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Wakespire: Chapters 18-19

🕑 Added 2023-04-02 17:02:55 +0000 UTC

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SAB

Damn, was hoping we'd get direct feedback from professional soulhome reviewers how impressive Theo's new Authority soulhome is. Maybe they'll be a reason for him to submit to inspection later...? :)

Tobias Begley

I am very late, but thank you for the chapter, it was fun!

Sarah Lin

Hmm... I believe that the first instance is a legacy of an earlier version of the book where there was only one group left. You'll see Jadadictus Beta show up again later, so I believe the first instance is the mistake, unless I've confused myself. Good catch, thanks!

Sarah Lin

Glad you enjoyed it! Getting some varied strategy in this sort of competition was one of my goals. Alliances and throwing matches are entirely allowed. For example, the Dortorus teams have been throwing matches to one another all along. The judges don't particularly favor it or grant extra points, but it's not illegal. Ractifus is a remarkably perceptive soulcrafter and he made an educated guess. More on him later.

Torphin

Thanks for the chapters! As much as I enjoy reading about gender-fluid, dark-loving Fiyu, I definitely prefer the Sarah Lin-written version of this series. One thing that confused me, though: in chapter 14, Isorales says there is only one Jadadictus team left, so he would not be able to receive blessings. He also later mentioned combining the best remaining soulcrafters from their lineage. Is the inclusion of Jadadictus Beta on the leaderboard for Round 3 an error or did I misinterpret what Isorales was saying?

5HourLethargy

Thanks for the chapters! Having the frontrunners take each other out while Isorales wins by not having to play PvP is some nice story-plotting and shows some nice tactical thinking from the characters. However, why didn't the Dortorus prince assume that it was throw/bribe though, especially after the team threw two blessings towards Isorales? Also, how did Ractifus Terefilia know about Theo's three floor design? All in all, I liked this twist on the first run, showing how our heroes have improved. Onwards to the victory celebration, with many a dark and dreary turnip!

Jormungandragon

He liked the idea of being evil a lot more than actually following through on it.

Nimh

That’s what I wanted to know I just didn’t know how to word it

Sarah Lin

Not along the lines of Avatar the Last Airbender, but there are other non-soulcrafting disciplines. Water Fithans have water purity specialists, for example, and Aathal has tons of plant-based workers.

Nimh

Great chapters, can’t wait for more! Quick question, are there other disciplines like Navim’s stoneshaping? Water, fire, and wind shaping that sort of thing.

Holonomic

Thanks for clearing up my confusion

Runcible Technician

Gather 100 absorption points to upgrade Singularity to level 2.

Imp

Nauda telescope MVP!!! Imagine if she makes an entire room around it. Makes sublime lens attachments. So much potential! Theo made me giggle at his humble bragging there, and his "Am I really that untrustworthy looking" inner cry emoting. And Fiyu was great once again by virtue of being Fiyu.

Sarah Lin

Hmm, sorry for ambiguity. Theo definitely can't use his technique to draw materials into his soulhome and then use them, but the more materials his singularity absorbs, the more the "mass" of his soulhome singularity increases. He can't rapidly increase his power this way, but does need to do it in order to keep scaling the singularity.

Sarah Lin

With the lightegg he'd be able to start on his basement before Stronghold, but he'll have higher priorities in the near future.

Patrick

In the early books he had had some thoughts like he would do dark deeds (done dirt cheap) but I don't think he ever acted on those thoughts. He reminds me of myself when I play an RPG PC game thinking I'm going to make an evil character run through, and then I get to the actual decisions and I'm like "oh that sounds dickish" and click the nice decision instead

Martin Kalum

No prizes!

Holonomic

That was my understanding as well. The golem scene was confusing due to the ambiguity.

Donncha crowley

Theo and his word mmmm interesting has he ever gone back or stabbed someone in the back

Arcane

Unless it changes in the future It just gets absorbed by the Singularity, adding to its mass. Just like in real life, anything going into a black hole is never coming back out.

Holonomic

Is Theo able to absorb materials into his soulhome's singularity that are consumed by his singularity technique? That section with the golem made it sound like he was adding the material consumed by the technique to his heart column singularity.

Derek Walker

The 4th floor is a priority but with the use of the light egg can he start on his basement or does he need to wait one more tier?


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