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Skyvenom: Chapters 1-3

🕑 Added 2024-07-06 17:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Wes Brown

So good 👍

Sarah Lin

No more Aathal this book, but you'll definitely see more of it over the course of the series! As for the rest... some things will go exactly as you expect, and you'll get some surprises. ^-^

AnythingAtAll

New Skyvenom chapters! This'll be the first TWC book I follow from the beginning so it's going to hold a special place in my heart. I'm suspicious about Theo immediately dismissing Khaluu as a lead. He didn't even get to see the ancestry records. Part of me thinks he's still coping, both with Khaluu's loss and the powerlessness he feels whenever he can't gather the information he needs for his goals. I wonder if this will crop up eventually or if Khaluu really is a dead end, especially considering that Briganna is definitely the smoking gun among all his former allies, and the fact that the gang is going to spending a lot of time in Deuxan this book. Like I said in the chapter 1 preview, Hurat seems breathtaking. I genuinely couldn't wrap my mind around the scale. I think what really made it all click - or not click, I suppose lol - is how Theo was flying at a decent speed, but the mass of leaves were still shifting slowly. The tree has to be genuinely city-sized for that to make sense. And I guess it does, since Hurat is a literal city lol. My favorite detail is the description of an entire ecosystem below it. Of course there would be. It's how nature fundamentally structures itself even in our own world. If there's a tree with fuck-you sizes like Hurat, it would definitely create a smaller ecosystem that depends on it. Sequoias will probably be toothpicks to trees like these. They definitely reach to the sky, right? No way they're big enough to house a city, but not reach at least the stratosphere. Is Hurat one of the biggest city trees or just the typical size for them? What are the biggest trees in Aathal? Will we see them eventually? I don't have as strong of a sense for Aathali cultures and customs as I do for Tatian, Ichil, Fithe, etc. so I'd definitely love to see more of the world in this book. It's interesting how both Theo and Nauda are facing very similar dilemmas for their Authority/Stronghold designs. They both need a material that bridges the gap between practically opposite sections of their soulhome. The corporealbottle will absolutely be Nauda's sublime material for that purpose, but I feel like Theo will be spending most of the book searching for his. Or maybe not? How hard is it to find a material that can merge Corporeal and Ethereal Monuments? Have there been soulcrafters who've tried creating something similar to what Theo's trying to accomplish? I don't think there have been, but even if there was, I doubt they'd just appear and give him tips. For all intents and purposes, he's treading new ground, so whatever he chooses will likely need to be as audacious as his design. I have no doubt it'll be worth it, but it's funny how he keeps putting himself in situations like these lol. Fiyu is also facing a pretty similar dilemma, but the stakes don't feel as high as Theo and Nauda's designs. She's also treading new ground, but she's still being guided by the path Guchiro set for her. It's not as radical as her Companions' designs, which I understand is a very unfair comparison to make for practically everyone else too lol. Still, while I love that the series still places a lot of a value in following a set but thoroughly researched path to power, I hope Fiyu starts making her own. She's still living in Guchiro's shadow too much for me to consider her independent. It's so nice to see Blacksilver again. They've proven time and time again that even if they're not saints, they're still trying to do good by their community. They have differing ideas on how to go about it - what with Karchibol being the traditionalist, Dhan being the radical, and Janne somewhere in between - but they're all trying to reach the same place. And ten Authorities indeed! I did a double take when Janne said that much like Fiyu did. It hasn't truly sunk in how big Blacksilver is getting until we got a closer look into their daily operations here. Wiltur must be seething. They're bigger than House Crimson now. One Stronghold, but far more Authorities, and operating at a larger scale. I know they have civilian leadership, but unless the ones calling most of the shots are Dhan, Janne, and Karchibol, I don't think we've truly seen Blacksilver's leadership. I'm just as interested in seeing the administrative side as I am the daily workload of their Authorities. Ooh, I just remembered. Is the gang going to manage that competition Antha mentioned in Deahseed? That could be a good gateway into what she and her department does for Blacksilver. Fiyu and Janne's relationship is a pleasant surprise, but also not really a surprise lol. It immediately made sense to me that those two would get along. Honestly, I'm intrigued by Blacksilver's ashen lady. I'm pretty sure she doesn't have a complicated and/or tragic backstory. She's just a very competent soulcrafter who shares Blacksilver's philosophies. But she must have her own set of convictions and beliefs. I'm curious what her opinion is on the traditional-radical dichotomy that Dhan and Karchibol seem to be at odds with. What does she think of other worlds, or hell, just other Fithans outside the Ruling Cities? What about the depths Fithans? And what's up with those robes? Seriously lol, I understand her power is about ash and perhaps some other fundamentally related material, but why the chonky, floofy robes? Do they enhance her power somehow? Or does she just like floofy robes? I mean, definitely great fashion taste, but I'm really curious how her powers work exactly. Maybe we'll get a glimpse in the upcoming confrontation with the Armaeu? The Armaeu is going to be demolished in a fight, no doubt about it, so they're definitely going to be trying their best not to get into that fight. That was kinda their strategy in the Battle for Nlukoko with all the armament towers and Farmguard formations, but even if Theo isn't perfect, he's not one to make the same mistake twice, and underestimating the Farmguards is probably the most he's ever learned from a mistake so far. I fully expect him to never underestimate any soulcrafter he faces ever again, even if they're just Archcrafters or Rulers. Hell, he might start thinking there must be some kind of trick if his enemy starts sending base soulcrafters against him. So the Armaeu aren't going to catch him off-guard again. He's taking all of this very seriously. The question is, what are they going to do? Normally, I'd expect some detailed plan, but Arceon is now a prisoner of the Landguard. Esaire has some talent with planning counters to specific soulcrafting techniques, but he needs resources for that. Resources his family has exhausted and likely doesn't have anymore, and that's not even mentioning their debts to the Demon Court. Honestly, I wouldn't be surprised if they just straight up surrender. They'd grouse and grumble about their pride, but I can see them understanding when they've got nothing left. At least, if not Esaire, then perhaps Amaeli. Maybe they'll try to cut a deal or something. I was very happy when Janne said "The Battle of the Dustwind Plateaus." It's my favorite battle in the series, as I've already said many times, and seeing it get an official title is like discovering your favorite character has a well-written wiki page. Next, I want everyone to refer to the final battle in Deathseed as the Battle/War for Nlukoko, then when they spot the gang walking past them, I want them to go, "Damn, them's the dudes that took the city back!" and ask for an autograph. Absolutely no one in the group revels in that kind of attention, not even Theo, so not only would it be a mark of the progress they've made, it would also be really funny, which is more important. Once again, congratulations on the overwhelming success of Deathseed! You deserve it after all the amazing work you've put out and I can't wait to see you build off of that. Onwards to Skyvenom!

ZMX

Thanks for clarifying!

Sarah Lin

I think the problematic part is when Fiyu thinks "only ten Authorities"? I'm okay with her saying "ten" after "over ten", as it's an exclamation, but I see how the latter reference is contradictory. Krikree is on Aathal and will be seen shortly, while Senka is elsewhere. Arguably Fiyu shouldn't consider Senka, but I think it works.

ZMX

I have a couple of quibbles/questions in Chapter 3: "over ten Authorities" -- I've always interpreted "over X" as meaning "more than X", so since it sounds like they have exactly ten, I'm not sure if this is appropriate. "Most of the others were journeying on Aathal" -- I'm curious who "the others" refers to here. If it's just Theo and Nauda, then it would seem that all of "the others" were journeying on Aathal. If it also includes Senka and Krikree, then it wouldn't be "most" (unless they're also there).

Slightly Morbid

Yay, wait is over! No more dark and dreary turnips.

Samuel Grigg

Easily done. I can't wait to see what comes next.

Sarah Lin

You are correct! I somehow crunched two references into one.

Jerek Kimble

“He talked to me once!” “No way!”

Slim

Hmmm, I wonder if we get stronghold Janne in this book.

Samuel Grigg

You mention Nauda having a notemerald necklace, but I thought she had a notemerald belt and wardstone necklace.

Desertopa

Mysterious in a way, for sure, but I have to imagine they're very much discussed, considering how significant their activities are to House Blacksilver's ascension in power. I'd guess that all the publicly available information about them is shared around quite a lot.

Sarah Lin

No, that one is a mistake! Fiyu should only say titles out loud if she's very troubled or it's a formal situation.

Elliott

Fiyu also said “Friend Nauda” out loud to Theo - not sure if a mistake or a deliberate choice by her.

FoolRegnant

Theo, Nauda, and Fiyu must be so mysterious to the lower ranks of Blacksilver - they mostly spend their time off world, they're usually together, and they keep getting more powerful.

Corwin

Maybe Fiyu can use the Flicker concentrate for a window casing. So the light and heat can be concentrated before it exits her soulhome

Derek Lokey

Wonderful start. I can’t wait to see where it goes.

Sarah Lin

The overall plan is for Theo to use fewer pseudonyms over time, and this wouldn't be inappropriate here, but I'll have to check to see whether it's not an oversight.

Jerek Kimble

Also I’m very happy for the new adventure to start!

Tokufan178

Happy to see Skyvenom starting! Interesting that the Armeaus flipped positions with the gang. Unfortunately for them I don’t think there’s any ascensions coming for reinforcement.

Jerek Kimble

Is Theo going by his real name with Blacksilver now? Fiyu used his real name with Janne. I’m not mad about him no longer using pseudonyms, fwiw.

Michael

Let’s goooo! Glad you took time off between books but also equally glad to have you back!


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