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Deathseed: Chapters 37-38

🕑 Added 2024-03-02 18:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Drew

re: the ending author note: I appreciate the differences. Tropes and genre conventions are all well and good, but (speaking as an author myself) the moment they become constrictive to the point that you must choose between conformity or staying true to your story, the latter is the best choice to make.

Irakli Jishkariani

Also, thank you for writing this story. I hope things go well for you, sending you well wishes πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ’πŸ¦₯πŸ¦₯πŸ’πŸ¦‰πŸ˜„πŸ˜„ This book is a bit different from previous books. Previous books were more exploration-based than this one, so being out of "magic and wonder" mode requires different mood for me to start reading but what I read is good. I just have to work for it a bit πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„ about reading character interactions and consequences πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

Irakli Jishkariani

Wooow, despair huh? I don't know why theo ignored hiring lieer level mercenaries for this, he tried in noro yorthin but wasn't he going to try that in noven? Ugustial? I was feeling really nervous about this fight and I expect team to lose something or someone but losing main character will probably destroy or seriously harm story and if not this battle may not be realistic otherwise. From the start they were clearly outmatched if we include all those armaments, now that they are in more disadvantaged situation I feel more certain that they will lose something and really hard. Why didn't they account for other rulers? If theo doesn't feel threatened then nauda should have felt threatened, especially after they match snd lock on their single opponent. This seems big hole in their plans.

Arramos

I really like chapter 38, for a few reasons. Most of this book has been about the characters preparing for this battle, but on both narrative and logical levels, it's not a surprise things aren't going well for them. Their enemies are not shmucks, they're crafty, ambitious people who have also taken the time to prepare for the inevitable. Competent antagonists are a big thing for me. I mentioned in my brief review of Archcrafter that I liked how the Armeau family put the screws to Theo, and seeing that trend continue has me salivating for the next chapters! The inclusion of an army of sorts as a credible threat has me deliriously happy. It's a common theme in all kinds of fiction that only heroes matter, and everyone else can just be swept aside. It's become a sore spot for me, so you can imagine how I find much of your recent work something of a soothing balm.


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