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Bondsfungi: Chapters 11-12 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2022-02-19 16:09:27 +0000 UTC

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Lamsey

It's actually molecular bonds. TWC is about to take a sharp turn into hard physics a la Stephen Baxter and the like.

Nandan

I am very, very curious as to what these fungi have to do with bonds. What sort of bonds anyway? Treasury? Kinky? Interpersonal?

D

Thank you for the weekly chapters.

RunningSloth

Hopefully Nauda is able to use the bondsfungi and gain back her self-confidence. The bondsfungi clearly likes her soul in the same way that the grizzlyroot likes Theo's.

Brandon C Yee

The only two doors helps...but I was more so thinking about the "inner/outer" bit. And the east/west makes it even more confusing. Since the corner rooms are orthogonal to the Singularity which is the center reference point I would more so think of it as: Exterior/Interior walls, or assign cardinality so we know which of the four technique chambers it rests above without having to remember. I'm guessing it is the capstone chamber for the mass pillar...but I'm too lazy to see if a previous chapter mentioned where the 'endurastone' was placed.

Andrew Goudie

Actually it only having two walls with doors tells you it's in the corner too. Since the middle rooms have 3 doors. I assumed the cantae was coming from the stone via the side chambers

Nandan

Yeah... same. I feel that Nauda is infuriatingly arrogant, under a shiny, multi-layer coat of Tatian "humbler than thou". Will she need to be brought to the brink of death before she admit her mistakes, open up and genuinely ask for help?

Sarah Lin

You know, one of the beta readers expressed confusion about this, and I think those quoted sections are the misleading part. What Lamsey said is correct, so I'll edit this part to make everything clearer.

Sarah Lin

For most of your comments, see how you feel after the next couple chapters. As for not much happening, all I can say is that I hope it doesn't feel that way in the long term. I could list the things I've tried to accomplish in the chapters so far, but my goal is not to argue or change your opinion. What I would like to do, however, is ask why the Ruling City Wargames didn't strike you as a hook? It's pretty important to this book that readers view it that way, so I've tried to hype it up and done the month countdown.

Jeff Petkau

Thanks for the chapter! I'm guessing Nauda will have some revelation like, "Bondsfungi can be destroyed and scoured by fire and still come back stronger than ever. That's just like me!" and make it the basis of her new soulhome. If that's correct, the problem is... she's not coming across as having that kind of resiliency. She's coming across as defeated and hopeless. (I could see how the interaction with Grekig could be intended to show that she's still determined to do better, but it doesn't come across that way for me. A bit of positive internal dialogue like "She would overcome this, one way or another" or whatever might go a long way.) Also, it seems like most readers will have been wondering for a while now why she can't just make use of the bondsfungi. Whether she does or not, it seems like someone in-world should have asked that question by now; the lack of it is starting to feel like an idiot ball. Also, this is pretty far into the book by now (over 1/4 if as short as the others), and it seems like... not much has happened? Theo crafting a lot, Nauda wallowing in self-pity, no word from Fiyu's relative, various battles disconnected from any of the MCs goals so with no narrative stakes. There's no indication yet what the big hook for the end will be. (It came pretty late in Archcrafter too, so not a problem yet, but I hope it's coming soon.) On a positive note: > ...the blood was vanishing from his clothes as they repaired themselves, so it must have looked like he was healing instantly. The cuts remained underneath, and they were actually starting to hurt now that the adrenaline wore off, but his opponents didn't know that. I love stuff like this. Makes Theo seem more badass while at the same time more human and relatable, and just makes the whole world feel a bit more realistic.

Brandon C Yee

At last Theo completed pinning the white cloth to the wall - the far wall, of course, in keeping with the overall design of his soulhome. He'd already pinned the dark cloth to the inner wall, where it soaked up the cantae flowing from the central stone. That left the two walls surrounding the doors, which had less space to work with but should be appropriate for what remained. ^ this makes me think that we're not dealing with a corner chamber. Far wall makes me think outer wall. Inner wall makes me think closer to the singularity. Piece by piece, Theo completed the remainder of his room. The most substantial elements of his outfit remaining were his boots and his belt, so he separated their materials on the western and eastern walls. That still left some oddly empty spaces, so he asked them for a few more materials to cover the remaining pieces: metal reinforcement, cufflinks, buttons, and the like. ^ Since the remaining two walls are the eastern and western ones it reinforces the imagery that the room is either above his feast chamber column or the former trophy column

Gray Bruer

Ya, I was a bit confused by that too but just moved past it. It would be nice if we had some diagrams in the book at times like the 'Soulcrafting 101' bits that Sarah has made. It can be difficult to get a good mental image of everyone's Soulhomes with the little description that we get (especially as they keep growing bigger), but those take a bunch of work to make I assume and wouldn't be in early release chapters anyways.

Brandon C Yee

Ok, the the east/west passage is mildly confusing...hmm

Lamsey

It's a corner room - Theo mentions being mildly dissatisfied by dedicating it to an armament, instead of a technique. Armament rooms have similar requirements to technique rooms in terms of placement, since they need to be able to apply cantae externally (see page 4-5 of the Soulcrafting 102 tutorial).

Brandon C Yee

Wait...is the armament rooms a corner room where the techniques usually are? Or an inner room where most other supporting chambers are? Just want to confirm before I got over with a fine tooth comb to nitpick.

Andrew Goudie

I'm finding it tough to feel sorry for Nauda, her stubborn refusal to engage with Theo, to accept that her previous actions have had consequences. The way she blew up at Fiyus proposal. It feels like it'll be really hard for Nauda to come back to the group, I'm really excited to see what happens!

Corwin

Not thinking of consequences so much as build time. I am sure Nauda has a way to speed up growth. But that's usually not something you can speed up indefinitely.

Andrew Shovelton

Here is to hoping that the fungi is part of a giant hivemind, and Nauda becomes the herald of the mushroom kingdom

Sarah Lin

Not every material will have consequences throughout later books, but some of them will, and this is one of those I hope people will find interesting!

Corwin

I like it. Though I wonder how the bondsfungi grows. How the interactions with going up and creating walls and windows will continue. Rate of growth will be important since it will determine how fast Nauda can move and ascend again.

Sarah Lin

Next week's chapters are a key part of the book. I hope that everyone will find them satisfying.

Timothy Alexander

Tftc! Hopefully a nadir and turning point for Nauda, just as the unexpected explosion was for Theo back in book 1 :)

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters


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