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The Weirkey Chronicles: Chapters 28-30

🕑 Added 2020-11-11 03:09:38 +0000 UTC

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Melting Sky

Nanjuma seems like a legitimately good person. My guess is without any sort of conclusive evidence he was loath to throw someone like Theo under the bus. From Nanjuma's perspective Theo looks to be quite kind hearted and heroic since he warned him about the possible theft, saved a dying student's life and directly tried to stop Magnafor's betrayal.

Sarah Lin

He soulcrafted the ability after the first round of the tournament, but you're the second person to feel like that development was too sudden, so I'll be adding a little more to make it clear.

Sarah Lin

He's dead as dead can be, but yes, you'll learn more about how the extra chances work.

Nasser

Thanks this was a fun ride! though i have to ask just in case i missed it, but did he ever give any hints that he can use to fields at once? as it feels too sudden for Theo to be able to do that.

Joseph

Weirdly kinda hoping Magnafor survived. He was on his third or more chance and had a way to keep trying so its not impossible he might be able to start again sometime later in the series Also will we ever learn how he got the extra chances?

Sarah Lin

Thanks for giving your detailed thoughts! You've exactly captured what I was going for with Magnafor and this twist ending. ^-^ I intended it to bookend the first novel, with Vistgil killing him personally in the prologue and this indifferent trap at the end.

Sarah Lin

Yeah, one of my aims with this series was plot hooks galore...

Sarah Lin

That's reasonable. I wasn't planning on doing another full pass on this one, but I'll look into it.

Melting Sky

Pretty good twist. From early on I figured Magnafor was going to serve as the dark example of what Theo could have become if he lost hold of his moral compass. Since about the story's halfway point I thought Magnafor would greedily throw morals and caution to the wind and go after the vault, burning bridges and causing a lot of collateral harm. Although Theo would try to stop or subvert his attempt, he would fail. The authorities would be tipped off and stop Magnafor's raid and then reward Theo with some materials from the vault for his help. I was pretty close, but I really like that rather than getting a happy go lucky vanilla ending where the hero is rewarded for overcoming his own demons and doing the right thing, instead we see him barely escaping by the skin of his teeth when the hammer fell. Rather than being treated as a hero we see him end up on the run, his only reward for staying true to his heart was that he didn't share Magnafor's fate and he has earned some good companions. The fact that the powers that be in these worlds seem to know of people like Theo and are actively trying to weed them out is terrifying. The one flaw almost all paranoid delusions share is that the grand conspiracies you perceive and fear tend to entirely revolve around you and the simple truth of the matter is you aren't important enough for anyone one to bother with going to such effort. It must be horrifying to have your greatest fears confirmed by watching somebody step in a honey trap made for people just like you, and then watch them cease to exist as a hole in existence the size of a skyscraper tears into the world around them. Theo is up the **** creek without a paddle and the canoe is on fire.

Runcible Technician

This has been a fantastic read! Now that I've re-read it I realize who Theo reminded me of. It was the character Raimi Matthews from the Broken Saints webseries. So bitter, but such a good person.

MaliMi

So many questions... Thanks for the chapter.

Timothy Alexander

Theo speaks about his plans for two fields at once and a defensive room (I want more details on what that one is like!) at the start of chapter 25, but it might be worth editing in a sentence in the opening scenes of chapter 26, where they talk about what they have successfully crafted before the match, to let us know he actually followed through/succeeded.

Glaurung

I'm excited to see more of this series. This definitely felt faster paced but I don't feel the world build or characters suffered for it so great job there.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapters!

Sarah Lin

You don't have all the information about that yet, but it's definitely possible for them to die permanently. Nanjuma is uncertain about Theo and decided not to mention him.

Sarah Lin

Well, now I'm worried that there's a missing chapter or something. But he should have been limited to one field during his first fights, then upgraded the chamber before the second match that set off the finale.

GoodOldChap

So does Magnafor just get sent back to earth, is it possible for people from earth to die permanently? Also did Nanjuma just cover for Theo or did he not know he wasn’t from the nine?

AnotherWord

Did we see Theo gain the ability to generate multiple fields at once? He considered it in a previous chapter, but he seems to have had a significant upgrade in these chapters.

Alexander Dupree

Oh no

Alexander Dupree

Was there a skipped chapter? They were running through the desert then in the city already.

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters


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