.
"Fiyu, would you be willing to show us your soulhome?" Nauda asked the question rhetorically, but Fiyu's spirit flinched in surprise. After a very long pause, she sighed and nodded, her finger back on the physical plane digging into his palm.
Several of the other students let out cries of surprise as darkness engulfed them, but it was just the environment of Ichil. They stood on dark rocky ground, shadows encroaching on all sides, the only light a soft blue glow from the clouds overhead. As others struggled to see, Theo let his vision adjust and then examined Fiyu's soulhome.
While Nauda's structure could have been a quaint home on Tatian, Fiyu's defied any ordinary blueprint. There were walls of black stone, yes, but one chamber appeared to be a solid chunk of ice, directly beside walls of lava that flowed thick and dark. Theo hadn't explored Ichil enough to know anything about that and suspected that Fiyu's mentor had given her sublime materials from far away.
"Well!" The spiritual blur of Nauda put her hands on her hips and regarded the structure with what looked like pleasant, if hazy, surprise. "I hoped that Fiyu would show us variety, but this is better than I expected. Fiyu? You must be here, this is your soul..."
"I am here." Fiyu poked her head from out of the door, almost entirely cast in shadow. "But I do not wish to give a tour."
"That's fine, it can still help everyone understand. The rest of you... note the environment around the building. The shadows and the sky are nothing, just reflecting Fiyu's world of origin, but note how firm the ground is. This is Fiyu's foundation, which renders it effective for some things and less so for others. For example... I imagine that you do not have a tree growing in your heart chamber, do you?"
Though Fiyu paused for a time, eventually she bobbed her head. "No. I acquired a type of sublime wood and a sublime spark in order to create a fire. Its burning generates the cantae I need."
"Wonderful!" Nauda looked like she wanted to pat Fiyu reassuringly, but held back and instead turned to the group. "You see? There are as many types of soulhome as there are people. Look here, where the ice and stone merge so beautifully..."
Theo ignored the lecture and analyzed the structure for himself. Overall, Fiyu's soulhome was more specialized, not merely storing cantae but using it with great efficiency for specific techniques. He couldn't figure out which chamber generated all those bolts of light from the outside, but suspected that her fire lay in the central chamber.
If he understood the structure correctly, she was actually planning her outer wall to be a circle, not a square. It looked blocky because several chambers were still in progress: the ice had further to grow, and there was an area on the opposite side that appeared to be canvas strapped over a gap. Clearly a temporary sublime material as she finished her first floor.
Seeing Fiyu's discomfort, Nauda didn't keep them there long. Instead her eyes turned toward Theo and he felt a penetrating focus on his soul. Though she hesitated, waiting for an invitation, he had a feeling that she could have taken a look even if he tried to refuse her. He wished that he had a shielding wall, but building one would be a huge waste of resources when he was still a first tier soulcrafter, if it was even possible.
Instead he eased his soul and allowed her to guide everyone else in. Immediately he felt firm and grounded, the air itself resonating with him. Of course, his soul was nothing compared to the previous two, and he ignored the snickers from a few of the others.
"Like many of you," Nauda said as soon as the spirits arrived, "Jake is beginning construction on his soulhome. Can you tell us about what you're doing here?"
"There's not too much to explain. I've found the sublime materials I want, but I'm still preparing them. The wood is mostly ready, but the stone needs shaping before I can soulcraft anything, and that's hard spiritual work."
"Jake has made a good point: the best sublime materials require a great deal of time to process them. There are tales of soulcrafters spending months hammering stone or metal in the proper shape, and it is said that masters spend years preparing their materials before they begin to build a new chamber."
"What's this thing?" Trathis kicked at the pile of rubble, though his spiritual form couldn't touch it. Theo was still trying to decide whether or not to ignore this insult when one of the other men in the class spoke up.
"It's obviously a temporary cantae structure, Trathis. Don't be an idiot. What I want to know is... what's this door? I've never seen anything like it."
Nauda stepped beside her, her hand nearly touching the edge. "This is a door between the soulhome and the outer world, allowing a person to remain aware of their surroundings. It is... not a technique I would suggest trying before you have more experience." Her gaze shifted toward him, a cool curiosity that he simply met with a flat stare.
Soon enough they moved on, still in the order of the choosing. Kuber's soulhome was mostly empty except for a wide block of stone that would serve as a foundation. Theo had seen that much before, but actually standing inside, he could see that there was a temporary structure of wood to store cantae as well as more rocks being broken apart to one side. Clearly, Kuber was working toward something, but he refused to give any more information.
The remaining members of their class were even less notable, mostly single rooms to store cantae, or in one case, a tent surrounding a tree. For all his boasting, Trathis had nothing but a single stone chamber and a wooden lean-to against it. Enough to make him much stronger than a person who couldn't use cantae, but nothing remarkable.
Everyone emerged back into the physical world and most pulled their hands back, since they'd grown clammy while they drifted in spiritual realities. Nauda began to explain more basic lessons in a friendly, affirming tone that made Theo sick. He ignored her and instead considered how he would rank the entire class: they were all first tier soulcrafters, but that didn't make them equal.
Fiyu and Nauda were clearly at the top, though not directly comparable. It seemed that Fiyu was attempting to fully polish her first tier, while Nauda was building upward to reach the second. Both were valid strategies, though Fiyu would be more versatile while Nauda would be more powerful. They would need to shift their focuses as they became Archcrafters and moved beyond, of course.
Kuber was currently one of the weakest members of their group in terms of raw cantae, but had done the most work. If he had a good plan for his soulhome, all the foundation he'd laid could pay off, though Theo was still unclear on what blueprint would start in such a strange fashion.
After him came one of the other women, then Trathis, then the others. Theo himself would appear to be last, but only because the work he'd put in earned him little power. If everything came together, he would rapidly become far more dangerous.
At last the basic lecture finished, so he started paying attention again. Nauda gave all of them an overly broad smile and patted the knees of everyone within reach except Fiyu. "I see that you are a wonderful group of soulcrafters with great things ahead of you. Those of you without a heart chamber, your first task should be to construct one. Please ask me if you need different sublime materials or specific instructions, and if I cannot help you, I will find someone who can."
"When are classes?" one of the others asked. Nauda shook her head.
"I chose this group in the hopes that we could skip the simplest of classes, and I believe we can. So there is nothing to attend until tomorrow - I suggest you focus on your soulcrafting, particularly the most work-intensive parts. Meanwhile, I would like to speak to each of you individually. Fiyu?"
"I..." Fiyu shrank back and pulled her hood lower. "I would like some time alone."
"Of course. Come to me when you feel more comfortable." That meant her gaze turned to Theo next, since she was apparently going in choice order every time. "Jake?"
"Sure, we can talk." He rose to his feet, almost stumbling as pain shot through his knees. One of his legs was partially asleep, too, a consequence of having spent so long sitting and focusing on the spiritual. There were soulhome constructions that could avoid such things, often accessories in entrance chambers, but those were luxuries he couldn't afford yet.
The others departed, Fiyu fleeing to her room and most discussing what they had seen. Theo moved to the side, trying not to limp, and Nauda followed him. They walked from the courtyard, which was beginning to fill with other soulcrafters, and down one of the grassy stairways to a small ledge with a decent view. Once there, Nauda stood beside him, leaning on her staff and not making eye contact.
"I would like to be helpful to you, Jake. I hope you understand that. But to have soulcrafted a door first is... a strange decision. I would never dream of accusing you of anything unusual, but you do inspire great curiosity in me. I can only hope that is a forgivable sin."
There was something just a little off about her tone and Theo couldn't help but look at her, yet he saw nothing but Tatian earnestness. He opted for technical truth: "Let's just say I'm following a blueprint in my head."
"And what is that small foundation you're building beside the door? Surely if you intended to construct your first chamber, you would build something larger."
"It's going to be a vestibule."
"Ah. That is... another advanced construction." Nauda's eyebrows rose and he wondered if she knew its structure. She and Fiyu had both soulcrafted doors, but neither had a vestibule. He didn't offer any information and eventually she continued. "If we are a family, I wish to be helpful to you, and I hope that you will help me. Do you intend to construct your central chambers soon?"
"Yeah, that's the plan. But I want to have the right materials first so that I don't repeat work unnecessarily, so I'm preparing everything else first."
"Though that is a reasonable choice, it is also a risky one, since you will be vulnerable to everyone who focuses on the short term. It is like the tale of the woman who stored up all her best food for a future drought and died without tasting any of it. Following a blueprint to become a perfect Ruler is wonderful in theory, but many of those with such aspirations die first."
His aspirations extended beyond the third tier, but Theo nodded in acceptance of her point. It was actually unusual for a Tatian to speak so directly of death, which made him think a little better of her. Maybe her excessive humility was partially defensive.
"So what can I do to help you, Jake? There will be no contests for at least a month, likely more, but I hope that you can reach your full potential, both in the far future and in time to assist the rest of us."
That was almost a reprimand, so he suppressed a smile and answered. "My blueprint is based on control of light - not light as a product of soulcrafting, but the light of the sun itself. Solarstone will form adequate walls, but I need a seed more potent than flamefruit. Perhaps better wood as well. I don't need legendary sublime materials, but I do need them to be suitable for the sun itself."
"An interesting plan." Nauda rolled her fingers along her staff thoughtfully, then nodded. "I will do what I can for you, then. Fiyu was quite insistent that you join our little family, so I hope that you will not disappoint her."
"What about you?" Theo reached out to brush Nauda's hand in a motion that would have been forward on most worlds, but was only friendly on Tatian. "What are your goals for all of this?"
Nauda hesitated just a moment, then gave him a bright smile. "You saw my soulhome, didn't you? I cannot become an Archcrafter in a month or even a year, but I hope to take steps forward. In the meantime, my only hope is to assist all of you so that we can move upward together. If we can win the central contests of this school, the sublime materials earned will allow me to ascend."
"That's a good plan." Theo smiled and remained where he was, looking over the city of Myufuru until Nauda left him.
Once she was gone, he glanced over his shoulder. He didn't think that he had a reason to mistrust her, and Nauda did seem dedicated to her task of leading the team. But at several times, both in her tour and in her goals, she had not been entirely honest.
Comments
Runcible Technician
Thanks, I'm a fan of cosmic horror and the strangeness of houses and architecture are a common theme. It got me thinking.
SV
Thanks for the answer
Sarah Lin
This is a good question. Someone else asked it... last chapter, I think. The short answer is that the ground is not immutable, and it will be relevant eventually, but you couldn't just choose to create a Hobbit hole from the start.
Sarah Lin
Glad to hear you're enjoying it! Yes, look forward to more exploration of those elements. Some things will be revealed later, but your questions are good to answer now: 1) You can. You could even remodel previous floors, but it's difficult and there are reasons you wouldn't want to do this to excess. 2) Dang, you got the order right away without me ever spelling it out!
SV
Thanks for the chapters. I was wondering about basements, are they possible or is the ground immutable in the soul world. Is it possible to have a hobbit hole.
Timothy Alexander
Really enjoying this so far, and particularly enjoying the detailed soul crafting system. Seems like you are going to explore how soulhomes/sublime materials interact with mentalities/perspectives/internal perception etc, which will be very interesting! Also hope that we will continue to get details on room types and architecture! I did have a couple of questions that hopefully aren't too spoilerish: 1. Can you go back and add rooms to older, lower levels? 2. Is the order so far: Soulcrafter, Archcrafter, Ruler, Authority, Stronghold, Dominion,???
Sarah Lin
Good questions to ask! Mentality is an important component, as will be relevant even in this first book, then in a different way much later. Though a few dimensions of architecture are built into the system (just so everything is mutually comprehensible), you'll also see some major differences based on species and culture. As a matter of fact, there are already plans for fungal-based building thanks to discussion with John Bierce! Purely growing soulhomes aren't available to people, but wait until animals are introduced later. There are plans for shells and the like that will eventually be relevant. The one thing I don't have any plans to include is non-euclidean elements. There are species that see various things vastly different, but none are utterly different, simply so that soulhomes remain concrete overall.
Sarah Lin
Glad to hear it. ^-^
Sarah Lin
I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Runcible Technician
There is an obvious connection to the physical materials involved in the construction of these places, but I'm actually wondering about the spiritual and architectural form. It seems that culture and place of origin play a factor into the construction of the soulhome, but what about mentality? For example, what if someone came from a place where houses aren't actually built, but grown using various mutualist fungi for materials? Would the fact that they assume proper homes are made from fungus mounds effect the efficiency and placement of constructs inside? Even more exotic to think about are people from very unusual worlds. What if a species grows houses from the inside out over time like a nautilus shell? What if a species sees space differently and thinks in terms of non-euclidean forms?
Cameron C
I really really like this story.
Stephen Pearson
Thanks very much for the chapters! Really enjoying it so far:-)
Sarah Lin
Yeah, I hope so. Though the reader will still need to accept certain spiritual rules by authorial fiat, I hope that most of the rules will be based on clear physical logic. I have enough neat ideas for this to carry a series, so I hope people embrace the premise.
Sarah Lin
Fixed, thanks!
Pete
Light control, huh. Fiyu shall regret sticking around with him! I would find the culture in that world a bit grating too.
Alexander Dupree
Solid complete magical foundation. Lots of potential for cool things here. Less hand-wavy than some systems and hopefully it is easy to write a good story with it as a tool.
Lamsey
Typo: "Once he drew close, Fiyu smiled between them and the Tatian women regarded him without expression." women -> woman
