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Deathseed: Chapters 31-32

🕑 Added 2024-02-10 18:00:04 +0000 UTC
Deathseed: Chapters 31-32

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Elliott

(Honestly I’m starting to visualise a doughnut-shaped particle accelerator as one floor!)

Stephen Snyder

I’m starting to get a little confused with Theo’s goals for his floor. Is he trying to fit a corporeal floor and immortality conduit together?

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapter

Elliott

Thanks for the chapters! Pacing is fine even weekly IMO, we don’t need big battles every chapter. Ooh that “S-“ sounds like it might be the one we’ve heard before! Purely unrelated, how is “Salebrante” pronounced? Sal-eh-brant in keeping with the French language flavour to Deuxan?

Elliott

Possible typo: “Fiyu perked up the second the idea occurred to you” - should that be “to her”?


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