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Rainhorn: Chapters 25-26 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2021-01-23 23:06:54 +0000 UTC
Rainhorn: Chapters 25-26 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

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bcdp

It's not clear to me why Theo thought they'd need to, or even could afford to, take a rest. How would stopping help Fiyu treat Nauda? And their persuers seem to have a way of tracking them, so a hidey hole doesn't seem of much use for avoiding them.

Sarah Lin

You're going to find the epilogue interesting.

JKincaid

I fully agree with Nauda, the "insult" wasn't possibly worth the trouble they went through, and the ultimate cost in the lives of Armeau soulcrafters. The loss of competent young crafters, and the resources they had to spend on them for training etc. absolutely had to weaken their family way more than the wounded pride of two jackasses who have been courting trouble with Theo's group since the moment they saw them. These guys are petty small-time Deuxans nobles. I feel like they wouldn't have actually made it in the big leagues, where Theo spent time in his past life. They can't ever seem to make the smart move.

Sarah Lin

Fixed, thanks!

singletrack

Given that they stole the sleigh from the other guys, I wouldn’t be surprised if they had a way to track it.

Lamsey

Minor typo: "one of the other soulcrafters giving their lives to distract the eryo" lives -> life

Grey Kylia

I guess for clarity: The silver* piece theo accelerated downwards I assumed to be a piece they removed from their own sleigh when they modified it to look different. As for which sleigh was "roughed up a bit, but none of the levitation components had been damaged" to be Theo's *Edit: reread and it says "gilded" not silver. might have been mentioned silver in a previous chapter so i got confused.

Grey Kylia

I wasn't confused about the sleigh. You was just talking about how they were hurt a little but survived. Seems obvious. I guess you could just change "The sleigh" to "THEIR sleigh" if anyone else has the same problem.

Runcible Technician

Jeez, these guys are sticking to them like poop. Is there a freaking tracking beacon on them or what? Honestly, considering the action, I would have believed that they threw a piece of their own sled at the beast. Not really noticeable when I read it.

Alexander Dupree

That cover is awesome btw.

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters. I wasn't super confused though I didn't remember where the pieces of old sled came from.


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