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Wakespire: Chapters 30-31

🕑 Added 2023-05-13 17:01:54 +0000 UTC

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David

It was clear to me which round it was, and I just binged the chapters. So I'm sure it will be fine when read as a book.

Cicero

Maybe, but I just checked the source of all progression fantasy truth, Cradle, and immediately before/during/immediately after the first round of the Uncrowned King tournament, it mentions that this is the first round 18 times. I don't remember noticing this back when I read it. Personally I think it's fine to mention it occasionally as long as it's integrated into sentences that have some other point, other than just reminding people that this is round #.

Sarah Lin

This is the penultimate round, not final. I suspect this is an issue that would feel too unclear weekly one way, but too repetitive as a unified book the other.

Cicero

I can't remember if this is the final round or not, or how many there are total. Might make sense to integrate some info into a sentence somewhere, e.g. "as Theo waited for the final round to begin..."

Irakli Jishkariani

Yoohooo Theo can make portals big ones πŸ˜€πŸ˜€. Waiting for curse was funny πŸ˜€πŸ˜€. And he didn't even use singularity on golem. at least pretend you are struggling πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ poor isorales πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

Nathan Rice

Wow, Theo's not just Nightcrawler. He's his own Portal gun.

Slightly Morbid

Yeah, it would be kind of cool to again see Isolares from the others perspective and see that he is underestimating himself. Like actually being quite good for someone who haven't trained with them before and is still not used to his new power level. Which was his thing before too. Having a great setup for advancing, just not having the confidence.

WESTON FRENCH

Seeing Isorales pov has made me want him to join them as a late team member permanently

Piyush Singh

Oh yeah Right

Sarah Lin

Yeah, I'm considering potential tweaks to the previous chapters, but I hope they'll read fine in book format.

Sarah Lin

The tunneling technique has been working for a long time (he's used it to move sand), it just couldn't make large portals.

Felix Smit

I imagine writing about the main characters from someone else's perspective is just as fun for you as it is for us reading. Thank you for the chapters.

Slightly Morbid

Nice chapter with challenges again! The last one felt a bit like filler with mostly visiting places to find that nothing was there. I guess that's the problem with reading things as webnovels instead of whole books. When you wait a whole week for a chapter, you always want to have more cool stuff in them. While when you read them as books, you need to have chapters with a bit more downtime. Anyhow, good idea to have the perspective from the side of Isolares to give show of the awesomeness of Team Theo. Something they themselves take for granted, but perhaps shouldn't.

Imp

Isodore has gotten performance anxiety from dealing with his allies. Wonder what Nauda did in the dark room. .

Holonomic

While I was expecting a bit more buildup, it's so exciting to see Theo making portals! And a non MC PoV that isn't an epilogue? Color me surprised.

Piyush Singh

He finally completed his wormhole technique ..? If I am not forgetting this is the first time he used it yes ? It would have been nice to see how he figured out that technique

Tobias Begley

Thank you for the chapter! It was fun to see the terror of just how good Theo, Nauda, and Fiyu are


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