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Archcrafter: Chapters 28-30 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2021-05-22 17:58:03 +0000 UTC

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Cameron C

This is such a huge character growth chapter. For all of them. Fiyu grabbing the hands of our companions because she might be dying.

Sarah Lin

This is subtle foreshadowing that Theo is going to turn into Michael Jackson. (Fixed!)

Runcible Technician

You can feel the narrative pressure building with the ticking clock. This is good stuff.

Good.T

Theo and Nauda's interaction seems like those typical dad and mom from movies.

Nandan

Good chapters... and nice progress. I really liked that Fiyu could relax her aversion to touch, if only for a short time and in extreme circumstances. You got a doubled "he" in the last sentence: "but he he tightened his fingers around it".

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters.


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