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Wakespire: Chapters 42-43
🕑 Added 2023-06-24 17:32:47 +0000 UTCBefore the chapters, I want to ask for some important input from readers! I'm also asking the question on Reddit and Discord, if you'd prefer responding on those channels.
Previous books in TWC will be receiving new covers and I wanted to take the opportunity to improve the appendices. I'm also preparing a series of lore posts and there are the upcoming special editions, so this seems like a good time to inquire about what supplementary content readers are interested in!
As one example, there's been consistent interest in more information on demons. While some of that is unknown to the characters and will be a plot point, I think a demonology appendix could be a great addition, so that's on my list. Another example of what I plan to do is a set of anatomical sketches of various species across the Nine Worlds.
What else would interest you? I'm also open to writing more soulcrafting appendices, the difficulty is just not duplicating all the books since uncovering the soulcrafting is a major aspect of the series. I've also considered trying to write an introduction for readers who might be confused, the difficulty is that I'm not a good judge of what's confusing to new readers.
One request that's difficult is soulhome blueprints, as Amazon charges heavily for images and my books are already relatively cheap. However, I'm thinking of trying to add grid-based outlines of Theo's soulhome at the end of every book. I'm open to other comparable supplemental material if fans are interested.
Those are just some of my thoughts, but I'm here for yours! Please feel free to speak up about anything you'd like to see and you just might find it in an upcoming edition. ^-^
Anyway, chapters. We're starting into the final sequence of the book this week!
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Chapter 42
All nine suns of Noven had risen for the final round of the Wakespire, as if the heavens themselves wanted to attend. With all of them so high in the sky, it was blinding to look up, and even the corners of the sky Theo could see were bleached almost white.
Every previous round, they had traveled together in their sleigh. This time, Theo flew alone. With Fiyu and Guchiro gone, and Isorales arriving via his lineage's vehicle, Nauda and Senka were actually the only ones in their main group. But this round would be nothing like those previous, so they couldn't afford to simply march up to the entrance.
Instead, he located the specific spire that he'd been directed toward earlier. Ractifus Terefilia was already there, standing at the edge with his arms and wings both folded behind his back. When Theo landed he turned with a gleam in his eyes.
"Today is the day. Everyone has been waiting for this, whether their plans are for good or for ill." Ractifus reached into his robes and withdrew the narrow key, then held it back. "I almost don't want to give this to you, given the potential dangers. Your group is the first to really impress me in this forsaken city and it would be a shame to waste your talents."
"Are the risks any higher than when we agreed?" Theo asked.
"All intelligence suggests that the Dortorus teams are proceeding with their plan to steal the lineagegem. Unfortunately, there are suggestions of other variables, of factors I haven't considered. Be prepared for things to go wrong." Ractifus sighed and extended the key to him.
"So this will get us to where the lineagegem is kept?" Once he had the key in his hands, it didn't feel like anything special, nothing like his weirkeys.
"It will open the walls of any challenge room and allow you to enter the back corridors that are normally reserved for officials. Through those, you should be able to reach the top chamber, where the lineagegem is kept. If you hurry, you'll make it before the Dortorus teams."
"I wanted to ask you about that. Won't the judges notice us breaking the rules, or at least our disappearance?"
"Is there really time for this?" Ractifus glanced meaningfully toward the spire, then sighed. "I admit there's some uncertainty. But if they truly plan to steal the lineagegem, they will need to disrupt the viewing process for the spire. The models will remain intact, so you only need to keep one member in the tower to avoid drawing attention. Mark my words, you won't see the Dortorus teams at the beginning and then something will go wrong in the middle of the Wakespire to disguise their attack."
"We'll do what we can." Theo gripped the key in his fist. They'd soulcrafted as much as they could, brought Isorales in on the plan, and tried to make alliances with whoever they could. No other powers in the city believed in the conspiracy, but it was time for the truth to come out.
"You'd better hurry. It will start soon enough."
Theo flew away from the mountaintop to the plaza where all the teams met. He identified the familiar sleigh first, of course... still without Fiyu. Just as Ractifus had predicted, there was only one team of weak Dortorus Rulers present. Otherwise, he saw a number of familiar faces... the Terefilia team looked rather grim all in black, while the Gatrium Authority was actually moving in his direction.
"I want to make a deal," he said in a low voice. "You forfeited the earlier match to the Jadadictus team in return for later rewards, correct?"
"That's right." Theo glanced around, wondering how many were watching them make a deal and whether it mattered.
"The Gatrium lineage may not be as prestigious, but we desperately need allies. We're putting everything into this round. If you're willing to support us as you did Jadadictus, we'll reward you greatly."
For just a moment, Theo considered telling him all about the lineagegem and the Dortorus plan to attack the entire event. It was a bit sad to think that the Gatrium lineage was pouring so many resources into a competition that was about to fracture. But bringing more people into the plan would only add variables to a situation that was chaotic enough, so Theo simply nodded.
"Agreed," Theo said. "We'll stay behind you the entire way, and you'll receive our blessings. That's all we can promise."
"It will have to be enough." The other Authority moved away to converse with his team tersely.
Theo needed to be doing the same. When he reached the sleigh, he unfortunately saw no sign of Fiyu. Senka was sleeping flopped over the side and Isorales appeared calm, so this time Nauda was the nervous one. As soon as he got close, she stepped up to him and spoke in a low voice.
"No word from Fiyu. Do you think something went wrong?"
"There's nothing we can do for her from here," Theo pointed out. "Trust Fiyu and her relative to handle their business. If she's late, we'll just have to enter with another team based on those already registered."
"I didn't count on this," Isorales said. "I could call one of the lineage Rulers to serve as fourth member, but I don't know if they'd arrive on time."
"Sporp that." Senka popped up from her position. "I'm tired of sitting on the sidelines. I'll be the fourth member and I won't just forfeit this time."
Isorales and Nauda shot her skeptical looks, but Theo nodded. Given how little they knew about what they might face, having Senka as a wild card could be a life-saver. Better to have her and her knowledge than another Noveni Ruler. There would be more than enough of those in the competition.
The last minutes drained away and even Nauda accepted that Fiyu wasn't going to arrive soon enough. Instead, they prepared their ad hoc team and lined up near the entrance portals. It was almost time and the judges were arranged on their thrones... except for Ractifus and one of the Dortorus princes.
Everything was counting down. This time when Theo ran into the portal, he had no idea what to expect.
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If they hadn't been mindless slaughter machines, Nauda would have felt sorry for the second stage demons. They were a serious threat to average people and even Archcrafters, but they were increasingly being perfunctorily slaughtered by the groups of Rulers and Authorities that sprinted into the Wakespire tower.
For the first time since they had started the competition, they didn't rush on. Instead Theo revealed the key they'd been given and experimentally touched it to one of the empty portal gates. Instead of opening another swirl of light, the stones themselves began retracting. Soon there was a perfectly ordinary door in the wall, leading out into a corridor with visible staircases spiraling in both directions.
No alarms sounded, no voices screamed at them. Ractifus had been right after all.
"Looks like we split up here." Theo turned back to look at her and Nauda responded with a grim nod. "Don't advance too quickly or try to win, just keep our presence on the spire for anyone watching."
"I will." They'd already discussed this, but she knew he was seeking control in an unknown environment. "Hopefully you'll be faster than the Dortorus team and it won't even turn into fighting. I'm sure this will all be over within the hour thanks to your brilliant assistance."
"Which would be nothing without your essential contribution of sitting in a room." Theo smiled and clasped her arm and Nauda found herself grinning back.
Theo was all business after that and headed for the door, while Isorales lingered. It looked like he wanted to say something, but then Senka started kicking him in the back of the legs until he moved. All three of them headed into the doorway, which promptly closed up, leaving her in the Wakespire alone.
So long as Nauda was still participating in challenges, in theory their light would appear on the tracking devices. She waited in the starting room for a while so that they could apparently make slow progress. Depending on how vicious the Dortorus attack was, her role might not even matter. With so many facts unknown, they'd decided that it was best to be careful, so this role fell to her.
Technically there was strategy of her own to consider, but Nauda sleep-walked through the challenges while worrying about her friends. The cantae puzzle, though different from the previous ones, was easy and she completed it at a leisurely rate. When she arrived in the spiraling chamber, there were no other teams present, so she just strolled up her path.
The one problem, born out of pure randomness, would be entering the dark chamber. She had no way of getting through alone and she couldn't afford to receive injuries. In theory, after serving as a decoy she could forfeit the Wakespire and back the others up. That relied on a lot of assumptions about the Dortorus attack and how the fighting developed.
None of those worries turned out to matter. Nauda's next chamber was one of the offices, which turned out to be a Room of Blessing.
"You lost all three of your teammates?" the woman asked. "How? Is this another trick?"
"It's a bit of a story," Nauda said. Apparently nothing had gone so horribly wrong that the officials were panicking, which could mean anything. She stared at the model and couldn't focus on it: some teams were ahead, some were behind, and the only people she really cared about weren't shown at all.
"Uh... do you know who you're going to bless?"
"The Gatrium team, I suppose." Not that it was likely to matter, but that had been the new plan. "Do you mind if I rest here for a moment?"
"I won't stop you. Just between us, the judges were complaining about not being able to see inside earlier, so you should have time to recover." The young Noveni woman regarded her with something that might have been sympathy. Perhaps she was filling in her own story about the early rounds going horribly wrong, but Nauda couldn't bring herself to care about that.
Instead she leaned against the wall and tried to gather herself. She had expected explosions to rock the tower so she could leap into the portal back to help her friends. Now she wondered if she might end up simply waiting while they were fighting for their lives.
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Chapter 43
In a perverse inversion, the back rooms of the Wakespire tower were actually more elaborate than the public ones. The challenge rooms were all built from somber stone, while the cramped staircases and hallways that serviced them were more conventional Noveni grandeur. It made Theo imagine Noveni janitors carrying golden mops and ivory buckets.
Entirely inappropriate, given the seriousness of their mission.
Ractifus had been correct about the basic layout of the spire: the challenge rooms were arranged randomly in a core tower and their positions didn't correlate to the artificial levels in the competition. There was a ring of passages surrounding that core with occasional chambers for the management of the individual challenges. Right near the first one they'd discovered holding cells for keeping all the second stage demons, though they had been nearly emptied out.
His theory was that the tower was arranged roughly in blocks of five challenges, so they probably still had a long way to go. Ever since leaving the insulated challenge rooms his gravitational senses had been working properly and they suggested that they had only climbed about halfway up the spire.
The lineagegem was supposedly held at the very top, just beneath the platform where the judges watched. According to Guchiro, it appeared to be surrounded by many layers of sublime materials designed to absorb and focus all the cantae spent within the spire, so it would be extremely hard to break into from the outside. That meant the Dortorus thieves, and by extension Theo, had no choice but to use the back passages. It was just a question of who would arrive first...
Or if they'd run into each other. While flying up a staircase that opened into a broad chamber, Theo found himself staring at the Dortorus team as they approached from the opposite staircase.
"You!" It might have been the man who'd fought him in the Artisans' Gallery, or it could have easily been another Noveni who looked similar. "I should have expected this treachery!"
"Wait." Theo wanted to hit them all with a gravitational field, but forced himself to talk first. "We're just here to stop you from stealing the lineagegem."
"What are you even talking about? This is all a plot by the undercloud Noveni."
"Okay, let's talk about this..." But even as Theo raised his hands for peace, he saw weapons coming out and cantae being deployed. The Dortorus team definitely wasn't in the mood to talk.
As the attacks flooded toward them, Theo cast an anti-mass point that deflected the majority. He turned back to Isorales and grabbed his arm. "Keep going. There are at least three Dortorus teams and we need to reach the top before all of them."
"I... okay." Isorales nodded grimly and then shot toward the next staircase up. Senka had vanished entirely, but Theo trusted her to make her own decisions.
That left him standing alone in the chamber with two Authorities and two Rulers. They weren't attacking so aggressively anymore and he hoped that they might be open to negotiation, because he wanted to know what they had been talking about. Then he realized they were just waiting: another Dortorus team came pounding up the staircase that Theo had ascended.
"The foreigners are working with the underclouders to steal the lineagegem!" one of the first team yelled. That appeared to be all they needed to turn and get ready to attack him.
Which put Theo alone against three Authorities and five Rulers.
It would have been a completely impossible fight, if they all had been top tier Authorities with well-designed soulhomes. But he saw a few rushed designs, a few without good shielding walls, and one Authority who had clearly used a heavenspear to cheat the ascension. They also had a major disadvantage they didn't realize: they were expecting to fight Theo as he'd presented himself during the Wakespire. He began preparing a weak singularity behind his back, but hesitated when one of the Authorities spoke.
"Stand down," the man said. "If you've done nothing, you'll be judged fairly."
"I don't think I will," Theo said, as answer to both sentences. Some of the enemy soulcrafters looked offended, but a few edged back nervously when they saw the look in his eyes.
"Don't be a fool! There are eight of us and you're a fresh Authority. You don't have a chance."
All at once, Theo realized that he'd misunderstood his real advantage: the difference in perspectives. In his mind, it was ridiculous to think of himself as a "fresh" Authority since he'd been at the rank for months. For the people he was fighting, Authority was a destination - for him, it was only a stepping stone. They couldn't conceive of how much difference the soulcrafting he'd done after his ascension would make.
"Then you go to your doom, outsider! End him!"
As soon as they actually began to attack, Theo tunneled his singularity to the center of the chamber. They all knew that it had disabled them before, so they automatically gave it a wide berth. Some moved around the sides while others flew over the top, coming at him from three different angles.
But the singularity had always been a distraction. Theo flowed cantae through his chaosgem and instead cast his disorientation technique.
The gravitational fields within the bodies of all his opponents suddenly fluctuated wildly, from their stomachs to their brains to the bones of the inner ear. They had been prepared for cantae attacks, but their bodies weren't capable of dealing with such a rapid change. Two of the Rulers and even one of the Authorities collapsed, vomiting or shaking. He realized that the technique had an additional effect on Noveni wings, since their delicate forms were highly specialized for their environment.
He'd changed the battlefield in an instant, but he hadn't won. Three of the Authorities and two of the Rulers had soulcrafted enough enhancement chambers to resist the effect or were strong enough to endure the disorientation. They still flinched when they saw their comrades go down and they began hurling cantae spears at him instead of attacking.
Another mistake. While they flinched, Theo cast the strongest point of anti-mass he could just in front of him. It wouldn't be enough to redirect their most intense attacks, but these testing strikes were turned to the side. And while they attacked uselessly, Theo cast torsion bolts in response.
They flew from his hands and then swung wildly away from the anti-mass, which was exactly what he'd practiced. The group staggered back, weapons and armor breaking apart under the torsion effects. For a moment he wondered if he could win the battle with that alone.
But Authorities weren't fools, even Authorities like these. One summoned a shield of pure gold that proved able to negate his torsion bolts and another had thrown her spear aside for a sword. She lunged in, ducking under a torsion bolt, and unleashed a slash of cantae that tore across the chamber and splintered stone in all directions.
Theo managed to duck underneath it, but the goal had always been to destroy his point of anti-mass. Now the remaining five had advanced across the chamber and were closing on him. Before they could surround him, Theo created a tunnel behind himself and stepped through.
He emerged on the other side of the chamber, through the portal he'd placed there. The group was already turning around to face him, the shield-bearer at the vanguard. Good combat instincts, no doubt refined in their private palaces, but not very flexible when facing a new threat.
Firing on them from his new position had never been the plan: Theo instead released torsion bolts behind himself. His original portal was still open and the bolts flew through to strike them even as they turned. One of the Authorities went down, clutching a bloody leg.
To their credit, they adjusted quickly enough. One of the Rulers formed another golden shield to defend their back and the woman with the sword actually tried to charge through the portal at him. Theo closed it just before she arrived, leaving the most dangerous opponent stumbling on the opposite side. Then he formed a second portal directly over the Noveni group and began casting through that instead.
They didn't have a chance. Every time the shield users moved their defenses, Theo simply cast a torsion bolt from a new angle. While he took down the group, Theo was thinking more about efficiency than his risk in the fight.
Creating portals was fast enough for some combat uses thanks to the alacrispark, but still slow. An Authority of equal skill would be able to see the portal and predict the angle of attack. Indeed, some of them were beginning to adapt. It would be more efficient to tunnel the cantae bolts themselves, but he wasn't sure how well he could adapt the process.
If Theo had been fully using his gravitational senses, he might have ended the battle then. But while thinking about his soulcrafting he'd let his focus slip and the attack came from a direction he'd never anticipated.
One of the Rulers who had been overcome by his disorientation technique lunged from the floor, tackling Theo's legs. He slammed against the wall and all his techniques except the singularity shattered. The Ruler tried to strike at his legs but was still too weakened to penetrate Theo's armament. Theo kicked the man in the side, sending him sliding across the room.
Too late. The others had acted immediately and he had several opponents flying at him. He managed to dodge one spear, deflect a bolt... and the woman's sword pierced his side.
"I've got him!" she called, pushing her sword deeper. "Take him-"
It might have worked, if Theo had been the type of Authority they were expecting, weak except at range. But all the work he'd put into efficient usage of his soulhome space meant that he had more enhancement chambers than they were expecting. All of those had been strengthened by his ascension and the lostflesh on his fourth floor was already pulsing to sustain his injured side.
So before she could finish her sentence, Theo grabbed the swordswoman's head and slammed her into her companions. She tried to press her sword further into his wound, but Theo fired a torsion bolt at point blank range into her hands. When she dropped it, he used his grip on her head to hurl her into the nearest wall. She struck it heavily, her wings went limp and she dropped.
A spear wielder and another Ruler were still in range and should have attacked him then. Instead they backed away in horror as Theo straightened, calmly pulled the sword out of his body, and dropped it to the ground.
On the other side of the room, a few heavily battered opponents surrounded a golden metal form: it looked similar to the golem they'd fought in the Wakespire. One of them must have brought it out of his soulhome. But they needed to charge this one with their own cantae and they obviously wouldn't have enough time. Theo began floating his singularity toward them, letting it steal wisps of the cantae.
"Had enough?" he asked. "Let's talk."
Despite his injury, he was confident he had the battle well in hand. The swordswoman had been the biggest problem and she'd taken herself out via overconfidence. His impression of the golem was that it could have been a serious threat, but they wouldn't be able to activate it. In theory the Dortorus attack had been stopped, unless their third team had used another route.
Theo's gravitational senses, on high alert since his failure, were all that saved him. He realized that one of the walls of the room was opening before anyone else did and felt something massive on the other side. A quick gravitational field flipped him to the ceiling, out of the way of the attack.
His stomach still twisted as he realized what was happening. The blocks surrounding the central column had receded, just the way they had with his key. Terefilia soulcrafters poured out from the other side, attacking everyone in range. Their initial attack involved the largest of them flying with spears outthrust.
Theo had avoided their assault, but he realized that the chance of a simple victory had just gone up in smoke. One of the Dortorus Authorities had retreated down the stairs with the golden golem and could well be activating it. Plus there were four fresh new soulcrafters, one of them the truly dangerous Authority with the crimson whips. Worse, he had absolutely no idea where the Terefilia team had gotten a key or what they intended to do.
All of that was higher priority, but Theo was staring at something else. The first of the Terefilia spears had pierced the heart of one of the weakened Dortorus soulcrafters. His body didn't disappear via the spatial technique, it only sagged as his lifeblood rolled down the spear.
The game was over and the battle had begun.
Comments
Aria
I'm a little confused by recent plot developments. Why are they getting involved in the lineagegem situation at all? It seemed obvious at the start that it would likely turn into a lethal contest, and even if it didn't it was entirely possible they were being setup as a scapegoat (which I think Theo should have a lot of concern for given his past, but hasn't really been mentioned). Seems like some extreme risk for what feels like very little reward. Feels like they would have been better off washing their hands of the whole situation and just leaving altogether once they knew it was all going be rigged against them. I'm still enjoying the story, but personally it feels like character motivations for doing things this whole Wakespire arc kind of falls short compared to previous ones.
Sarah Lin
You can count on getting a demon appendix! Vignettes about sublime materials are an interesting idea that I'll have to turn over. Hopefully info about other soulhomes (including Navim's) will be integrated into the main story in an interesting way.
5HourLethargy
RE pre-chapter questions: - Demon info would be nice, especially after some of the reveals in the next post - Maybe some vignettes about interesting sublime materials, either the collection or processing of them? - Related to that, maybe walking through some side character's soul homes. e.g. What makes a crafter's soulhome different, starring Navim?
5HourLethargy
Thanks for the chapters! Poor Gatrium lineage. At least some folks are playing by the rules. > The one problem, born out of pure randomness, would be entering the dark chamber. I had to read this sentence twice. The whole thing feels a little stilted/not how people think or talk. I think the aside clause interrupts the flow and is needlessly wordy. Something more direct and/or with the active voice might read more smoothly e.g. "Her one worry was randomly getting the dark chamber" > Theo wanted to hit them all with a gravitational field, but forced himself to talk first He's learning! The text didn't highlight it this time, but Theo has been gradually deescalating from "violence first." I'm sure part of it is that mercy is a privilege of the strong, but still nice to see some consistent character change. > But he saw a few rushed designs, a few without good shielding walls, and one Authority who had clearly used a heavenspear to cheat the ascension I'm still not clear on what all can be determined without an observation technique. Shielding walls sure, but how can he *see* rushed designs? Rereading/reading as a book might help, but I'm currently confused why Theo is worried about the Terefilia. Are they not working with Ractifus too?
Sarah Lin
You can definitely count on getting these! I'm not sure if it will work out, but I'm actively working with artists now and I intend to provide species illustrations eventually.
I’d love to see some illustrations of species. Personally I’m having a hard time getting a clear picture of that the mudhins are supposed to look like for instance.
Sarah Lin
Appreciate your attention to detail, but can you quote the specific conflicting sentences? So easy for me to make errors when I'm trying to edit older sections.
Nathan Rice
I noticed a number typo. It says that three Authorities and two Rulers have enhancement chambers to resist his disorienting technique when it's meant to be two Authorities and three Rulers.
Sarah Lin
Interesting, I hadn't considered there to be enough organizations, but I can see the use. Will take that into account!
Sarah Lin
While I probably won't maintain one of these, please enjoy the community-made list of sublime materials: https://thebrightestshadow.miraheze.org/wiki/Sublime_Materials
Travis Smith
A list of family/organizations/people of interest might be useful. Also a glossary of terms seems realistic. You could also do a brief written intro of the nine realms. These would all be useful for newer readers while you can let the fan base build a more detailed wiki for materials etc.
Imp
A running index of sublime materials and their properties in the back of the books might be nice.
