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Bloodcrete: Chapters 23-24 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2022-11-05 16:54:43 +0000 UTC

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Irakli Jishkariani

4th dimensional object seemed great for mind enhancement, but it is also good where it is. It doesn't represent mind but it does represent enhancement for me.

Edward Spencer Agoston

You rock! Thank you!

Sarah Lin

You're far more likely to see designators in Ichili cultures, but it's not universal. Specific hierarchies of terms are highly culturally specific, though again you can draw some parallels. There are some cultures that are more free (by Ichili standards) where people use whatever term they think feels appropriate at the moment.

Runcible Technician

I'm still thinking about Fiyu's nomenclatures. Is this a cultural norm for her people, like do they all use the same designators? Or do they just socket the right verb for the moment and run with it?

Nandan

Jerek, I see two reasons why Theo doesn't want to leave: 1. Their group should be in a better position to do... whatever they wanna do (stop the conflict, I guess), if they can secure the artifact. 2. More importantly, he (and house Blacksilver) want to do what they can to keep the local Fithans farmers as safe as possible and help them weather this battle.

Sarah Lin

Yeah, my shorthand was a bit too brief there.

Sarah Lin

You will see more uses of gravity as Theo ascends! I wanted to pace out some of the most dramatic applications.

Sarah Lin

I have SO MANY notes regarding different approaches. The real question is how many I can integrate into the story in a natural way. Fleshmaskers are fundamentally abhorrent to a lot of cultures, but not for the the soulcrafting aspect of what they do.

Donncha crowley

Theo was killed by vistgil not by demons

Martin Kalum

What bloodcrate really was, is a total surprise, since peolpe avoid touching it i throught it was a poison on some form. Btw couldnt theo use gravity to do stuff lile spredning up his thinking, be invisible by bending ligh. Or even bend spare to avoid energy attach.

Jerek Kimble

I’m not suggesting anything changes, just leaving my viewpoint. It might just be one of those ‘it’s because you only get two chapters’ thing.

Jerek Kimble

I agree but it feels enough over their heads that I wonder why they don’t just leave, realistically. Or how I should be rooting for them.

Felix Smit

I think that was the intention, our group is in way over their head.

Felix Smit

Gripping! This was great, I love how the conflict is progressing. Allot of the mysteries of soulcrafting seemed to be aimed at the higher tiers, I love how there are still more things we don't know about soulcrafting at a lower level and that we get to see more varied approaches. I have been wondering about soulhomes with hunger aspects for a while now (i.e. Soulhomes that feed of others for power). I'm not sure if these "fleshmaskers" fit the bill, but the comment from the first book about how a ruler's body is essentially a sublime material always stuck with me. Serious question; are fleshmaskers considered to be following forbidden arts?

Jerek Kimble

I hope we get a look at some of the motives here because currently we have a lot of groups running around and don’t know what anyone is trying to do. This is effective at showing the relative powerlessness of our group and the scope, but also is making it difficult to ground what our group should be doing here and what are their personal stakes in this conflict that warrants the risks.


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