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Bondsfungi: Chapters 19-20 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2022-03-19 16:41:37 +0000 UTC

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Aria

I was thinking they should have just dumped her out to go on her own, but they definitely needed to be rid of her in some fashion if she was going to keep putting their lives at risk without good reason like that.

Sarah Lin

Hmm. I actually meant that, as in "it was just the pack animal being ridden", but I think "wasn't" probably reads just as clearly with less ambiguity. Changed, thanks!

Jamarr

Worse, it was just an animal. -> wasn't

Sarah Lin

I'm trying to strike a good balance. I do want the characters to put down some roots across the Nine Worlds, because you need to dwell in a place to build up meaningful organizations and connections, but I have many plans for keeping things fresh. ^-^ There's lots more to see, after all!

Inv7ctus

This was an utterly unexpected plot twist, but a welcome one I think, We'd been in fithe for a while and this world hopping adventure was in need of an injection of new scenery. The only major plot point that I was looking forward to was the runion of guchiro, but this changes things. Now that we've gotten some group bonding and development, fithe has given what it could and this was a perfect twist to provide new interesting encounters and hopefull new interesting matierals for some innvoative crafting. I wonder who will find who first, I think it'd be in interesting if Guchiro found theo or nauda first and worked together to find fiyu, perhaps earning some trust that way.

Orthes

I was not expecting this to turn into Antz does cultivation, but I'm here for it. Should I get some chocolate covered crickets to snack on for next weeks chapters :D

David D

Keep up the great work

Cicero

Pretty much as soon as barbarian woman was talking I was thinking, “wow they should just kill this asshole before she gets them all killed.” I don’t have a lot of tolerance for the aggressively stupid and ignorant character archetype.

D

Awesome. Thanks for the weekly chapters and taking time to answer my questions.

Runcible Technician

Lol!

Sarah Lin

Sadly my desire to create a world of fully realized character is overwhelmed by my desire not to make up more names.

Runcible Technician

Freaking mobile texting cut me off. I was going to say that worlds like this in warhammer 40k usually had carnosaur tables for encounters.

Runcible Technician

Poor nameless barbarian woman. How about that nameless house crimson guy huh? What a character! Its funny to see it in writing when it happens in sprite rpgs all the time. But people usually introduce themselves by name, but the audience almost never learns them from the scenes presented. Stormtrooper Syndrome. This is pretty great so far, I love the giant bugs and heavy air, makes me wonder how big the dinosaurs are. In warhammer 40k, random

Sarah Lin

Yeah, RAFO on Guchiro in general. You can expect more Tythes this book, and while Senka will not be engaged in the same sort of "antics" as before when she returns, I hope you'll enjoy her attitude when she does.

D

Why not eyes? Is it RAFO? Indeed I liked it whenever Senka and Tythes showed up. I kind of miss humour. Hopefully the planet’s inhabitants can give some of that.

Sarah Lin

His mask only covers the lower half of his face. I aim for a mix of humor and seriousness, but I would have said that this series had some of both, so YMMV. Senka was there primarily for her twists, but I did hope that her comic relief would work for some. Likewise, Tythes and his antics. There will be another character introduced in this book who is a very different angle on this, but who I hope people will like.

D

Yay. Is Guchiro wearing only a mask for lower half of his face than his eyes? I’ve only read this series of yours. Characters have been mostly serious apart Nauda and Theo being sarcastic in the first two. Have you explored including a comic relief character or humourous undertones don’t work well for this series?

Sarah Lin

Well, the rest of this book is going to be mostly peril, so have fun. ^-^ Correct, basically everyone is separated.

Corwin

Not sure how gravity waves work with sound. Not at least on making sound carry. Now I looked it up. Sound carrys up with gravity. And has a negative mass. So it's possible. Though I think if Sarah is going that route she should add some more words or mumbles

D

Enjoyed the chapters. I like plots that are perilous and looking to solve the puzzle. I must I’m liking how you explore different concepts and integrate them into the story. So the explosion even threw Tythes and Guenthyre apart?

Samuel Strode

I am beating it’s his gravitational field

Sarah Lin

He hasn't been named before, but he was one of the wild tribes fighters in the previous battle. Don't worry, you're not forgetting anything!

Byron

Someone remind me who Issak is?

Corwin

Be interesting to see if it was sign language or Morse code that allowed Theo to know what was going on

DiAlpha

Horrifying bug world, Nice. The pheromone thing is pretty neato though


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