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Wakespire: Chapters 24-25

🕑 Added 2023-04-22 16:57:13 +0000 UTC

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Sarah Lin

Well, thank you for the kind words. ^-^ I certainly hope that readers will enjoy seeing Theo develop over the course of the series, and you'll see lots of critical points in that process!

Greg

Thank-you Sarah for choosing to be a writer - Weirkey chronicles is an engaging series and the imagery of physically building a soulhome to develop and grow is a powerful metaphor. I appreciate the Wakespire twist/tension development in 18-19 when Isorales fell behind in the competition. When I started reading Soulhome the first time - I wondered where the book was headed with Theo because his character was so focused initially on vengence and self-centeredness. Seeing his character continue to turn from the 'me' world to the 'us' world is a real gift. I wonder at what other cliffhangers and moments of irrevocable change you will build into his sense of integrity and social development - like will he experience any more unavoidable challenges that puts him in controversy with Fiyu, Nauda, or Isorales. Then how will he come out on top and how will their relations develop, strengthen, change? You're appreciated.

Sarah Lin

That's accurate analysis of Theo. Krikri will return in the eighth book!

Inv7ctus

Now that you say it. I miss Krikri. My favorite character dynamics in this book is when characters drag kindness and empathy out of theo's facade of selfish apathy. The way to do that seems to be a degree of innocence and need of aid. He didn't hesitate to help Fiyu when she needed it. And went out of his way to aid krikri when it would've been simpler to see her as an enemy. I think deep down, he still wants to be the hero, even if his pessimism hides that.

Jormungandragon

That’s it! I liked Homez a lot, I’m not sure why I couldn’t think of his name.

Jormungandragon

I don’t quite understand. Who is the proposed ship in this situation?

Jerek Kimble

Homez. I think he'll be Authority next time we see him

Sarah Lin

It's nice to get comments on side characters! You can count on all of them showing up again throughout the series and growing as the series develops. Isorales has a significant role to play, so it's great he has your interest.

Jormungandragon

For the record, I love Isorales as a character so far. I liked Tythes and Esaire and that other guy from that Empire (his name escapes me), but I’m really becoming fond of Isorales.

Jormungandragon

I’m sure Sarah has planned out for how the upside down tree will be used already, but for the record I also love this idea.

Sarah Lin

Fixed, thanks!

Nathan Rice

He says it doesn't match him. The tree doesn't effect gravity; it just grows reversed.

Lamsey

Minor typo: "similar to what had surrounded by the entrances to the Chasm of Lamentations" delete 'by'

Travis Smith

I like this idea! Why wouldn’t Theo plant it in his own basement when the concept so perfectly matches his own Soulhome?

Sarah Lin

It'd be a valid way to organize things, but interweaving different threads for tension also has some value.

Felix Smit

Fun chapters, I'm wondering whether the order of these two chapters would be better if they were swapped, it sounds like quite a bit of time passed during Theo's chapter while Naudia and Fiyu's happens relatively quick.

Nathan Rice

I wonder if Nauda could plant the upsidedown tree in a basement? Maybe mingle its roots with her main tree.

Sarah Lin

I guessed that he referred to her putting the ring around his neck. If there's any actual confusion, that doesn't have social import in their culture, Isorales was just befuddled.

Slightly Morbid

Honey cakes to Fiyu? No wonder she isn't impressed, she would have preferred some dark and dreary turnips instead.

Runcible Technician

All the midfight interrogations lol. They need a telepath at this point. Or Sherlock Holmes. Considering the kind of powers everyone is weilding, I'm surprised that there haven't been more 'I killed who?' moments.

Jordan Jones

Curious as to which line lead you to this. Did I miss it?

Did Fiyu just accidently propose to Isorales? A bit awkward as he seems to like Nauda.

Froyo Baggins

See, that one I'm fine with.

holothuroid

> but they were not who she wanted now... - If there ever was an invitation for shipping


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