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Bloodcrete: Chapters 25-26 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

🕑 Added 2022-11-12 17:59:40 +0000 UTC
Bloodcrete: Chapters 25-26 (The Weirkey Chronicles)

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Gray Bruer

Huh, I like that interpretation. That's my head-canon now.

Lamsey

For maximum accuracy it should be a dark point in the middle with a glowing corona, but I think it's close enough that we can chalk it up to artistic licence. Maybe it's representing him building it up, just before it collapses into a singularity.

Sarah Lin

Good point about the chunk of stone!

benjamin ireland

Only nit pick is the little chunk of stone on the tip of Theo's boot, makes him look like he has clunky toes hehehe. New fantheory I'm waiting for Theo to get a crown that mirrors the corona of a singularity. Hehehehe he'd hate it tho.

Sarah Lin

Glad it could be a bright spot for you!

Sarah Lin

No need to apologize, I was posting this to receive critical attention! That said, I don't know how much better we can get the singularity. I went through multiple iterations with the artist and it might be simply hard to illustrate.

Axim

Great chapter. Needed it this week

Gray Bruer

Great chapters, things are getting very tense! The art looks incredible. My only nitpicky comment would be that the singularity he's generating doesn't actually look like a black hole so much as a generic angry magic ball. It looks badass, don't get me wrong, but it's not even black, it's emitting red light. Of course I could be misreading things and that's actually a cantae bolt, but given that the singularity is kind of Theo's 'signature move' and he's often described as generating it between his hands that's how I'm interpreting it. I really don't want to come off negative though, I'm just a nitpicker and it really does look fantastic.

Sarah Lin

This chapter has some chapters for a breather! My hope is that the seventh book will be mostly intense, so this one includes some bridging material.

Holonomic

Great job on the Fleshmakers, they are seriously creeping me out. Really enjoying the chaotic action, though hopefully you give us a chance to breathe at the end of the book! The artwork is fantastic, really captures Theo well.

Nathan Rice

I like that Theo is starting to use his gravity with the environment more and more. When he's an Authority, I could see him having external points of gravity strong enough to orbit things around and using them as launchers.

DiAlpha

Thanks for the chapters! As for the art it looks great! If you are looking for adjustments, maybe if his singularity is gonna have a light effect then some splashing on him?

Sarah Lin

Yes, look forward to more emphasis on this when the seventh book focuses on the next ascension.

Felix Smit

That's including the fact that Theo's singularity was essentially incomplete during his fight with Esaire.

Felix Smit

The legs look so much better than it did in the previous version. I love the environment, it makes the whole piece feel dynamic.

BaguaBrady

I think the youthful yet bitter old man look is done near perfectly with Theo

Jerek Kimble

Good fight scenes! Will we learn more about the difference between Authority being ‘more real’ on a fundamental level, since Archcrafter and Ruler seem similar enough that the singularity at Archcrafter eats Ruler, but Authority can override it at Ruler, despite only a 1 tier gap for each.

Devin

Commenting before reading because I need to express how awesome that art is!


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