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Chasmfall: Chapters 25-27 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2021-10-23 19:39:03 +0000 UTC

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Sarah Lin

The crucible certainly consumed materials, but I wouldn't say it wasted them. In addition to helping him ascend, it allowed him to integrate and strengthen materials that he otherwise wouldn't have been able to pull into his soulhome. I forget where the details were mentioned, but earlier in the book it hinted about how those sublime materials were too powerful for his current tier.

Travis Smith

I’m confused by the crucible Theo used. Was that a waste of materials? Or did that strengthen materials through an ascension before he could incorporate them properly?

JKincaid

Well one thing that Nauda clearly lacked was proper defense like Theo & Fiyu built. We had hints previously, but Nauda collapsing under something Fiyu withstood with little trouble finally drove that point home. Hopefully her modified blueprint will reflect that.

Sarah Lin

I worried about the potential interpretations of this line while editing it. Though I decided against adding much clarification here, Theo will think about it directly in the fifth book. I doubt I'm spoiling anyone by saying that it's nine. Going up one level would mean 27 tiers, which would be ridiculous.

Desertopa

With Senka's revelation that Dominion isn't the peak of soulcrafting, I'm curious whether the implication is supposed to be that there are nine potential levels (which I'd suspected might be the case, since the tiers seem to fall into units of three,) or if that means that there are endless levels. "It's all fractal" sounds like it might imply limitlessness, but three tiers above the highest level known even to elite soulcrafters in the Nine Worlds already seems pretty fucking limitless by ordinary standards.

Sarah Lin

This one didn't get to the stage of sending me a notification, so it's a good thing you resent! Anyway, these are fixed, thanks.

Lamsey

I could swear I posted this, but doesn't appear to be visible. I guess Patreon is up to its usual tricks. Anyway, typo spots: "in the form of the glove" -> "in the form of a glove" "In addition to your share of the profits" -> double space between 'to' and 'your'

Runcible Technician

Damn, you did the foreshadowing about Nuada's sloppy crafting but it sucks to see the bitter fruit blossom.

Sarah Lin

Nauda will have a major reinvention arc in the next book, which I hope you'll enjoy.

JasonD

Glad to see the Senka reveal finally play out -- always knew something was there, but wasn't sure what! As bad as I felt for Nauda, this feels like a chance to reinvent herself, or at least her soulhome, from the ground up, as it were. Her soulhome lacked a unified theme -- now she'll have a chance to build something with a long-term plan correctly from the start.

Glaurung

Interesting reveals. Lots to think on and the fact that there are four more rivers makes me think this series could go on for a while longer.

Sarah Lin

Glad you've enjoyed it. If you've been waiting on Nauda's hints, the next book is going to be a critical one for her.

BaguaBrady

I'm looking forward to reading Nauda's journey to health, both as a soulcrafter and interpersonally. She's got a lot of repressed darkness to work through and I've appreciated how you've written in the subtle hints to that.

Alexander Dupree

I like the ending. So sad for Nauda. I thought she was better off than she was because she said she was holding it together during the fight.

Sarah Lin

I'm glad to hear it! I've been laughing to myself about the second meanings of her scenes for a long time.

Sarah Lin

Haha, you're thinking ahead on the chisel. Yeah, Nauda has a difficult path ahead of her.

Sarah Lin

There's not much time for him to do Ruler things this book, but I think you'll like the results in the fifth. Various foundations that have been laid previously only start to work at Ruler.

Robin

The talk of other rivers supporting the nine is interesting, maybe some of those rivers were dammed up or diverted to strip power from the nine, causing this weakening of all soulcrafters? That senka was once a powerful soulcrafter and that she's only occasionally lucid was already pretty clear, so good or maybe too much forshadowing I still like senka for being such a fumpet :)

ECD

Very much enjoyed the Senka reveal. As punishments for an enemy go, destroying their mind, body and soul and leaving them alone to be humiliated forever is pretty nasty.

MaliMi

Will the chisel be able to help Nauda as well? Btw. I get the feeling that in order to ascend to ruler as fast as possible she did not really think about her soulhome that much. Perhaps she can turn it around. Also enjoyed the Senka reveal.

Timothy Alexander

Awesome - loved it and can't wait to see the results of Theo's acsention. So thought the senka reveal was very well done and nicely foreshadowed :)


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