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Archcrafter: Chapters 39-40 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2021-06-19 16:59:02 +0000 UTC

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Sarah Lin

Haha, I remember that SMBC. ^-^ I'm glad that you enjoyed this book!

Sarah Lin

I meant that to illustrate the difference between a medium-sized city that's nowhere important and a big hub city between worlds like Norro Yorthin. Rulers are on top of the hierarchy in many lesser regions.

Runcible Technician

It was funny to see that Asaire's gimmick was 'move fast, throw lightsaber' . Theo's move at the end was great, it reminded me of a comic by SMBC about the girl that can make puppies appear from anywhere and the next panel shows puppies exploding out of a criminal in a shower of gore. This has been a great book, I can't wait to see whats next.

Good.T

It still surprises me that head of Armeau family isn't an Authority at the least.

JKincaid

I mean, Theo spent a long time working on those moves, and he seemed to grasp what it would take to prevail, he wasn't fully ready for Esaire's traps, but on the other hand, Esaire really didn't see his trap coming at all. I definitely think there is more to the Teraeves situation. That explanation didn't really fit with what the Armeaus did. They didn't chase Theo to a completely different world and expend so much effort to kill him just because of forbidden knowledge, especially when Theo was long gone from their world.

Sarah Lin

That was exactly the sort of climax I was aiming for, so I'm glad to hear it was appreciated. ^-^

Sarah Lin

There is a lot of stuff going on, and I can only say that I hope it will be satisfying when it's ultimately revealed. These first three books kept the story somewhat contained, since I felt like the Nine Worlds were enough for readers to absorb, but the world will begin to open up in the next set. You'll learn more about the state of high end soulcrafters in the fourth book already.

Sarah Lin

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! I agree it would have been more balanced with Fiyu, but couldn't fit her in. Don't worry, she'll have plenty of POV sections in the next two books.

Alexander Dupree

If there is some kind of informational sanity required I guess I could see that. I'm not completely convinced though.

Rageflare

Loved this chapter and the fight. There was no sudden twist or Deus-ex-machina allowing Theo to prevail vs a ruler. Instead it was a culmination of months long planning and hard work allowing him to win. I absolutely loved it. Great pay-off for the book and very cathartic.

Alexander Dupree

From a stand point of false positives, what about killing a bunch of random people for looking into a story about an old family that died out? Same with the landguard plan but they at least have a vague justification of protecting their assets though erasing someone from existence for being greedy isn't really a proportional punishment in light of their culture.

Desertopa

I don't know what direction the story is intended to take, but it seems to me that this would make sense if the goal is not simply to lay traps for people from the outside, but to keep ordinary citizens from being aware of worlds outside the Nine. Arceon is fairly powerful and influential by the standards of the setting, but he doesn't seem to be aware of worlds outside the Nine himself, although he's aware of history that interacts with them. And neither do the Authorities we've encountered so far show signs of being aware. If people in their position aren't aware, Vistgil and whoever he's associated with are probably trying to keep it that way. Anything which would make that information too accessible would probably run counter to their purposes.

Mountainking

Probably because you would too many false positives. Most people don't know the culture of the people on the other side of their planet, so they definitely don't know the culture of the eight worlds.

Timothy Alexander

Awesome ending and amazing arc. Absolutely hyped for book four as well!

Pete

Huh interesting (the family getting killed). I guess it makes sense as a trap but is rather high effort. My guess is that there is more to it, maybe the family was snooping around after losing a member and discovered too much?

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters. Cool trick with the traps and combined power. Interesting trap with that family in his past as a contingency against his return. I'm still a bit lost on the larger perspective it seems like there are powerful people who are aware of the larger universe but low level people aren't aware of anything happening. The land guards ( or whatever their name was) were looking for people coming in from the outside but there isn't a history of propaganda that would allow regular people to help out. Why set up elaborate traps when you can just make it impossible to blend in and have the public report unusual new people?

Cameron C

This is absolutely a great culmination to the arc. The explanation adds mystique and the characters interactions are super fleshed out. I think that a Fiyu perspective in this chapter would have been nice, but it feels like a pretty tight read, so I’m not sure how you would have fit it. Love this story.

Alexander Dupree

Woo-hoo more story.


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