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Rainhorn: Chapters 19-21 (The Weirkey Chronicles)
🕑 Added 2021-01-09 18:07:15 +0000 UTCHey, everyone. I hope the start of 2021 is treating you better than it is me. This is a relatively minor issue compared to everything in the world, but could you take a look at the reviews for TWC1 and upvote those you feel are most helpful?
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Pacing a complex series is difficult, and of course I'm not perfect and no pacing will work for anyone. Still, it's a bit frustrating to see issues I'd already written (in the second or third book) get brought up as if I hadn't thought of them. Somebody dropped the story on RoyalRoad because they didn't like some dialogue... and all I could really do was think about the twist I had in mind books down the line revealing why the dialogue was that way. I have some fun revelations set up, but we'll see if people are along for the ride by then.
Anyway, I think this is a somewhat balanced set of chapters. It includes some events that seem minor now, but will be important later (though in this case, just later this book). I hope people enjoy them.
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Chapter 19
Theo tapped his fingers along the top of his tiles, pretending to look over them. In actuality, his combination was worthless, which he'd known from the beginning, and his only goal was to bluff through the round. Around the table, the young nobles whose names he couldn't remember watched him, uncertain how the match will go.
"I'll take the odds." He didn't put any confidence into his voice that could have sounded like bluster, it was just a simple statement. Theo reached out and dropped more Silver Crowns into the pile, then watched his opponent without any expression.
Across the table, the noble of the Evigne family tried to look confident, but his facade was obvious. Theo bided his time by wondering if he had been that obvious when he was young. Most likely he had - on the few occasions when he'd gambled for sublime materials, he'd been fixated on having unbeatable combinations, which made for dramatic finishes, but it was a mathematically unwise strategy overall. Not that bluffing and failing would be good for him, in a Deuxan court.
"Do you really gamble for blood on Fithe?" The noble stared at him a moment longer, then suddenly grinned and knocked his tiles over. "I'm out. You've got to be cheating, Bartolo."
Here, that was essentially a compliment. Theo carelessly turned his tiles face down and placed them with the others, hiding the fact that he'd had absolutely nothing. He was glad to sweep the pile of winnings over to his side, but didn't feel particularly satisfied about it: playing against children might as well be rigged odds.
But he had no interest in games, just in the benefits. The money he'd earned gambling was a pittance compared to the information he'd learned about the upcoming hunt, notably common strategies and the limits of the rainhorn region. Perhaps more importantly, he'd learned that a few lesser noble houses without good hunters were desperate to buy antlers to improve their standing, which could be exploited when the contest began.
He needed to relocate throughout the city, though, or he'd attract too much attention. So long as he didn't win too much or make a name for himself, he could increase their earnings in the evenings and pick up a few more sublime emblems. Better than nothing, and since Nauda and Fiyu were deep in their own soulcrafting, he had nothing better to do.
It worked out well, so long as Senka didn't manage to tag along. The one time she had done so, she'd gone out of her way to make the night a living hell.
They tried to get him to stay and play a while longer, but Theo made excuses and bowed out. He wasn't only planning to gamble, he also intended to visit the court library. A heavy pack of family emblems hung in one coat pocket, which he hoped would be enough. It would have been nice if he'd managed to get someone to bet a major sublime material or armament, but this would do.
After moving through one of the upper markets to shake potential tails, Theo headed to the court library. Deuxan might not value learning, at least not compared to Arbai or Siata, but he'd learned that they did have a library not controlled by any single house. It was a modest building, befitting its place in society, so he missed it the first time before turning back and buying his way in with the emblems.
Perhaps that would be wasted, but Theo had decided that missing a chance to potentially learn more was a greater risk than giving up a small amount of money and sublime materials. As desperately as he needed power, he had a feeling that he wouldn't be able to win any conflict against his mysterious opponents with strength alone.
"What?" The librarian, a lean man with a soulhome that seemed purely functional, regarded him over finely crafted spectacles. "A foreigner? What is it you want to look up?"
"I don't suppose you use an organizational system either."
"This is the Anguedan court library, not some trivial bookstore. If I don't know the location of what you want to know, then it doesn't exist here."
He hadn't really expected better, but Theo still sighed and accepted it. "I need to know any information you have about a noble family from another court, possibly another continent. They were the ai Teraeves family... a small family, but known for their powerful soulcrafters about 110 years ago."
"That name sounds more mythological to me than anything. We certainly don't have anything current that mentions such a name, but let me look into the older books." With that, the librarian retreated into the shelves.
Alone, Theo noted that the opening chamber of this library was set up even more hostilely than the one in Nlukoko. He could easily have vaulted the fence of desks, but on the other side he could see that the shelves were a mess, probably ordered by date of acquisition instead of anything sensible. At least relying on the librarian would get him a result faster than searching himself.
The fact that the name sounded mythological didn't really surprise him. Brigana ai Teraeves had said her family was ancient and simply down on its luck in recent times. If she had lived... Theo took a deep breath, still trying to come to grips with the fact that Brigana was almost certainly dead. If she had lived, she might have turned her family's fortunes around, but it seemed that they had passed from history altogether.
"I didn't expect to see you here." Esaire's voice came from the door and he turned to see the Armeau family noble step into the library with a grin. "Imagine my shock, finding you in the location where I tracked you."
"No entourage of supporters this time?" Theo didn't think the noble would attack in the court library, so he adopted a different sort of bluff. "Either you're feeling much more confident or you aren't here for a duel today."
"I'm just curious why you're here. What exactly are you looking for, and what use would an outsider have for obscure Deuxan knowledge?"
"I have some outdated texts about Deuxan. If I can figure them out, I might be able to uncover an ancient cache of sublime materials." That was actually partially truth, given that he'd left some things near Brigana's family home, and Esaire seemed to hear the honesty. After a moment's hesitation, he only shrugged.
"Are you sure you wouldn't accept an alliance with us? The Anguedan court has some influence with much larger courts, you know, so if you did our family a substantial enough favor, we could track down... whatever it is you seek."
"Perhaps another time." There was no safe way to refuse, so Theo just approached it directly.
He saw a frown flicker across the young noble's face, but before he could find something to say, the librarian emerged. "No record of the Teraeves family, but-" He cut off as he saw Esaire, who promptly waved him on.
"Oh, don't mind me," Esaire said. "What invaluable information have you discovered for our friend?"
"Well... there's absolutely nothing about them in any of the court documents we have here, which include a great many international agreements. One reference to a similar name, but it was over a thousand years old and a different form. Is it possible that you misread the family name?"
"Not likely." Though he could have pushed, on some level Theo believed it. He was far from where he'd last been on Deuxan and over a century had passed, so he didn't really expect to find valuable information. That didn't mean he couldn't try. "Thank you for your time."
The librarian promptly turned away, perhaps to return to his work or perhaps getting out of the way of a potential conflict between combat soulcrafters. Esaire started to follow Theo as they left the library, but stopped on the walkway outside and folded his arms.
"That's all? I was expecting something more scandalous, I have to admit."
"I'm not an interesting man." Theo regarded him with the neutral expression he'd used not so long ago. "If you'll excuse me, I have some mundane tasks to perform."
As he left, Esaire actually did seem disappointed, and Theo almost hoped that the young noble had grown bored with him. Theo didn't see any advantage in pursing that conflict, so he'd hope so. At the very least, he got away from the court without any trouble that day.
That had been the best he could do. If he really wanted to track down his old memories, he needed to find a Deuxan weirkey, and using one of those meant becoming at least an Authority. That was so far beyond him that Theo set it out of mind: the goal he needed to focus on in the short term was reaching this hub city Nauda had mentioned, which meant a thousand lesser goals along the way.
Still, part of him felt as though those old experiences from his past life were slipping further away...
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Chapter 20
The day the Great Rainhorn Hunt began, the city erupted with celebrations, but Theo had no part in them. For the common people who didn't care about court politics, it was a joyous day filled with feasting, then preparing meat and hides for the coming year. Some among the noble families celebrated, but everyone who intended to participate in the hunt could only prepare.
All the worthiest soulcrafters of the noble families lined up outside the city, eyeing one another, making wagers and promises of future duels. Their chosen mercenaries prepared as well, shabbier but not necessarily weaker. Many carried sacks or other hunting tools, but others carried only weapons.
At least, that was how it looked from so far away.
Theo and the others sat far outside the city, away from the starting line. He'd received an invitation from Esaire to join the other Armeau mercenaries, giving them an enviable position near the front of the line, but he judged that would be a mistake. Not appearing among the others would make them lose respect, but he didn't care about that, and he suspected that the line was not the ideal position.
A great horn sounded over the plains... and the house Rulers leapt into action. Their elders and greatest warriors might usually sit out conflicts, but for the Great Rainhorn Hunt, they held nothing back. Faster than any of the other soulcrafters could move, they exploded from the city, already hurling techniques at one another and exchanging blows.
"So that's why we're all the way out here." Nauda shielded her eyes and stared out at the expanding conflict. "It looks like they're trying to establish zones of control so their families can hunt in peace."
"Exactly." Theo finally stood up and stretched. "But it will take a long time for that to work out, and in the meantime they'll scare away a lot of the rainhorns. We can't fight Rulers, so we might as well begin on the hinterlands while everyone else is still fighting."
They headed into a far edge of the forested region, clad in Fiyu's stealth technique. Though information about hunting the rainhorns was hotly contested, the basic terms of the contest gave him quite a few answers. Breaking the antlers significantly reduced their efficacy as sublime materials, and kills wouldn't be accepted if the bodies or hides were too damaged. That meant no one would be blowing the rainhorns apart, requiring a much more limited set of strategies.
Of course, they didn't run across a rainhorn immediately. They were spread out over a large forest, and if the initial battle pushed them directly into the hinterlands then Deuxans would have used his strategy long ago. Still, they were able to move deep into the forest while the battle for territory was still raging in the distance.
Something rustled in the leaves and they leapt to defensive positions... but it was their first rainhorn, suddenly freezing as it stared at them.
It only froze for a moment, but that was a fatal mistake. Theo cast a gravitational field, tensely prepared to add more if the rainhorn resisted. Instead, it drifted into the air, legs flailing wildly. Sublime beasts could have extremely dangerous cantae in their natural roles, but they were rarely able to apply it flexibly against threats outside their environment. Unsurprisingly, its environment didn't include a complete loss of gravity.
When the rainhorn began to bleat, Fiyu slid up beside it, her dark blade striking the animal in the side of the head. The beast twitched once and then lay still, apparently dying without any great pain. Killing it had been easier and cleaner than he expected, so he walked forward to-
Another rainhorn burst from the foliage, its horns lowered, charging directly at him. Theo desperately cast a gravitational field, but he couldn't stop the beast's momentum and it sailed directly toward him, sharp horns gleaming...
He threw himself back just before it hit... and the rainhorn abruptly froze in midair. Nauda stood a short distance away, her staff raised to bind it in place. The beast's eyes bulged and its muscles flexed against her cantae, but it couldn't overcome an Archcrafter technique.
Though shaken by the experience, Fiyu soon moved to kill the second rainhorn mercifully as well. Theo got back up and brushed himself off, wishing that he had developed his techniques to the point where he could apply gravity more flexibly. Still, he couldn't be disappointed by their first hunt, considering that they'd already taken down two of their quarry.
"Is this a mated pair?" Nauda pulled one of the floating bodies over with her staff and examined them before she bound the two together. "This one has antlers, but the second one just has a single set of horns. Are they worth any different?"
"They both have their uses, so the reward money doesn't discriminate. Larger antlers or horns are worth a bit more as sublime materials, but they all have equal value for the houses. Anything that's old enough to have mature antlers is a valid target."
"I am sorry that we must end their lives for a mere contest," Fiyu said.
"Don't be." Nauda finished binding the bodies, carefully but not reverently. "They eat the villagers' food and, because no one is allowed to do anything to them, they're a menace. It would be better if they managed the population throughout the year instead of having these dramatic hunts, but they need to be kept under control."
"It is still sad. Are there young rainhorns at this time of year?"
Theo didn't think so, but he also didn't particularly care. It was just as well that Fiyu killed them painlessly, but there were too many evils in the world for him to get worked up over a few animals. In fact, all he really felt was a sense of satisfaction that they had already acquired two rainhorns. Even if the hunting grew more difficult over time, they were off to a good start.
After some time, they managed to ambush a third, drinking at a pool far away... but not far enough to be outside his range. That one had an extraordinarily large set of antlers, enough that he considered keeping them if they could afford it. Unfortunately, after the third they failed to locate any others, despite ranging widely and not yet encountering any of the other hunters.
Wondering if the other rainhorns could smell the blood from the bodies floating behind him, Theo decided that they should return to get rid of them and confirm their participation in the hunt. Since the others agreed and they didn't want to split up while so many soulcrafters were on the field, they walked back to one of the main paths and headed back toward the city.
He spotted something ahead and immediately prepared another gravitational field, only to pull back as he realized it was a Deuxan sleigh. It raced over the ground faster than a car and he worried that it was going to run them down, but before he needed to react, it swerved to the side, sliding through the air before coming to a halt not far from them.
"Bartolo! You decided to participate after all!" Esaire stood from the front seat, putting one foot up on the side. "You're going to be left behind if you stay on foot, though."
"Think of it as proving my worth to the Armeau family." As they spoke, Theo glanced at the four others in the back seats, noting the nominal Archcrafter from before and three who had soulhomes that gave him an immediate sense of a hunting lodge. It seemed that Esaire was working with skilled hunters, but there was no sign of Delarde or Hauloe.
"Suit yourself. Let's make a little wager: if your group can find even half as many rainhorns as mine, the Armeau family will pay you double their value. What do you say?"
"And if we don't?"
"We buy them at normal price... and you duel with me." Esaire cast him a careful look that made Theo wonder if he suspected their last encounter had been a bluff. At the moment, all his best options were bluffs, so he responded noncommittally.
"We'll see who hunts the most, then."
Esaire snorted and sat back down, touching something hidden beneath the wooden paneling. A moment later the sleigh floated away through the trees, utterly silent even as it accelerated back to full speed. Theo watched after it, considering. Other noble families would no doubt have their own vehicles, which would let them run down some rainhorns far faster than he could. If they wanted to compete, they needed to hunt in the deeper forests, where the rainhorns would be driven by all the other hunters.
For the moment, he thought it best to get credit for their first hunt. As they continued walking back, they saw other hunters just now emerging from the city, who simply glowered jealously at them. After they had traveled in silence for some time, Fiyu spoke up.
"That was a well-constructed sleigh. Considerable speed, a sublime binding, and moderate defenses built into the base. I... do not think that we can afford such a thing."
"More importantly," Nauda said, "how many people do you think it could carry?"
"I believe the flight materials are more than strong enough, so the question is space. It could hold four normal people, eight Deuxans, or twelve Tatians."
Nauda looked over at her sharply and Fiyu only smiled back, leaving it entirely uncertain if she had been joking. Theo chose to laugh and gestured for them all to start running. Their first gambit had been successful, but the hunt would continue for days. Time for the second gambit.
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Chapter 21
By the third day, the three of them had rainhorn hunting down to an art. Maybe not as proficient as the experienced Deuxan hunters, but their group had Fiyu's stealth and two immobilization techniques. Other groups tried to use soulcrafting to their advantage as well, but they often ended up using it to fight rival families, leaving Theo's team to continue hunting around them.
The first day they caught five rainhorns, then eight on the second day. So far the third day they had only found one, despite the sun reaching its zenith overhead, but Theo was leading them further away from the city, to a region he hoped hadn't been thoroughly hunted. Judging from rumors in the city, the hunt that year was more intense than usual, so many feared that the court would call it off sooner to preserve the rainhorn population.
Fortunately, it didn't really matter. They had sold the rainhorns not to the Armeau family, but to the mercantile family he'd heard about during his gambling sessions. Of all the false rumors, that one proved correct: the family was desperate to use its wealth to achieve greater prominence. The prices had been so good that they had 1400 Silver Crowns, even though they'd held back the two best sets of antlers for their own soulcrafting.
Normally he would have guided them on a broader arc that took several days, but the rules forbade hunting during the night. Though some bent those rules, he didn't think they should take that risk. How zealously the "daylight only" restriction was enforced depended on what bribes you could afford and which families were involved. Everyone became sticklers for fairness when those standards were applied against their opponents, and their group had little defense against such court politics.
They had reached a bronze plain on the other side of the forest by the time they spotted another rainhorn. When Theo attempted to cast a gravitational field over it, the beast leapt away with preternatural awareness. If it had been him alone, it would have escaped over the grasses, but Nauda threw herself after it, briefly outpacing the beast before getting close enough to bind it in place with her staff.
While Fiyu caught up with them, Theo walked beside the struggling rainhorn, extending his senses toward it. Instead of a true soulhome, it contained a naturalistic expanse within itself. This one was a fragment of a forest, several of the trees bent together into a strange structure that bound some cantae.
When he'd first visited the Nine, he'd assumed that sublime beasts must have tiers similar to humans. Instead of building upward, they grew out, with more dangerous sublime beasts having soulhomes that were rings within rings. They tended to be uneven as well: the rainhorn had senses comparable to an Archcrafter, but their strength was barely first tier, and they had no cantae defenses to speak of. Clearly a prey animal, if a majestic one.
"Could we eat any of the rainhorn meat?" Fiyu wiped off her hand once she finished the beast, though he didn't notice any blood on her skin. "If we are to kill these creatures, I would feel more comfortable if I at least partook of their sacrifice."
"The villagers will eat it all, but I understand." Nauda set to binding the body with the other they had captured earlier that day. "It isn't much of a sublime material, but it might be worth tasting."
"I would like to store more sublime foods. There was little meat on Tatian, so I think more diversity would help me."
"Everyone assumes that, but I've seen soulcrafters who ate nothing but sublime vegetables."
The two of them began to discuss how best to create a chamber of sublime food, but Theo let their conversation flow through the back of his mind while he instead looked to the horizon. As far as he could tell, there was nothing but grass and lakes in that direction, but could more rainhorns be hiding there? Their hides would seem to stand out in the bronze grass, though if they lowered themselves...
Because he was observing his environment so carefully, Theo noticed the sled plowing toward them. It wasn't as elaborate or expensive as the one Esaire had used, but it had a bulky front that flowed with cantae defenses. Theo hastily gestured to the others and they leapt aside, Fiyu pulling the floating bodies along with her.
Though the sled skidded to a halt, someone leapt from the side while it was still moving, aiming for Fiyu. Theo immediately tried to reverse their gravity, but they burned with cantae to resist it, exactly as Esaire had done.
Fiyu threw herself back in time to avoid his pike smashing into the earth and Theo regained his bearings. The attacker wasn't Esaire, but Delarde - the other Archcrafter had apparently been soulcrafting since their last meeting, or Esaire had taught him the technique rather easily. Several others remained in the sled, including Hauloe but no Archcrafters.
It was clear that Fiyu needed help, but at that moment the sled began moving again, intending to run her down. Theo set a gravitational field in its path and when the levitation sublime materials hit it, the vehicle suddenly flipped end over end. Most of the soulcrafters within went tumbling out over the field, the sled remaining intact but spilling out supplies, including two rainhorn corpses.
Meanwhile, the carnage had separated him from Fiyu, who now dodged away from Delarde's pike. She managed to evade him by retreating, but one of his cuts sliced the line holding the hovering rainhorns, which he grabbed and jerked back toward him.
"Thanks for gathering these for us!" Delarde laughed and pulled the rainhorns to his side, and though Theo tried to send them falling upward, the Archrafter's strength held them down, even against multiplied gravity.
"We hunted those." Though Fiyu's face looked deeply distressed, her hands fell to her sides in her ready position. "You can't take them."
"Don't you know anything?" Delarde laughed again, more to cheer his disrupted allies than out of mirth. "Stealing is an age-old part of the Great Rainhorn Hunt!"
"The rules said that anything you hunted was yours to keep."
He grinned and pulled the rainhorns closer to him. "That's right, and we just hunted these two rainhorns."
"That is unkind." Fiyu's hands began to flicker with cantae, but the Archcrafter didn't consider her a threat, just laughed. This time was in actual amusement, hearing her words as childishness instead of a serious Ichili statement.
"You really have no idea how the world works, do you? The strong take from the weak, that's just a law of nature. My master told me that Ichil was a brutal world, but I'm starting to wonder if she got it wrong."
When Fiyu attempted to launch a hail of light at him, the Archcrafter leapt over it with superior speed, still surrounded by the cantae cloak that made him invulnerable to gravitational manipulation. He had to be burning through most of his cantae stores, but there was nothing Theo could do, and he was swinging his pike overhead...
Nauda caught him in midair with her staff against his stomach. They fell in opposite directions, both landing on their feet. Delarde no longer looked playful, shoving aside the rainhorns and gripping his pike in a proper stance.
"You ascended, huh? You're about to learn the difference between a newborn Archcrafter and one that's actually trained."
While they faced off, Theo noted that the others were pulling back to their feet. Theo immediately cast a gravitational field to lift and drop all of them, but Hauloe landed on her feet, cantae burning around her in that same cloak technique. It seemed that Esaire had been busy, planning for a conflict just like this.
Fiyu remained off to the side, wrapping her arms around herself in a position that looked vulnerable, but was actually gathering and preparing cantae. There was no one around to threaten her, so Theo focused on Hauloe, hitting her with multiple gravitational fields. She didn't fall, but struggled to move forward under the multiplied gravity.
Meanwhile, Nauda and Delarde struck violently, their weapons clashing... and then Nauda's other hand whipped from her side, her broken fork pinning him in place. Delarde sneered, but when he attempted to move, he grimaced. He might have more soulcrafted rooms, but Nauda's binding technique was a powerful one, and now that they both had Archcrafter-tier cantae, he couldn't resist it so easily.
Yet, by virtue of raw cantae alone, he began to struggle forward, raising his pike, still while maintaining the anti-gravitational cloak. Even Nauda looked surprised... just how much cantae did Delarde have?
Hauloe managed to hurl a bolt of cantae at Theo, but he easily dodged aside. She was beginning to struggle as her soulhome emptied, which was more what he would have expected. He'd dismissed Delarde at first, but the Archcrafter's skills were sharp and he seemed to have unreal depths of cantae. Grinning, the Deuxan man began to advance toward Nauda with his pike raised.
A whistle sounded over the field: a whistle warning allies. Theo instantly reversed gravity for himself and Nauda, sending them falling into the sky.
Beneath, Fiyu unleashed a devastating storm of bolts. They tore up the ground and sent many of the lesser soulcrafters tumbling backward along with their sled. Hauloe managed to stand, which might have proved fatal because it meant she absorbed more of the burning hail.
Yet somehow Delarde generated a sphere of cantae that deflected the bolts, then moved to shield Hauloe and the others. He took a step forward, blocking more of Fiyu's bolts, and glared at her until her cantae was exhausted. The field of grass had been devastated, but she had nothing left and he still stood confidently.
"Enough!" Esaire's sleigh emerged from the forest with the young noble standing atop it. Theo hadn't noticed him before, but thought there was roughly zero chance that he had just arrived. He had been observing, and judging from his smile, he'd seen what he wanted. "Well fought, Delarde, but they've defended their claim well enough."
"Hmph. Fine." Delarde jumped over to land in the sleigh, still not showing the slightest weariness. "Keep your two miserable rainhorns."
As the other soulcrafters weakly struggled back to their feet, retrieving their sled and joining the others, Esaire turned to Theo with a smug smile. "You have interesting techniques, soulcrafter."
"Thank you." Theo feigned nonchalance, but he was fairly certain that Esaire had implied that he knew Theo wasn't an Archcrafter. "I thought the Armeau family wanted to buy rainhorns, not steal them."
"Ah, but anything stolen during the great hunt is fairly taken." Esaire folded his arms and smiled more broadly. "Especially when certain hunters seem inclined to sell to others. But tell me, how many has your little group hunted so far?"
"Counting these two, fifteen in total."
For the briefest moment, Esaire's smile twitched to irritation. He said nothing about how many they had gathered, but Theo was willing to bet that it was less than thirty, so he was winning a bet that Esaire had thought would be easy. Though they were outclassed in a fight, Theo thought this was about pride, a theory confirmed when Esaire dropped down into the front seat of his sleigh.
"You're not doing so badly, Bartolo aina Fithe. But I'll let you in on a little secret: tomorrow will be the last day of the hunt. We'll see who's most successful in the end."
With that, he drove the sleigh away, leaving some of his allies to limp after him in their damaged sled. Theo remained alert, just in case there was a further layer of deception, but they truly didn't want to continue the fight. Esaire might be confident in his victory, but if he'd watched the fight, he would know that he'd lose allies in the process, including Hauloe from the Tatian family.
In their absence, Fiyu slumped and sighed without saying anything. Nauda walked back to them, returning her broken fork to her pack. "He looked irritated when you gave the number. I take it he didn't expect us to have managed fifteen?"
"Actually, seventeen." Theo released the gravitational field he'd been holding most of the fight and two more rainhorns dropped from the sky, still bound in the Deuxan group's wrappings. "In all the confusion, it looks like they forgot a few things."
"Clever." Nauda grinned, then went to go retrieve the bodies and join them with the others. Fiyu smiled only briefly before coming alongside him with a somber expression.
"Am I foolish, Theo? Is it really just a game?" When she saw his glance, Fiyu continued. "If taking from others is merely part of the game, then I was wrong to be upset. But I don't think it was fair play. I think he would have taken more if he could."
Theo could only shake his head. "The truth is, all Deuxan society is a bit of a game, in that sense. They take rules like bloodprices very seriously, but all laws are meant to be bent or broken. You made the right decision with your show of strength. This could have gone much worse."
"Especially Esaire." Nauda returned to them bearing all four rainhorns. "I didn't get a perfect look at his soulhome, but it's well-built, and he seems to be a skilled soulcrafter. That aura to resist your techniques isn't some trivial addition: he taught them to soulcraft complex new cornerstones in very little time."
"So that's what it was... but I'm more worried about Delarde. Maybe the two of us together could have exhausted him, but I think I underestimated his soulhome."
"No, you just misunderstood it. I got a much better look while we were fighting, and it isn't what I expected." Nauda gave them both a grim smile and began sketching out a blueprint in the dirt. "He doesn't just have one chamber generating cantae, he has four on each floor. I couldn't get a clear view of all of them, but he had four different sources and at least one chamber dedicated to mixing and distributing all that cantae."
"That would mean he has so few rooms left..." Theo snapped his fingers as the strategy came together for him. "So he's made himself nearly inexhaustible, but he doesn't have anything in reserve. Some of these chambers must be for strength, speed, and so on, based on what we've seen. He might have a pike technique in reserve, but his design is inflexible. He could fight like that forever, but that's all he has."
"If we could hit him without all his defenses, he might go down quickly, but he's never going to run out of cantae. Not in a fight with us, anyway."
Theo and Nauda regarded each other seriously, no obvious solution to the problem presenting itself. Fiyu had stood beside them, listening quietly, but now finally ventured a thought. "Perhaps a better strategy is evasion? They will likely not try something like this again, at least not today. If we hunt enough rainhorns, we can simply leave."
"You're right, Fiyu." Nauda smiled at her warmly, starting to raise a hand and then awkwardly patting Theo instead. "It's a cruel game, but they're still treating it like a game. We just need to play better and avoid them."
That was a good thought to get them back to hunting, so Theo joined the others as they headed further in search of more rainhorns. Internally, however, he wasn't so confident. Esaire had taken the matter personally, and while it was no blood vendetta, he wouldn't let it go so easily.
Comments
Sarah Lin
Yeah, I try to write Nauda has having a few strong perspectives. Glad it was appreciated.
Nasser
Not sure if you did this on purpose but I enjoyed Nauda's outburst regarding the Rainhorns being a menace, it felt more genuine considering she is from an agricultural world.
Imp
Only two horns? At the rate this is going, we shall need for everyone to hit tier 2 archcrafter sooner rather than later.
Sarah Lin
Yeah, I wanted to build some tradeoffs into the system so that getting a look at someone's soulhome gives you useful information about them.
Sarah Lin
Much appreciated!
Sarah Lin
I appreciate your support! It's really hard to say how to deal with these, since every reader's take is valid for them. I appreciate your willingness to compare it to Chronicles of Amber, but I'm a bit uncomfortable making that comparison myself. Overall, however, I hope to improve every aspect of the presentation, and hope the first three books will stand for themselves to some degree.
Spellman - RiahWeston
So we got our first look at a generator-style soulhome. Interesting but expected as there is no limit to how many rooms can generate cantae, only how big your soulhome can be.
Alexander Dupree
Sorry to hear that people are being lame. Thanks for the chapters I already added a review and up voted some
Michael son of Jacob
Wish I had some idea of what to do. Address concerns in the descriptions is the best one so far. Appeal to your past success of navigating complex storylines that span multiple instalments. I think making the comparison to The Chronicles of Amber by Zelazny more explicit may help, actually. The first book of that series ended on a total cliffhanger and we still had barely any idea what was going on, but the series was awesome. "A spiritual successor to the action-packed, thoughtful epic of mystery & fantasy The Chronicles of Amber by Roger Zelazny, Sarah Lin weaves a tightly paced adventure that'll stay with you long after you walk away from the final page. Fortunately, there's much more to come." You can use that as an in-description review if you like.
