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The Weirkey Chronicles: Chapters 21-23

🕑 Added 2020-10-20 22:42:00 +0000 UTC

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Sarah Lin

Theo does think about taking an easy win, but it's possible that the strategy on Famaj's side could use a tweak. The main thing is that he was only confident in himself, not so much in his two remaining allies, so he wanted to arrange a forfeit for one of them. But if it still comes off like a tactical error on his part... I might be okay with that. Famaj isn't a tactical genius.

Anton Lupanov

That was me short-circuiting and counting third Fiyu match as a loss. It is 7-2 either way. But why would they want to avoid using their last (well, second-to-last) fight on the weak opponent if it is guaranteed win? I mean, there is 3 matches remaining, they can fight in 2 and automatically forfeit the last one. If the opponent offers them a free win (by using a weak fighter instead of a strong one), why not take it? It actually looks like a tactical mistake on Famaj's part. Suppose Javes didn't came. Theo or Fiyu would smash his weak fighter in round 7, then one of them would fight with him or his remaining strong contestant in the 8th match. Then he auto-wins 9th with one strong fighter (either himself, or Fiyu's canonical 3rd opponent) never participating. This strategy nets him one automatic loss (7th round), one real fight (8th) and one automatic win (9th). If he used himself and the remaining strong fighter in 7th and 8th he would get 2 real fights (7th and 8th) and an automatic win in the 9th, without guaranteed losses.

Sarah Lin

It's been a while since I wrote this, so it's possible I've made an error, but I can explain my thoughts. They end the match 7-2, right? Who's the third loss you're counting? But yes, Javes forfeiting doesn't change their record in the end, just rearranges it. Famaj was holding himself back to target Fiyu or Theo, and they had enough people to avoid sending him out first. We know the outcomes are the same, but the characters don't, so it was helpful to avoid using their last fight on the weakest opponent.

Anton Lupanov

I'm kinda confused about the event structure. By the time the poisoned dude came out to fight, Theo's team was in the lead 5-1 (Theo 2-0, Fiyu 2-0, Nauda 1-1). With 9 matches in total, even if they forfeited all the remaining ones, they would end with a winning record of 5-4. Since their opponent in a 7th round was a weak soulcrafter, Fiyu would likely won against him. Then with Theo's third victory and the forfeiture of the 9th match they would end up with 7-2 record (even better than canonical 6-3). So yeah, I don't understand what Theo was so worried about and how Javes helped. Do you automatically lose the whole event if you run out of fighters? Even then it would make more tactical sense to send Javes against a strong fighter, since he was going to lose anyway.

Perhaps a sentient spear would be a good weapon for him :-)

Sarah Lin

Haha.

Pete

HIs enemies are lucky he hasn't yet mastered the true endgoal of an internal blackhole https://images.app.goo.gl/SQyJBVxFQHdZKyvL9

Novice Reader

I also recently became a patreon . I love the concept and would be willing to support more authors if someone could point me in the direction of more cool stories.

Sarah Lin

Yes, you'll definitely see some of that. I'm going to try to avoid introducing pure mystery aspects of black holes, but I have some ideas for various scientific concepts that I think are fun.

Denis Schreiner

Been thinking. I suppose from the time the Core reaches a certain amount of mass concepts such as time and space start becoming more and more relevant? Certain understanding on Theos side provided using Phenomena such as Event Horizon doesn't seem that far fetched. Then again, since Black Holes are unexplored af you can pull a lot of BS with that, provided you can convince your soul it's fine.

Denis Schreiner

From Champion of the Light to Cynical Trash-Compactor wat

Denis Schreiner

lmao same

Sarah Lin

Expect him to throw a lot of stuff in there! Most soulcrafters need special rooms or techniques, but his singularity handles waste pretty well.

Sarah Lin

Thanks for your support! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. ^-^

Sarah Lin

In most models, yes, you'd need to create a channel to the second floor. You can't just keep channeling it higher and higher, but blueprints vary in how they deal with that. For example, you could have a new type of generation chamber on every floor. There are absolutely limits to just increasing metaphysical mass, so look forward to the singularity growing slowly over time.

Sarah Lin

It'll be a slow progression over time, but I have a lot of neat gravity techniques in mind for the future! You aren't the first person to request a floorplan, which is more enthusiasm than I expected. I won't rule it out.

Sarah Lin

Though I don't want Theo to be a weapon user overall, you're right that there's potential there.

Glaurung

I imagine that Theo's "black hole" will be useful for dealing with waste souldcrafting material. I don't know how much waste is an issue with soulcrafting but I can imagine it is at least a minor problem. He could sweep up anything left over from a project and dump it into he core probably generating a small amount of cantae.

Matt M

If Theo was going to use a weapon i was thinking a Chain-Sickle would be incredible with his gravity ability, being able to restrict an opponent with the chain and strike with the weighted end from range with its enhanced density. "Also, the weapon is said to have the highest mortality rate of any and all weapons of its time." Eg: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kusarigama

MaliMi

Btw, the double chapter worked. Just became a patreon.

Guilty343

Thanks for the chapters! If I'm understanding soul architecture so far the roof of the central chamber will need an opening in it to allow the cantae generated into the upper floors? I'm curious to see how Theo's singularity will develop as I assume there is a limit to the amount of metaphysical mass it can gain from lower quality soulcrafting materials.

Timothy Alexander

Nice - very much enjoyed the payoff of gravity powers in this chapter, and pleased the see the RR reception to the new chapters has been good as well. Can't wait to see what other cool gravity techniques you have up your sleeve for the next few rooms! Have you thought any more about potentially including a floorplan? (Might be nice at the end of the book pre ascention...)

Sarah Lin

Haha, using a pair of fields to create a perpetual motion machine wasn't something I'd considered. I don't know if I'd want that as a main power, but count on sling manipulation at some point. There's already going to be major use of gravity acceleration in the second book. Time dilation is possible, but I think time travel or mirror universes are elements that shouldn't be introduced into a story casually. As for what Theo is fundamentally doing... his cantae is a force, but the effect it's generating is warped spacetime.

Alexander Dupree

Are you going with gravity is a force or gravity is warped spacetime?

Alexander Dupree

If you're going with spinning blackhole then naked singularities are possible conceptually. Time travel, infinite acceleration, CP inverted spacetime on the other side as a mirror universe. Free antimatter by feeding matter in and bringing it out with a backwards facing time vector allows him to annihilate mass though he'd instantly turn the air into essentially a nuclear bomb so maybe that's a bad idea.

Alexander Dupree

It would be crazy dangerous but he could use a flail by making it spin super fast. Just put a heavy gravity zone on the down stroke side and then give it a couple of swings. It would accelerate basically forever. Could use it with a sling to shoot rocks at hundreds of miles an hour.

Sarah Lin

Theo's aerial mobility is very limited, so while he has that capacity, he'd be cautious about using it. But yes, there are a few other ways he can use his gravitational fields, and you'll see more of them in this and following books.

GoodOldChap

Well Theo technically has another trick or two since he hasn’t used his technique on himself yet, since he should be able to use it to move faster+jump higher (can he almost fly now but not really!?!? I mean he just has to zero g jump and up up and away (not that he would be able to turn)) plus’s he might be able to use it to enhance some strikes by making his weapon or body heavier (as long as he’s striking downward

Alexander Dupree

Haha I've celebrated that way many times.

Dan -

Aha! I was not expecting the reversed gravity bit at the end. I know I should have expected manipulation in the other direction, but I didn't consider it while reading.

crusaderstar

Great chapters! I got It's Always Sunny vibes: Fiyu-what are you doing? Theo-I'M CULTIVATING MASS

Zoe Weinstein

Thanks for the chapter. I love the potential behind gravity powers!


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