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Two Random Covers

🕑 Added 2021-06-06 18:48:51 +0000 UTC
Two Random Covers
Two Random Covers

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Sarah Lin

Thanks for the feedback. I haven't mentioned it on Patreon, but I'm probably going with an edited version of the locket.

Robin

The deer like image looks like it has a huge nose when viewed from a distance due to not seeing the 3d aspect of the image. The locket seems thematically disjointed.

River furlow

I like the image with the locket and pencil. It looks really nice and is fitting.

Sarah Lin

Thanks for the feedback!

Lamsey

The locket looks good visually, but I don't see any link between it and the story, unless it represents a Weirkey which we haven't yet encountered in the released books/chapters. If it is intended to represent a Weirkey, then it might be better to replace the sword symbol with a representation of a fancy key (this would be a shame, though, since the artist's done a good job with the sword). The blueprints in the background do look good and are thematically appropriate. I think the Rainhorn cover is attractive enough, but not very distinctive. It'd perhaps be better if it looked like an actual Rainhorn head (i.e. with an iridescent coat rather than the abstract crystal-like appearance), mounted on the walls of a soulhome. To avoid the rainbow coloration making it look too cartoonish or childish, perhaps the fur could have an oil-slick sort of sheen to it rather than bright rainbow colours.

Rageflare

The locket one has a very visually appealing art style. I like it quite a lot. Notice the light and shadow play along with the grainy wood texture. Talented artist.

Jeff Kabat

You can always update the covers later.

Sarah Lin

Thanks to you and everyone else for offering feedback!

Good.T

I like the locket.... but why sword?

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Cameron C

I think the locket is very cool.

Luke

Locket definitely draws my eye

Alexander Dupree

BTW been losing sleep reading The brightest shadow.

Alexander Dupree

One hundred percent the locket.

I definitely prefer the one with the locket as well.

Chase128

I like the one with the locket and drawings, it definitely draws the eye well and would make me curious. I would be more likely to randomly click it while scrolling through recommended books. The mounted head one feels a bit too simple / is less visually interesting?


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