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Surprise Update: Appendices and Bonus Book

🕑 Added 2023-06-28 22:15:14 +0000 UTC

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Sarah Lin

1) This guide is written by someone from Earth who has only been referenced, not appeared. The rewritten intro will make this clearer. 2) Yeah, this one ended up being more hint-heavy than my original plan. I am still considering a shorter version for inclusion in the first book.

Travis Smith

Thank you so much for the appendices! They are fantastic! Just some quick thoughts: 1. The intro to the soul crafting tutorial is rather odd. It’s written by someone we haven’t met within 8ish books (I forget the exact number) and it’s written as though it’s for people on Earth. Theo never encountered this guy so it feels like it breaks the fourth wall. Would it make more sense for it to be by Theo during his time on Earth? Maybe some ramblings in his journal? 2. I like the intro to the nine worlds, though it feels like the mentions of organizations and threats are more for the existing fan base than new readers. I agree with previous comments that maybe black bars instead of redacted would be more appropriate for the technology level within the nine worlds. I love the new content! Compliment sandwich over. :P

Tobias Begley

I have faith in you! I have a few guesses already :)

Sarah Lin

Glad you enjoyed it! I'm not just baiting here, so by the end of the series you'll be able to fill in all the redacted information.

Tobias Begley

I loved this! It was super cool to read. I'd love to see an unredacted version one day. The Library of [REDACTED] also makes me think of The Library Between Worlds, from John's books!


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