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Bloodcrete: Chapters 11-12 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2022-09-17 16:31:17 +0000 UTC
Bloodcrete: Chapters 11-12 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

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Holonomic

I can't help but wonder if those wild tribe soulcrafters that House Crimson has been abducting are being made into Bloodcrete.

D

I enjoyed reading these long chapters. Some good moments. Thank you.

Jerek Kimble

I’m curious as to when Homez will realize that every time our protagonists see him, he is showing ‘the worst’ side of the Movement, to the point where you have to wonder if there even is a ‘good’ side. And every other Ruler with him has been violent, bloodthirsty, intolerant, and fanatical.

Daryl Piffre

I like the picture a lot. If I'm allowed to be a bit finicky, then the boots look a bit weird to me. I know they're supposed to point down but I don't really see it

Sarah Lin

Yeah, information can get lost week to week. I hope that not repeating information makes the final book read more smoothly, but it does have a cost for those following along.

Jeff Petkau

> Theo had given up on an easy solution like finding and destroying the device. This confused me. What device? Did he speculate at some point that someone was using a device to summon the demons? ...ok, went back and checked old chapters. Right, that's why Theo's out here in the first place. Never mind. Reading is weird when there's a week between chapters.

Torphin

Yeah, he looks to be in his early to mid 30s, to me. And pissed off, haha. I think its those frown lines that make Theo look much older, if you don't look closer / zoom in. A frowning Theo seems more in character than a smiling one, though, so I don't really have any issues with the image, personally.

Melting Sky

Knowing nothing of the guy, I would place him in his early to mid 30s. He certainly does not look like somebody who has lived an easy life.

DrSubterfuge

I wouldn't say the face makes him look like he's in his 50s, but it definitely isn't a young looking face either.

BaguaBrady

That Theo picture is really good in my opinion. Young but resting pissed off face that ages him 🤣

Sarah Lin

Opposite opinions are fine too! I don't really do covers for my sake, so I like to get diverse takes.

Beelzy

I think it's fine, plenty of 30 year olds have gruff faces.

Sarah Lin

Thanks for the feedback! All feedback is welcome, but I especially agree in this case. Thought the same, but didn't want to influence responses.

Nechochwen

His face looks far too old to me. He looks late 40s to mid 50s rather than 20s to early 30s.

Nicholas F

Agreed. And so beautifully unforced.

brennon Petersen

Thanks for the chapter!

Runcible Technician

Krickree urging Senka to Cocoon has to be my favorite thing from the series so far. Earnest, sweet and hilarious all at the same time.


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