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Rainhorn: Chapters 22-24 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2021-01-16 18:16:36 +0000 UTC

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bcdp

I don't really get why they thought they could "waste" time in the city. It's almost as if they were begging for their persuers to catch up. If you could see them on the horizon, you would get out ASAP. If you don't know, where they are, the right assumption is "right behind you". So get essential supplies and then get the fuck out. How much of a lost opportunity the library would be, doesn't really factor in, if you are running for your life.

Anton Lupanov

It was "very ineffective" only because his opponent was an Archcrafter. I'm pretty sure that his technique would perforate a soulcrafter of his own level.

Sarah Lin

Well, I don't know how you'll feel about the culmination of this book, but I aimed for a different tone with each, so the third has the cast in a generally stable situation.

JKincaid

I really hope all the chasing and hiding ends somewhat soon. I feel like Theo has been struggling to make much headway into his crafting this entire book. Part of the problem seems to be that they can’t really focusing on their crafting like they need to. This chapter had a great example, Theo basically half-assed a potentially viable attack technique in one night with a single sublime material, but it was very ineffective because he didn’t have time to really do much with it. Imagine how much better he’d be in these situations if he didn’t have to rush through so much all the time.

Sarah Lin

Derp. Fixed, thanks!

Pete

Also I know what senka's story purpose is, to allow Theo to act like a grumpy old man! (Well not that I think that's her only purpose. ^^)

Pete

"He mentions a city that was founded ten years ago, so it's at least a decade old."" I believe that should be "at most"

Kenneth Darlin

Thank you

Sarah Lin

You'll see Theo take on some sun-related materials eventually!

Sarah Lin

There will definitely be more information about this, though not directly until the fourth book. However, I do want soulcrafting to be a fairly long term effort. Nobody gains immense power in just a few years.

Spellman - RiahWeston

Thinking about all the sun-related materials. Shouldn't Theo take it for his fourth technique room? What better way to create artificial mass than an artificial sun? Especially since it opens up a lot of avenues to use other fundamental forces alongside gravity.

Runcible Technician

I've been wondering about the 'trap for those who want to advance quickly' bit. Last week I asked myself 'How long did it take Theo to get powerful the last time he walked the nine?' because this time he seems to be struggling, literally for months, to get even decent power as a first tier. I'm starting to suspect that all the setbacks he is having are masking him is some subtle way. This has been interesting to read and think about.

Alexander Dupree

Liked this. Still feeling a bit off about Theo also. Not sure exactly why I think he's sort of uninspiring but I really like the two others. They both feel more relatable maybe. Dunno. Senka is a weird mystery and I love it.

Nandan

I have no doubt that I'll someday enjoy the reason of her existence. In the meantime, I find that the fact and the way of her existence are much more concretely and immediately enjoyable. ^_^ Viva la Senka!!! 🎉

Sarah Lin

Glad you liked the chapters. ^-^ It'll take a while, but I hope you enjoy the reason Senka exists, when it eventually comes up.

Nandan

"Theo supposed that he should commend her open-mindedness" -- had me laughing out loud. Great chapters. I really enjoyed the sudden sleigh-theft escape, followed by Senka's timely reappearance. Plot twists that move things along are the best! I get that Theo is (still) a bitter old man inside, who never had kids and doesn't like them --in his backyard or anywhere else-- but regardless, he sure could learn to be more grateful, if not generally nicer to Senka.

Daniel Smith

If he's going to do something in his room to help improve his body, I personally would go with a statue of Atlas

lenkite

This is the third time that Theo's advice has been ignored to the groups disadvantage. He needs to stop double guessing himself. He should have insisted they leave on the last day of the hunt as he recommended. Frankly, this world sucks unless you are an Authority tier or above. Might Makes Right doesn't make for a civilised world.

Imp

Senka is a frumpt

Timothy Alexander

Thanks for the chapters!!!


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