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Street Cultivation 3: Chapters 21-22

🕑 Added 2020-07-11 17:31:20 +0000 UTC

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Sarah Lin

Glad to hear you enjoyed those parts. ^-^ I've intentionally made this world fairly ruthless, but I try to include a mix of elements.

Nandan

"How about I just keep my mouth shut?" "Good plan." Dang that had me laughing out loud. Such delightful contrast between Rick's sober self-awareness and Raggest's unbridled... hum... childish obliviousness? I don't want to call it "innocence", that word just doesn't fit. In any case, I wanted to mention this high point. Oh, and the dog scene is also lovely (and I so agree with the "no lucrim cats" rule). Also, it's really nice to see Qing Shan being friendly. It seems that in this universe, kindness, friendliness, etc... are qualities that are not only rare to start with, but become increasingly so with the rise of power levels.

tehlu

Seems like efficacy is what’s important not how you get there. Rick’s total lucrim investment seems way below the other competitors but he’s still allowed to compete. To date no official has actually checked to see if he’s even strong enough. So Yeaa, it’s almost like a free for all, may the best man/woman win?

Kenneth Darlin

I really wish we could see a cat with Lucrim it’s be awesome to hear about how the lucked someone and then casually bit off a finger!

Sarah Lin

I'm glad that scene could reach you. I wanted to explore the idea of lucrim pets while keeping the inherent doggishness.

LordMarksman

The scene with the Dog was cute, I actually did something similar with mine before he regrettably passed away few years back (God rest his soul). In my case though, I would pin him down like in wrestling, psych him up counting 1,2, 3, and then do a release. He would run off like a jackrabbit going everywhere in excitement before running back barreling into me and I would catch him. Pet and rub his belly a bit then repeat the whole process. Yeah.. Jigen really enjoyed playing like that he was a good dog and I miss him still. Like Qing Shan I prefer dogs over cats, so I'm more inclined to think favorably of her I suppose for that. Granted the fact that it was nice of her to pad Rick's gift to Lisa like she did. I'm looking forward to just how strong Rick becomes before the competition takes place. I wonder if he will be stronger than the dog when it happens lol.

Sarah Lin

I won't give too much information about the pros and cons, but one major advantage is how rapidly they can grow. Traditional cores need to be based in a person's foundations, whereas the spheres are free of those limitations.

Cteatus

You know, if I were Qing Shan, and I were really suspicious of Horatio and his training methods, and this kid comes up and tells me that that his training methods involved a relatively addictive P.E.D., and that he wants me to send some to his friend to investigate it, I might also throw in a few pills and ingredients to further that friends education on drug making so as to allow her to maybe come up with a way to mitigate the worst of Formula T.

GoodOldChap

so what’s the advantage of the spheres over traditional cores?

Sarah Lin

This is a world where doping is essentially mandatory to compete in the Olympics. There are a few things that aren't permitted (certain exceptionally dangerous techniques, for example) but scandals are more likely to be along the lines of match fixing or outside fighting.

Runcible Technician

So Rick is literally doping to compete in the olympics? With all the crazy stuff in their world, do they even have scandals about that kind of thing?

Pete

"when he obviously has such strong feelings for her. " In stories it can be hard to tell because many like making the MCs super ignorant of their own feelings, but I don't think Rick feelings for her are particularly strong. He likes her and finds her attractive for sure and would likely date her if she asked but it is not like he is head over heels for her. At least it reads like that for me.

Michael son of Jacob

Slow burn indeed! 😄 I enjoy seeing Rick becoming more self-aware. Got teary eyed with the final couple lines in chapter 21 about the puppy.

Alexander Dupree

As much as I agree with you I don't think many people have that level of self awareness and even if they do it comes and goes. I guess I'm just saying "why make things harder than they need to be?"

Michael son of Jacob

100%, Desertopa. The red flag, Alex, would be if she talked with Rick about problems in her relationship with Nathan, whilst seeing Rick in some romantic light, and vice versa. That can be dangerous without some self awareness and boundaries, but Lisa was good to pick up on it early and cut that thread. Otherwise, long conversations with opposite sex friends are perfectly okay and if someone tells you otherwise, that advice is coming from a place of insecurity.

Alexander Dupree

Yeah it's a flag. I don't think that putting yourself in a position where you're conflicted that much is good for anything though. Also we don't know how much he cared or if it was just a question that had connotations implying that something was suspicious. If my girlfriend were receiving expensive gifts from an acknowledged crush I'd at least ask what was going on. Not out of jealousy but simply because I'd rather not waste my time on a relationship I'm not going to succeed in.

Desertopa

Not everyone is so jealous or insecure in their relationships. Admittedly, if Lisa were going to stay together with Nathan, narratively, he'd probably have much more invested in him as a character, but it's not like relationships don't regularly survive participants remaining in close contact with opposite sex friends, including in many cases ones they have romantic history with (which really, Rick and Lisa don't.) Honestly, I'd have a hard time seeing any relationship that plagued by jealousy as a healthy one, and if anything, Nathan's insecurity here looks like a flag for the relationship being destined for an early end.

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters. They shouldn't be talking that much unless she's planning on breaking things off with Nathan. It's pretty funny that the Chinese made it so much worse in the best way possible. Man relationships are crazy hard. Rick is stringing himself along by trying to just be friends with her when he obviously has such strong feelings for her.


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