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Bondsfungi: Chapters 21-22 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2022-03-26 17:01:38 +0000 UTC

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Sarah Lin

No worries! It's nice to have people engage seriously with my work. ^-^ And you're not wrong about the parallels. I have so many ideas I've wanted to get to for the Asplundat Movement, but I'm trying to keep these books more pared down and nuance gets lost. Hopefully by the time the series gets further along everything will be fleshed out without angering those who feel things are too slow. I hope you'll enjoy the process!

Austin Caudill

Sorry if I'm bugging you! I really appreciate that you take the time to reply to most comments. I really enjoy your books. Also if my comments tend to sound idk dismissive or simplistic that's not meant to offend or.. be reductionist I guess? My mind tends to just connect the simple and direct concepts and I don't necessarily know how to express them eloquently.

Sarah Lin

While I don't want them to be "fantasy Soviet Union" you're correct about several connections. The main one is that they were explicitly created to be Brutalism in soulcrafting, which informs their methods, their blueprints, and some of their society. You'll also find some parallels, due to some societal similarities based on fundamental structure. But they're less autocratic and there will be other differences once they finally get a chance to speak at greater length.

Austin Caudill

Out of curiosity, were the A-Group fithians supposed to draw inspiration from the Soviet union? They have obviously communist like rhetoric, and the thing that really made me think that was that their soulhomes were described as plain, grey, and with the appearance of concrete like stereotypical eastern bloc buildings. Also their main ability we've seen is hammerhands lol, I'm just waiting for a sickle to show up somewhere.

Sarah Lin

Glad to hear that you've enjoyed it so far!

Aria

Ah ok, I think I'm used to seeing it used incorrectly so often at this point that I missed the intent. The story has been great so far though.

Sarah Lin

Unless there's some sort of glitch, I get email notifications when there's a new comment. Anyway, I do actually mean sentient in this case; Theo will use the word sapient later in the book after his impression of Krikree has improved.

Aria

Not sure this will get seen this late after the chapters came out, but I believe the word you're looking for is Sapience rather than Sentience. While sentience is often used that way in pop culture, it actually just means something is capable of experiencing things like pain or fear, but not necessarily intelligence. Sapience though means intelligent and shares the same root as the scientific name for humans, Homo Sapiens. An example being that rabits are sentient, but very likely not sapient.

Sarah Lin

Except for the beginning, when Theo is still figuring out the language, it's meant to be a consistent system. Text "in quotes" is spoken verbally, while anything [in brackets] is a pheromone.

Jerek Kimble

It's a bit unclear which communication is coming in via pheromones (and therefore only perceived by Theo) and which are able to be communicated broadly. It appears Krikree is communicating in a way that Kathina can perceive.

Sarah Lin

No, it's not unreasonable. I'll add a sentence about it.

D

I asked because while she worries about going hungry but doesn't think about breathing at all. Of course, I may be looking at things too closely.

Sarah Lin

The others consciously adapted to the environment, while Nauda's body is just getting adjusted to toughing it out. Her heartoak and other enhancing materials mean she can survive, but it's not as good a solution.

D

Also has Nauda gotten accustomed to Slest's atmosphere? She seems to have no breathing problems. Is it because of her heartoak?

Sarah Lin

Hmm, that might be a continuity error. I don't have a mental note for when Nauda learns the name, so I'll remove this one.

D

"She hadn't run into anyone else during her travels in Slest, so Nauda had tried to become familiar with the various species of bugs. " How did Nauda know the planet is called Slest? In Chapter 19 she asks a bug about it but got no answer.

C

I bet it has to do with pheromones that influence the males thoughts rather than mind control.

Sarah Lin

Look forward to more developments on all this through the end of the book! Lots of Slest content in store.

OK, so there is a bit to unpack about the structure of the hives in the interaction here. Looks like queens should be more humanlike (unless it's the red hair ;)) so maybe Theo's guess that the humanoid insects are some sort of mutation of mammals could be valid. It's interesting that Krikree is free to betray her hive, so this would mean the queens don't have mind control or something like it, and individuals have at least some sense of self-preservation and free will (or maybe Krikree is smarter than normal for her caste). Maybe there is a possibility for vertical mobility between castes, probably based on soulhome level (and would this also causes physical changes)? Also not sure how to interpret the last thought from Theo as well.

JKincaid

Well Kathina sure went from slightly shady to full sociopathic cultivator pretty fast.

Chase

While it is true there is not much variation in the jobs of males in insect colonies, there is some species in which they are used for more than simply breeding. Some have non reproductive males as workers or other such tasks.

Runcible Technician

It's good to see alien minds being used well in fantasy, it makes me wonder if the limits of soulcrafting are genetic, or whether its a matter of perception whether a tower goes up instead of out, or even down. Jeez, Kathina's ruthlessness though. I haven't forgotten that her biggest contribution this book was to try and get Theo to ditch Nuada. She reeks of sub-boss.

Timothy Alexander

Fascinating info about the nature of slescan soulhomes - seeming to be different by caste/subspecies and going out more than up as they go through tiers


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