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Rainhorn: Chapters 16-18 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2021-01-02 22:52:03 +0000 UTC

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Robin Richards

Absolutely Theorycrafting is fun. The harder Theo has to sweat the details, the more details we see. We'll get more information about remodeling if he decides to more his Mass or Anti Mass room for thematic balance for instance. The different character perspectives are also interesting. Theo vs Nuada for instance feels like Plan vs Discovery writing. Nuada definitely knows enough about soulcrafting to not make any obvious errors but she's on the high wire now in terms of what she adds. Theo has a strong blueprint and he might move a few things around, while figuring out the details but he knows what the end result is going to look like. Nuada not so much. Fiyu is kind of in the middle. She has a strong blueprint but it isn't hers, until she figures out how to make it hers she's going to be making slow progress.

Sarah Lin

Thanks, hope you continue to enjoy it!

Axim

This has quickly become my favorite new series. Thank you!

Imp

Thanks for the chapter!! Hmmm.... anti-mass? Huh. Is that the same thing as negative mass, ala theoretical physics? Personally, if I was Theo, I'd probably have gone full on psychic at this point. One tech room for the actual force of gravity, one for bending space, one for bending time, and one for the psychological impact of seeing yourself as an emotional black hole. I'd use that repelling and attracting stones as a basis for space, and use them to make a shield effect.

Luis Costa

Theorycrafting is half the fun. Having Theo with an exotic unexpected "build" is a great way to give the reader a feel for the process. Having the parties different perspectives side-by-side is pretty cool too. I especially like Nauda's take this chapter - it's less utilitarian and more communicative(?). A Tatian and a definitely NOT Tatian split seem pretty faithful to Nauda's combative nature while still respecting her Tatian roots and sense of community.

Robin Richards

I understand that Theo has a bunch of work to do, but I think that even if you gave him all the materials he wanted he would need to spend some time just figuring out how to make his technique rooms work not just doing the work of putting the rooms together.

Sarah Lin

You're correct about Fiyu: she's very attached to the plan her relative gave, and not moving forward. She's on track to have an extremely refined first floor, but she could reach Archcrafter if she wasn't so hesitant. Theo, on the other hand, still has tons to do. His blueprint does get stronger as higher floors are involved, but it will have some new capacities within this book.

Robin Richards

I think Theo's major problem is his choice of power. Now, don't get me wrong he's resource constricted too which is limiting what he can try but I get the feeling gravity soulcrafters are virtually non-existent. As a result Theo has to work out the what powers a gravity crafter can have and how you design rooms and chambers to get those powers. If he were working with fire or ice or lightning, which I assume are more fully explored powers, it would be just a matter of figuring out what individual powers he wants and which room design for a given power best resonated with his soul and available materials. Fiyu, I think is still trapped in her original paradigm, and hasn't figured out how to move forward on her own. She's working on it, the addition of the mirror panels to her stealth technique is a step in the right direction. I think once she escapes thinking about her soulhome in terms of her relatives design, she'll start filling out her rooms using the materials available to her and be able to move forward.

JKincaid

It feels a bit like both Theo and Fiyu have hit walls with their crafting. They both don't seem to be making a ton of progress. Theo seems to have ideas, but nothing that will actually benefit him at all until he becomes an Archcrafter, and yet he doesn't seem to be getting anywhere close to that. Fiyu seems to be prolonging her crafting, doing small gestures that perhaps help her foundation, but nothing seems to be available for her to actually make much progress. She also seems to be totally reliant on her relative for progress, and with him not around he's in a holding pattern so to speak. Maybe the silk would be useful for her as a replacement to the spider silk? Though it seems like it's going to take something big to get them any materials she might actually use to strengthen her techniques.

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters awesome perspective break down.


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