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Deathseed: Chapters 25-26

🕑 Added 2024-01-20 18:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Devon

pity she stomped the death-seed. Seems like it would have been perfect for one of those missing rooms in her death/staff tower, catercorner from the blood glass. Oooh, looks like that might be a barrel of more death seeds. Hope Theo managed to grab one for Nauda. also, toss Nanjuma a Heavenspear if you can. Not sure what stopped his ascension, but old as hes supposed to be it probably did; and he's the sort you'd actually want advancing.

Runcible Technician

Who called the po-lice?

Elliott

Also as a note, I think this is the first time we’ve had confirmation on the long-standing speculation that the Landguard just police upper Tatian, not all of it.

Sarah Lin

I like writing action just fine unless it's too dense, but TWC as a series intentionally has less of it in the blend, so I'm usually eager once I get to these sequences.

Elliott

Senka is probably lurking around somewhere outside of weirkey range, so even if the fighting four didn’t grab them, it’s possible she might steal one later.

Elliott

They have at least (just?) one heavenspear left, assuming it wasn’t given over for Fithian competitions, so might be a possible gift. If he’s spent so many years thinking Ruler was his limit anyway… maybe he’d accept a shortcut to Authority, even if it means going no further.

Elliott

Landguards gonna Landguard. I bet it makes them nice and easy to manipulate from outside with a few boogey men and promises if you know their base motivations.

Elliott

Very enjoyable chapters! Random author Q, how do you find writing “action” chapters? I’ve heard some authors say they’re a necessary slog of repetition, others say they’re the highlight of writing… this all feels plenty fresh and enjoyable as a reader.

Sarah Lin

Fixed, thanks!

Sarah Lin

Fixed, thanks!

Sarah Lin

Pretty sure I meant "tree", thanks!

Martin Kalum

I find it a bit weird the landguard would attach two 4. Tier soulcrafter in a city, and not the 4 that was harming the community. Something is off. They definitely has enought 4. Especially if it could be fixed by a stronghold in 10 min. I know they busy. But nit that busy.

Desertopa

Seems to be a typo here- "That made Friend Nauda glanced at her strangely." I'm guessing it should be "glance," or maybe "look." As taciturn as Theo is, it took me a moment to realize that the last section wasn't written from his perspective, with his reflecting on the locals threatening a feast. I got a ways into it before it occurred to me "Oh wait, Theo doesn't treat Friend as an honorific."

Jeff Petkau

Typo: "Her earlier attempt to bind one of the flying swords in place had been broken laughably easy." -> "... easily"

AnythingAtAll

"If Nauda could take down the three, at worst she would distract the enemy and at best she might remove their reason for holding the city." I was wondering what three she's referring to, then I realized that was supposed to be tree lol. Or were there three deathseed trees?

Sarah Lin

Eventually, but not this book.

Sarah Lin

Feedback is always fine! I think your argument over wording here is entirely reasonable.

AnythingAtAll

The Landguards really need to have their motives revealed soon. Right now, they're just such incompetent assholes. I hope the party got the deathseeds, at least, after all their trouble.

holothuroid

I find the non combat much more interesting to be honest.

Tokufan178

Thanks for the chapter! New complications arise! Wonder if nanjuma’s remodeling will let him become an authority naturally? I like that the villagers had some agency with hiding the other strong seeds

Patrick

Are we ever going to find out what makes the Land guards tick? Despite Tatian being the first planet in the series and the light Tatian community and Farm guards being so open, the Landguard seem closed off and mysterious. And assholes. Definitely assholes. At some point I'd like to know know about why that is.

Patrick

Find out next week, on the latest episode of Deathseed! *Said in WWF announcer voice*

Just a thought on this line “I have not located the Blazekindler or any other enemy Authorities, but they could be hiding.” Maybe consider concealed instead of hiding. Why would they be hiding? Like that feels like a response to fear… I mean that’s how I see it. Everyone’s got an opinion. Hopefully my unsolicited one is helpful.

Timothy Alexander

So does nauda get the death seeds for her death tower? Or were they not in time?


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