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Wakespire: Chapters 6-7
🕑 Added 2023-02-18 18:02:16 +0000 UTCI have a little milestone to celebrate! Sadly, it doesn't come with any badges or announcements or anything I can show, so all I have is this email telling me that my most recent book hit the Kindle All Stars list:
This means that, in the month of January, Bloodcrete was one of the top titles being read in the entire world. People read about 1.1 million pages of the book! This is the first time I have ever gotten on the list, and while it's not that huge of an accomplishment, it's nice. Sadly they don't promote the list, but they do straight up send you bonus money. Huge thanks to everyone invested in the series. ^-^
All that aside, we have new chapters this week. With these two, you'll mostly have a sense for how the competition of this book works. In series like these, it's easy to fall into patterns, and TWC is no exception. However, I hope to change up the types of battles/competitions/events to help keep things feeling fresh as well as use the narrative tool best suited for a given book's purpose. Hope it works for people!
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Chapter 6
After the violence of the deathtrap, the office felt disturbingly quiet. Empty but for another desk, this one staffed by a young Noveni woman. She beamed at them when they emerged from the portal.
"Down to two, huh? Well, take heart, because most teams don't make it this far at all."
"What's this one?" Theo asked.
"Your first Room of Cursing!" The official gestured cheerfully for them to come closer and then pointed at the model spire on her desk. "You can see how far every team is here, then you get to choose one of them. That makes sense, right? Sometimes foreigners have trouble with the translation. You're foreigner-foreigners, right? You don't look very Noveni."
The tower was an exact model of their location made from golden wires. Unfortunately, when he looked closer he didn't see any clear indicators of rooms or anything like a map. There were simply specks of light that gave off little word-like wisps. If he was reading it correctly, they were the "foreigner" light and they were still ahead of the other groups, but not by much.
Even though speed was still a priority, Theo knew that room difficulty would increasingly be what slowed them down, so he took a moment to examine the other specks. It looked like all three Dortorus teams were still moving up the spire, with Gatrium in the middle of the pack. He also saw specks labeled Jadadictus and Terefilia relatively far up. All those further down he assumed had stalled out on a challenge.
"May we see our comrades?" Fiyu asked.
The woman blinked. "I just sit in this room and handle the curse rules. Speaking of which, have you decided who you want to curse yet? I can explain more if you want, but your team has already been targeted twice, so I think you know how it works."
"Does this give any information about what challenges the other teams are facing?" Theo asked. "Or how many team members they have left?"
"Nothing like that, just relative progress. And don't try to guess based on your experience, because if you haven't figured it out yet, the room order is randomized."
So much for that strategy. Looking at all the team representations, Theo found that he just didn't care. "Can we skip this one?"
"Curse no one?" The official blinked again and regarded them as if wondering how they got in. "You have to bless someone, but there's no rule about needing to use a curse."
"Then we'll just move on." Theo glanced toward Fiyu for confirmation, but she nodded to him. They moved around the desk toward the next portal.
Currently, Theo didn't know the politics of the competition enough for the cursing to be a strategic decision, and he doubted that he could keep the other teams back for long. Both his curses had been anonymous, but if the system was run by Noveni officials, he was willing to bet that others would learn. No reason to make any enemies in their very first competition when they'd already drawn enough attention.
When they stepped into the next room, Theo immediately recognized the glass and silver layout. This representation of a soulhome was much more complex, with pipes emerging from the floor and spanning several tiers. One of the pipes near the bottom still ran to the exit portal, though, so the final goal seemed unchanged.
"Oh... this one is a bit difficult." Fiyu shuffled to one of the corners. "The flow is very wrong here. I will fix it."
She'd received a good soulcrafting education, so she'd definitely be able to solve the puzzle eventually, but Theo thought it might take her a while. He suspected the first puzzle was meant to weed out incompetents, whereas this one was designed to be a true challenge. It definitely tested your ability to hold a large pattern in your mind... but he had been doing exactly that for decades on Earth.
While Fiyu fixed self-contained sections of the soulhome, Theo tackled the broader flow. This design was an unusual one with several different wings, but it still followed the same principles. When he finally directed all the water toward the door, he waited for it to open... nothing.
"I am not sure..." Fiyu was hesitating around a previous section, looking to fine tune the pipes, but he doubted that a few small changes would redirect enough water.
No, the problem had to be elsewhere. Theo looked back to the center of the blueprint and found a section where the water sloshed excessively in the pipes and lost a lot of momentum. This flow might have worked for him, but apparently the creators of the trial hadn't assumed a high degree of control. When he switched to a simpler pattern, more water flowed directly through the center and reached the door.
When he and Fiyu stepped through, they found themselves in an empty room. This one was circular but otherwise free of ornaments or obvious puzzles. After several seconds of concentration, Fiyu shook her head to indicate she felt nothing hidden.
"Please wait," a voice told them from the ceiling. Every announcement sounded a bit strange, but Theo thought that at least three different people had spoken to them.
"Are they doing this just to slow us down?" He directed the question to Fiyu and she floundered at the rhetorical question.
"I do not know. Perhaps the voice is a trick?"
"It is not." The official was back, proving that they were listening closely. "You simply need to wait for the next group to reach this section. Two teams enter and only one can proceed. Ah... here we are."
A section of the wall beside where they had entered lit up in a portal, so Theo and Fiyu retreated to a safer distance. The Gatrium Authority with his blue mask entered - he appeared to have lost all three of his teammates, but there wasn't a scratch on him. Instead of trying to attack, he sauntered to the center of the chamber.
"You've done well to come this far, but you can't beat me." He stretched his gray wings to their full extension as he rolled his shoulders. "But you could waste my time. If you surrender and help me stay ahead of the Dortorus teams, I'll grant you one of my blessings next month."
"No thanks." Theo was interested by the idea of exchanging favors across rounds of the competition, but he didn't trust this man and he wasn't going to surrender so easily.
"Don't you fools understand how this works? If you fight me, I'll make sure you go back so injured you won't recover in time for the next round!"
Fiyu went invisible and the masked man flinched.
"Fools! I can tear you limb from limb!" Cantae rushed around him in a blue aura, and though Theo didn't see any weaknesses in his power, he had seen that flinch. This Authority seemed too desperate to avoid the fight, which only motivated them to start it.
Theo began by casting a gravitational field and he was surprised to see his opponent stagger. The Authority began flooding cantae around himself to keep from floating to the ceiling, but he was clearly struggling. According to Nauda's intelligence he had ascended a full month ago, so could he really have so little control? Maybe he'd focused on other skills in preparation for the contest.
In any case, Theo decided to take the fight completely seriously. He began hurling torsion bolts and watched as the Authority struggled to negate them. Something wasn't right about the way he fought, as if his cantae flow was bizarrely distorted...
Then Fiyu cut across the back of his legs. He dropped to his knees with a cry of pain and she fell on him, her cantae blade at his throat... but she hesitated. Even though she had their opponent pinned, Fiyu looked toward Theo with a puzzled expression. He agreed: figuring out this oddity might be more important to the contest overall than a little time saved.
"Did you cheat to get to Authority?" Theo asked.
"I didn't che... unhand me! No prince of Noven should be treated like this!"
Instead, Theo walked forward and pulled off the man's mask. As soon as it came free, the Authority's cantae shuddered... and it became clear that he was no Authority. The quality of his cantae immediately dropped to a Ruler's and damage appeared on his body and clothes. It seemed like he had been suffering the injuries he had been pretending to shrug off.
"That is... an impressive deception." Fiyu pulled back, her eyes so wide Theo could see a hint of them even through her face plate. "I do not know how such a thing could be accomplished."
"Neither do I." Theo examined the mask carefully. It was clearly made of sublime materials, but he'd never heard of an armament capable of something like that. He lowered itand looked back to the fake Authority. "Doesn't matter. Do you surrender, or do we need to send you back?"
"You ruined everything!" The Gatrium man took a swipe at him, but his injuries were too severe to put strength behind it. "This was supposed to be the Gatrium lineage's chance to show our worth... everything was going so well, then you fools..."
Clearly he'd been counting on his armament to impress the judges and intimidate other contestants. Given his reputation after the first round, it had apparently worked, then he'd simply had bad luck running into two Rulers who wouldn't hesitate to fight an Authority. Theo almost felt bad for the raging man, as his anger was devolving into sobs, but he still had a contest to win.
Before he could finish the man off, Fiyu stepped beside him and took the mask. She bent down next to the fallen Noveni and extended it to him. "We do not mean to steal your armament," she said. "Why don't you take it and leave under your own power?"
"Don't mock me!" The Gatrium contestant knocked the mask out of her hands before falling onto his face. Fiyu lowered her head and drew back.
"Do we need to make him surrender?" Theo asked the air. "I won't hesitate if that's what it takes."
The official who had spoken to them didn't answer out loud, but the portal onward appeared. Theo smiled and ran into the next chamber.
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Fiyu was no longer enjoying the Wakespire. The early chambers had been fair tests of their abilities, but now it seemed that the organizers were intentionally trying to eliminate her and her companions. If the intended goal was to make all the competitors continue until they failed, she hated the very idea of this contest.
Poor Friend Nauda had sacrificed herself so they could move forward. Fiyu forced herself to face the sublime beast in front of them.
In any other context, Fiyu would have retreated. The beast appeared to be a sphere composed almost entirely of four different jaws that met together at the front. She could see beady little eyes between the jaws as well as various crystalline spikes from the sides of its body, but otherwise it appeared to be all mouth.
More alarmingly, the creature's natural soulhome had more than three rings, which meant it was roughly comparable to an Authority. This would certainly be an occasion to retreat and find a relative.
"Well, let's try this..." Friend Theo didn't attempt to use his usual technique because the creature flew under its own power, instead beginning with experimental bolts.
One damaged the sublime beast's hide, but it immediately opened its jaws and roared. Within its jaws burned a fiery mass of white-hot cantae that exploded outward, forcing them to leap in opposite directions. Fiyu caught her breath and then let her stealth flow over her body.
Almost immediately the beast turned toward her. Its body jerked from side to side, small eyes searching, and then it peeled back its jaws even further. The glowing mass at its core began rushing in all directions, trying to wipe away other techniques. With her Corporeal Floor, Fiyu was unaffected and began to creep closer, hoping that she could end the fight with a precise strike.
Before she got close, the sublime beast began unleashing cantae beams in all directions. They moved very quickly, forcing her to retreat to a safer distance. Unfortunately, she doubted that such a powerful beast would exhaust itself soon enough for her to take advantage.
Abruptly the beast collapsed to the ground, writhing. Friend Theo must have been using one of his new techniques... but the beast was already adapting. The crystals on its back began to glow with the same fiery light at its core and the beast rose. This time it was targeting Friend Theo, nearly catching him with another of its dangerous bursts.
If they had been at their best and had Friend Nauda at their side... but that was a fantasy. Fiyu realized that they had few chances. The sublime beast was too intelligent and perceptive to allow Friend Theo to charge his best technique. She had little to offer, with her soulhome still struggling to refill itself. Her only hope was to put all she had into a single attempt to cripple the beast.
While it was distracted, Fiyu leapt at its back. At the last second she summoned her cantae blade around her hand with all her new strength, just before she cut across the beast's flank.
Her blade sliced one of the crystals in half, but ground to a halt against the beast's gnarled flesh before she could sever one of its jaws. It roared in pain and began to turn. No time. Fiyu struck again, severing another crystal and hoping she could cut off the entire-
Dozens of needles caught her shoulder and agony shot through her body. Then suddenly she was falling and striking a soft pad.
Fiyu lay on her back, gasping for breath. The sublime beast must have turned faster than she had realized, using its superior speed to bite her. Not only did her body feel somewhat burned from its fiery core, she could feel the points of pain all down her chest and back. Clearly, she had been rescued, but not before she had been injured.
"Fiyu!"
The voice of a friend broke through her shock and Fiyu struggled to sit up. Friend Nauda was beside her, bloody but thankfully not ground to pulp. She moved forward as if to touch her, then immediately pulled back, all her muscles going tense.
"Nauda." Fiyu smiled at her friend and reached up to take her hand. Once they touched, Friend Nauda used her strength to help her to her feet. "I am glad to see you well."
"They let you take a nasty hit before pulling you out." Friend Nauda winced and touched her side. "There have been others coming through and some of them have broken bones or worse injuries. This is ridiculous."
"I do not like this competition."
"That's how they get you." It wasn't Friend Nauda but an unknown Noveni who sat at the side of the chamber, one of his wings apparently broken. Friend Nauda's back relaxed slightly when she turned to him, so he must have been known to her. The man gave a wry smile. "It only pulls you out before a lethal blow, so you can take heavy injuries. The Dortorus teams are using that to eliminate the competition."
"Not much of an excuse," Friend Nauda said. "Isorales, this is Fiyu, one of my teammates. I didn't see you fall through."
"Oh, I came through the next room over. When I realized that I wouldn't be able to make it much further, I failed out in a way that wouldn't cripple me."
While the two of them spoke, Fiyu examined the room more carefully. It was another cube, much like those in the Wakespire spire, but this one had windows along one side that revealed the normal Noveni landscape around them. There was a space for portals to appear on the ceiling, dropping failed contestants onto a soft pad. Through the doors Fiyu could sense several identical rooms, many of them filled with heavily injured contestants.
As they retreated from the room, Fiyu remained closer to her friend. "Nauda, is it possible to watch the progress of the others?"
"Apparently the princes and judges have special windows," Friend Nauda said, "but for the rest of us there are only big model towers. I was watching your light and hoping you made it through."
"I am fine, Nauda." In truth, she was still shaken from her near death. She desperately wanted to either be alone or be with Relative Guchiro, but she was glad to have Friend Nauda with her.
"Are you sure?" Friend Nauda's glance suggested that Fiyu had not been successful at hiding her emotions. "You look like you took a burn and something sharp really tore into you. I've been working on my healing, so I could try..."
"Yes, please do."
"I'll need to touch you to do it, though."
"That is acceptable. You may proceed."
They entered the room just outside the entry point, which included various benches around a large model of the spire. This one gave more information than the smaller versions Fiyu had seen within the tower, but she was too weary to examine it. Despite what she had said, the injuries remaining did pain her significantly.
"Alright, move your cloak out of the way and I'll do what I can for these cuts." Friend Nauda took her to a sheltered corner of the room and laid her hand on her shoulder very gingerly.
Her touch was not unwelcome and it carried with it a wave of healing cantae. Yet, as she healed Fiyu's shoulder bites, Friend Nauda's heartbeat increased rapidly. This saddened Fiyu: her friend was still so nervous about offending her that even a healing touch made her nervous. Navigating the differences between worlds was difficult, but she would try to find a way to reassure her. Perhaps Relative Guchiro could advise her after the competition.
In the room beside them, another contestant fell from the ceiling, screaming and scattering blood in all directions.
As the pain of her injuries eased, Fiyu's senses wandered back to the central spire. It was not amenable to her normal senses, so she was forced to use her eyes to track the small flicker of light that represented Friend Theo. Now he traveled alone against the dangers of the Wakespire.
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Chapter 7
When Theo finally entered the next portal, he was limping. That sublime beast had been a nasty customer that he wasn't sure he could have beaten without Fiyu destroying several of its crystals. Even after that, it had become a grueling battle to whittle down the creature before it could pin him down. Before he finished it off, it had struck him several times with cantae bursts and gnawed on one of his legs.
To add insult to literal injury, just when he was about to finish it off, it had vanished just like the contestants. He knew that the Noveni couldn't afford to throw away such powerful resources, but he had been looking forward to killing the thing.
Fortunately, the next room didn't seem to be combat-oriented. There was a gap in the floor, then a series of swiftly moving clay targets on the opposite wall. That shouldn't be a problem. His blueprint's efficiency meant that he wasn't hurting for cantae, even after the previous fight, so he had been most worried about stressing his injured body. This chamber would give him a chance to recover a little.
"Just take out the targets?" He asked the question to the air, but the trial proctors didn't answer.
He raised a hand and began casting torsion bolts. It took him a couple tries, as the targets were made of a sublime material that somewhat deflected cantae. Not well enough: a precisely-placed bolt would still break apart the clay. Alert for any additional threats, Theo simply began taking out the targets left to right.
Just when he was beginning to think that there was no hidden obstacle, he saw clay slip from out of the darkness and reform a target. He immediately took it out, but there were others rising. Soon they were reforming faster than he could fire torsion bolts.
Recognizing a losing strategy, Theo stopped and just watched the targets as they returned to their original position. This would have been a perfect opportunity for Fiyu to eliminate them all with a lightstorm, but he'd have to cobble together another solution.
First he tried forming a larger, slower moving torsion bolt that would persist through multiple targets. When he launched it into the center, the targets rerouted around the bolt instead of crashing into it. No luck. A singularity might have been able to destroy them all, but he didn't want to waste so much cantae, especially if there was a chance that they'd still be able to evade.
Gravitational fields and points of mass managed to push the targets around, which was good for setup. Once he had the positions as good as he thought he could manage, and confirmed he had no other ideas, Theo hurled several bolts and tore apart the clusters.
Or at least a significant portion of them. Some of the targets escaped, others were flying out of range, and they'd start regenerating any second.
Theo started destroying the remaining targets... and he realized that he wasn't fast enough. He had never relied on torsion bolts as a primary technique, so he hadn't realized the limitations. Even though his flow was flawless, always providing cantae from his spherical pattern, something was slowing him down. It couldn't be the mental process: he was trying to shape another bolt and his cantae simply wasn't reacting fast enough.
The first target began to slide up from the shadows. Theo let out a roar and released everything he could: not just torsion bolts, but generic spheres of cantae and even less formed attacks.
For a moment he was afraid that even that wasn't going to be enough. The last bolt left his fingers weakly and he staggered backward, but it destroyed the last remaining target. Once they were all down, the fragments dropped into the shadows and the portal onward shimmered open. Technically he should have floated into it, but instead Theo dropped to his knees and considered his near-failure. Long term soulcrafting was more important than one little contest.
So far, his strategies had always involved decisive techniques instead of raw volume and he had no intention of spamming attacks. Yet lacking the capacity felt like a weakness. As the speed of his opponents increased, being able to use techniques rapidly would only become more important. Surely there was some way to improve that. Perhaps it could even speed up how swiftly he could generate singularities.
Regardless, that was a problem he wouldn't solve right then. Theo idly considered if his blueprint was flexible enough to accommodate a change as he limped into the next portal.
On the other side, he saw the same Noveni woman from earlier. "Hello! Welcome to-"
"Blessing or curse?" Theo belted out the question as he lifted into the air and flew across the room.
"Uh, curse. I'm alwa-"
"Skip!" He flew over her desk and directly toward the wall. Thankfully, the next portal appeared just before he arrived and he floated into the next cube.
No... not a cube. The chamber's base was the same size and shape as so many others, but when he looked up he saw that the walls extended far higher. There were handholds at various places along them, which he barely noticed compared to the obstacles floating in the air. Not as dense as the maze of blocks, but there were blades and spikes and small floating clusters he had a bad feeling were explosives.
Fortunately, he had no need for the handholds. Theo cast a gravitational field just strong enough that he began accelerating upwards at a slow rate. Given how the challenges had been worsening, he needed to assume that the obstacles would be fast enough and lethal enough that he couldn't simply rush through them.
The first layer was composed of four blades that spun at the same height, occasionally crossing one another. All he needed to do was slip through, then-
"Another team has applied a curse. The difficulty will be intensified."
Stone crumbling below drew his attention and Theo saw the floor fall away into darkness. It looked like the walls were beginning to crumble as well. Even though he was flying, the bottom of the shaft might be composed of spatial manipulation, so he had to hurry.
He slipped through the blades easily enough, then dodged around a series of slamming blocks. A small metal cluster exploded into hundreds of flechettes that swarmed him without warning. Theo instinctively cast a point of anti-mass in front of him, bending their arcs away. But he still couldn't generate a powerful enough effect and few struck him. Most scraped off his coat, but a few penetrated.
Leaving the darts in his flesh, Theo tried to hurry onward before any more could explode. He was half-way up the chamber and ahead of the rising darkness, so all he needed to do was keep up the pace.
"Another team has applied a curse." The voice at least had the decency to sound a little surprised and not repeat the entire phrase.
A wall of stone manifested above him, the length and breadth of the column. It began to descend, scraping against the sides and sweeping up traps as it fell. Theo grimaced and increased his pace while he generated a small singularity between his hands. The wall looked impossible to avoid, so he needed to break through.
When the singularity hit, to his surprise it didn't immediately absorb the wall - it must have been composed of Authority-tier materials. But it was just an obstacle, not a real Authority, so Theo increased the cantae flowing to his singularity. As it finally began consuming the stone, he flew upward and crashed through it, smashing apart the barrier.
He'd taken several injuries on the way from traps that hadn't been consumed, but he was through. Now all that was left...
"Uh... one more curse." As soon as the voice spoke, a second wall of stone plummeted from the ceiling, carrying a swarm of traps along with it.
"Are you kidding me?" Theo barely had time to curse before the wall was on him. He tried to back up or generate another singularity, but it was too late: the stone slammed into his body and threw him down into the darkness.
Theo landed somewhere soft, though he still had a dart digging into his back. His entire body ached from the impact of the stone and the disorientation from the spatial movement was almost as bad. Since his body had taken a beating, Theo didn't try to force it and instead used gravitational fields to lift himself into the air.
He was in some kind of chamber where losing members were dropped, based on the number of injured contestants he saw around him. Well, losing might be relative. As far as he knew, he had been ahead of the crowd for most of the spire, and he thought everyone climbed until they failed. Depending on how their performance was scored, he might have done well.
It was strange that Fiyu and Nauda were nowhere to be seen. Even as he floated out of the room, one of the Dortorus Authorities crashed down behind him and was met by other golden-winged Noveni. Maybe his friends had gone to wait with Guchiro.
Outside the entrance room, Theo noticed a large model of the spire. There were only a few sparks left, and even as he watched, the remaining teams spluttered out. As far as he could tell, everyone in the contest had reached their limits. Just as he began wondering what would happen next, flaming text lit up along one wall.
Wakespire: Second Round
1) Belated Foreigners - 195
2) Dortorus Gamma - 155
3) Terefilia Underclouders - 135
4) Dortorus Alpha - 120
5) Gatrium Lineage - 110
6) Jadadictus Alpha - 105
7) Dortorus Beta - 100
8) Ugustial Beta - 85
9) Jadadictus Beta - 80
Fascinating. They apparently posted a "top nine" instead of ten, though that was a minor cultural curiosity. What mattered more was that Theo and his friends were the "Belated Foreigners" at the top of the chart.
Theo eagerly pored over the numbers, trying to deduce the underlying system. He had the impression that it didn't have a large subjective component based on the even numbers, but there were too many unknown variables. Before he could try any equations, a second wall lit up with flaming text. This one appeared to be the overall rankings for the entire competition and he turned toward them eagerly.
Then powerful cantae grabbed hold of him and tore him from the room. Theo staggered as he was dropped onto polished white flagstones. He was nowhere near the spire now, instead standing on a severed mountaintop.
Fiyu and Nauda were waiting nearby and they smiled at his appearance. He was glad they were alright, but he had no time to greet them. This mountaintop wasn't entirely flat: the flagstones rose toward one end where a series of marble thrones arced around a third of the peak. Noveni princes sat in each of the thrones, watching them impassively.
"So this is the foreign team that caused so much trouble." One of the Noveni had a booming voice, even though he sat leaning against one arm. His eyes narrowed as he looked over them. "It's time to discuss all the suspicious circumstances of your ascent."
Comments
Sarah Lin
Not in the manuscript, but doesn't hurt to check, thanks!
Lamsey
Minor typo in the edit - just checking this isn't also present in the manuscript. There's a missing space between "it" and "and" in "He lowered itand looked back".
Sarah Lin
I don't actually have exact numbers decided on the expansion. Generally speaking, it's small and the horizontal expansion decreases with each ascension. It's not enough that it would make sense to remodel and add new rooms, just enough that Theo does the expansion trick to make sure he doesn't have to remodel later.
Felix Smit
What about when people ascend to archcrafter? How far away from the center do they build their shielding walls. Theo used obelisks during the construction of his to build them slightly farther away by "stretching the limits of his soulhome". How much space does he gain? During that chapter, if my memory is correct, you mentioned him using this technique as to avoid having to re-expand later does the available space expand slightly with later ascensions or did he just need it for a broader foundation for his shielding wall?
Sarah Lin
I'm intentionally ambiguous so I don't overwhelm the reader with numbers, but I do have dimensions I use for planning purposes. Each floor is moderately large, not as big as 5000 sqft. Theo's rooms are each 12x12x12, so each floor is about 1300 sqft (slightly more once you count the vestibule and other non-standard elements). Individual soulcrafters might have different floorplans, some that don't use their soul space as effectively, but you can't push the boundaries much beyond that.
Sean Jennings
How much space does the average soulcrafter have when they start out? like is their soulhome 5000sqft? or how much space do they really have? I know Theo has nine 'rooms' per floor. though the central room is essentially one big room so its really eight, but how big are the rooms?
Bradur
Not worth any apologizes. Im absolutely satisfied with your writing and your planning! Im actually impressed at how little flaws are present in the Kindle releases. If there are even any continuity flaws! Thanks
Sarah Lin
There's a continuity error with that section, sorry.
Bradur
I. WANT. MORE. AHHHHHHHH
Bradur
Didnt theo absord the authority mask? I mean it makes sense that theo would retrieve it when he fiyu gestures to him but it fewls like something is skipped
Sarah Lin
See you how feel after another round or two, as there are other teams that are highly competent. Theo and company have an "outside advantage" due to their skillset, such as Fiyu completely trivializing the darkness room. This book I'm trying to do a different sort of arc.
Cicero
Fun chapters, but I wanna play devil's advocate for a moment here: is the team, and Theo specifically, not being shown to be implausibly elite? Yeah, Theo is basically supposed to be a soulcrafting genius, but their team has one fewer member, they don't have local knowledge/prep, they got cursed repeatedly, and more importantly, a bunch of the other higher ranked teams have authorities. Particularly for any team that has more than one authority, I'd expect the raw power advantage to be a massive help here. But instead, we see Theo beating the later, more challenging rooms single-handedly, and is only stopped by being thrice cursed in a single room, while the other teams apparently never got that far (or even particularly close, going by the score). I dunno, I'd just expect that at least a couple of the local teams filled with arrogant young masters would be reasonably competent, enough to leverage a massive power advantage anyway. As it stands, the scores are roughly where I'd expect them to be without the disadvantage of opposing teams having authorities.
Runcible Technician
Hell yeah! Flexing those writer gains! Get more famous, I want people to recognize your name when I gush about books.
Matt Venzke
Yeah, I was wondering that as well. I didn't think Nuada was even with them during that time, since she'd been knocked out earlier?
Sarah Lin
Glad you're enjoying it! Yes, this section is just an error on my part.
Sarah Lin
Not inane at all! I'm happy to have readers caring about my work. ^-^
Benj Guzman
I’m loving Wakespire! In chapter 6 when Theo and Fiyu defeat the Gatrium, Nauda takes the mask that Theo had put into his soulhome and gives it back to the Gatrium. I assume Theo had just tucked it under his arm, and Fiyu gave it back…
Nimh
Thanks for replying to my inane questions. You have crafted an amazing world and I just want to know all about it.
Sarah Lin
Soulcrafting itself wouldn't impose any limits on artistry. You could make techniques that were beautiful or even ridiculous, so long as you crafted a chamber for it. Elaborate forms aren't seen as often simply because it's often less effective than a direct solution. However, you do see artistry when it matches the theme of a room, which can strengthen it.
Travis Smith
Congratulations on the achievement! It is well deserved!
Nimh
I have been re-reading through the series so far and something in Archcrafter caught my attention. “She had no time to think, because a swarm of lights rose from the ground, like golden insects except that they were composed of pure explosive cantae. Companion Theo's gravity had no effect on them, so Fiyu rose and sent bursts of light downward. When they collided with the artificial insects, they exploded quite dramatically, so Fiyu continued to defend them as they raced onward.” — Archcrafter (The Weirkey Chronicles Book 3) by Sarah Lin My question is this how artistic can one’s techniques be made? ‘Cause as far as I can tell this unknown Soulcrafter designed an explosive technique and made it look like insects.
5HourLethargy
“Yet, as she healed Fiyu's shoulder bites, Friend Nauda's heartbeat increased rapidly.” --Have Fiyu's senses always worked on heartbeats? Is this a new Ruler/corporeal floor power? "He had the impression that it didn't have a large subjective component based on the even numbers, but there were too many unknown variables." --I'm not sure 'even numbers' is the best turn of phrase here, since five is obviously an odd number. I do understand that here it means 'all the scores end in 5 or 0' but maybe there's a better wording.
Nimh
Great chapter, and congratulations on making the list!
5HourLethargy
Congrats on the KU accomplishment! I think this certifies you to add “kind of a big deal” in all future About the Author blurbs ^v^
Tobias Begley
Huge congrats!!!
Imp
Hm. Interesting chapter! Problems indeed. Got to love how it's always a problem to do well.
Imp
Hey now, you're an all star! Got your game on! Congrats 🎉
E.O. Tenkey
A plot hole: Theo places the fake Authority’s mask in his soulhome and a paragraph or so later Fiyu takes it from him and tosses it to their opponent.
Piyush Singh
Hell yeah … Bloodcrete definitely deserved it ❤️
Jerek Kimble
Oh good catch. Also did everyone just leave the rare mask lying on the tower floor?
Lamsey
Derek is correct; this should be Fiyu. There are two instances of "don't" in the dialogue which should probably be switched to "do not" for voicing. Also, the following line beforehand needs altered to remove the reference to Theo putting it into his soulhome: "He tucked it into his soulhome and looked back to the fake Authority."
Nighteyes
Congratulations! And thank you for the chapters! Enjoying book 7 a lot so far! I think at the end of the first section in chapter 1 you meant Fiyu not Nauda. Also, Theo put the mask into his Soulhome, so I wouldn't think she could just take it back? Unless I'm forgetting a mechanic?
Jerek Kimble
It’s possible teams just waited in the last curse room knowing they were at their limits
Jerek Kimble
FYI: Nauda somehow showed up in the room with the fake authority. I expect it was supposed to be Fiyu. I like the idea of the officials hurrying to save their tower from the big-bad foreigners who just want some lighteggs.
Timothy Alexander
Very fun! Sad we didn't see the first prizes get awarded tho... Hyped for #AuthorityTheo :p I guess it must have been externally given curses towards the end given how much the other teams were failing out towards the end? Surprising if they would have had enough extant teams otherwise... Or they all just wanted to take down the leaders I guess.
crusaderstar
Very exciting! Looking forward to the next!
Derek Walker
“Before he could finish the man off, Nauda stepped beside him and took the mask. She bent down next to the fallen Noveni and extended it to him.” Shouldn’t this be Fiyu? I thought Nauda was out at this point?
