Patrefans
sarahlin from patreon
sarahlin patreon

The Weirkey Chronicles: Chapters 14-15 + Character Art

🕑 Added 2020-09-29 20:16:48 +0000 UTC
The Weirkey Chronicles: Chapters 14-15 + Character Art
The Weirkey Chronicles: Chapters 14-15 + Character Art
The Weirkey Chronicles: Chapters 14-15 + Character Art
The Weirkey Chronicles: Chapters 14-15 + Character Art
The Weirkey Chronicles: Chapters 14-15 + Character Art

Comments

Sarah Lin

Expect plenty more throughout the whole series!

Mike Durie

Enjoying this story, a lot of possibilities, being a nerd would like some more of the soul crafting

Sarah Lin

Yeah, I thought this way had more narrative potential.

Pete

Good to know otherwise there would probably be a lot of killing for materials.

Guilty343

Theo is definitely dealing with a classic case of resource scarcity. It's nice to see the payoff with the companion sensory technique actually being built. Looking forward to Theo's TLC tho

Sarah Lin

Good question, one that won't be addressed in this book. Generally speaking, it's hard to get a sublime material out of someone's soul and next to impossible to extract something that has been processed and built into a soulhome. There are rare theft techniques that attempt to steal sublime materials, but this is more about hindering the opponent than gaining something. Violent deaths usually destroy the soulhome, rendering all materials completely unusable. Peaceful deaths, however, are a different case...

Pete

I have been wondering if a crafter dies is there a way to recover materials from their souls?

Timothy Alexander

Enjoyed these chapters a lot and think having these more gentle character chapters are very important for pacing. I'm eagerly waiting for more rooms here!

Cameron C

Love this story.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapters!

Alexander Dupree

I figured that is what you were going with which was why I thought it was a bit nitpicky. If I wanted to keep the two concepts together I'd go for light being able to convert my sublime materials into plasma and since plasma is such a good conductor I'd use it to transfer power around or even keep it in that state as a way to store hyper dense energy. Maybe releasing it later or focusing the light released from it with lenses. I'm not sure how well that works with your system but it was how I tried to explain your concept to myself. If I really wanted to go out on a conceptual limb nuclear fusion both generates power and changes matter into more complex material while in a plasma state. Easy step from there to purification, state change, or even consumption for fast energy gain.

Sarah Lin

Whoops! Duplications can be so easy to slide over. Anyway, glad you enjoyed these chapters. ^-^

Nandan

Very nice chapters. I really enjoyed the character development, interactions and group building. "But war is not not unknown on Tatian" ...so it <i>is</i> unknown ?

Sarah Lin

Hmm. This is true, but I tried to emphasize (perhaps not enough) that it's a conceptual tie as opposed to a scientific one. His power concept is light, which is tied up in the sun, which is plasma. It's going to go in a slightly different direction, though, with a different scientific angle. I'm trying to lean into that aspect to make it more interesting than the common version, so feel free to nitpick!

Sarah Lin

Should be a batch of three next week!

Sarah Lin

I'm glad to hear it, on all accounts. ^-^

Gabriel

That was enjoyable! Thank you!

Alexander Dupree

Small nit from a previous chapter. You had Theo mention that he knew about light and he called plasma light. Plasma isn't light it is matter which the nuclei of the atoms float in a fluid of electrons. It will produce electromagnetic radiation (light) and light can create plasma if it puts enough energy into matter. Neon lights are plasma.

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters solid story going here.

Peter Fisher

Chapters consumed. Still hungry... More chapters required. Sick char pics! Omnomnom art.

ExtraKeys202

'Can't speak for others, obviously, but I love chapters devoted to character development/ world building. 'Makes the work actually feel ALIVE. Oh, and the character art looks great!


More Creators