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Skyvenom: Chapters 8-9

🕑 Added 2024-07-27 17:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Inv7ctus

Hmmmmmm, power ful deuxan ally you say. Hmmmmm, perhaps a demand emperor from earth who will aid them in their fight against vistgil?? Hmmmmm, Foreshadowing!

Sarah Lin

She has both, actually. Notemerald belt and warding necklace.

guillaume nguyen

"When the light faded, Theo's vision had been burned purple. Nauda had blood across her arms and stomach, and her defensive necklace glowed incandescent, but she had withstood the assault." You mean defensive belt ?

Irakli Jishkariani

I hate deuxans, rules and politics for every goddamn thing.

Sarah Lin

I did the same thing when editing! Thanks for the catch.

Drifted

It seems as though there may be a typo in these chapters around paragraph 20 or so from the start: In the lines "Sartozi stared at him, for the first time puzzled, as if he had never imagined Theo could say such a thing. The shift left Theo completely what taboo he'd violated." should the "completely what" perhaps be something along the lines of "completely unsure of what" instead? I didn't actually notice the first time I read through this when the chapters first released, and now I am wondering what I mentally inserted here XD

DiAlpha

Contemplating?

Elliott

Yeah, you aren’t meant to like Esaire - he’s a reflection of Theo’s previous childishness (personal obsession like it’s all about him/main character syndrome). I suspect Esaire’s fate is either “grow up & learn” or “die” because those are the two recurring paths we’ve seen for people.

Nathan Ito-Prine

I assumed it was meant to be "considering" or "questioning"

Asam Zaman

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Slightly Morbid

I can stand Esaires more now when he has been delegated to a lesser cog in a larger machinery. After him fleeing enough times, it was time to move on.

Devon

he's everything Theo, but culturally appropriate to the genre. And a bit of a french twist. IE, a classic character foil

AnythingAtAll

Wow, Nauda and Fiyu were stronger than I thought. We're all familiar with their techniques by now, but I think facing off against a Stronghold really puts things into perspective. Fiyu is the only one that managed to injure Sartozi, and all she needed was get one hit in. If he didn't have those shockwaves, I think the battle could've gone differently. In that regard, Fiyu needs to master her incorporeality technique, and more importantly, find counters against AoE attacks since they've consistently been her kryptonite. However, beyond that, I think even after everything, I'd been underestimating her. Her cantae blade is nasty. And I'm so glad we've reached a point where I can extend the same honor to Nauda! I don't think she's been soulcrafting at Authority that long, especially since she hasn't even unified her towers yet. That didn't stop her from tanking a Stronghold's all-out lethal attack. I don't think she was even crippled! She was ready to jump around the battlefield right after the attack, and once the battle was over, she was nursing her wounds, but she was treating them as just that - wounds. Not fatal or cripping injuries. Just wounds that her soulhome is probably starting to heal already. She'll be a monster once she catches up. However, conversely, she needs offense. She's unmatched at defense, but she never really got a good hit in at Sartozi despite being getting close to him a bunch of times. Methinks it's time to weaponize some bees and mushrooms. We all know how optimized Theo likes his soulcrafting, so it's funny that his biggest weakness in this fight is something outside that. I'm curious how he handles the skyvenom. However, his soulhome does still have inherent weaknesses. His singularities are absolute monsters, so I suppose I shouldn't be surprised that he's been constantly interrupted from using them since all the way back at Bloodcrete. They're so powerful that there's really no counter against them other than running away or making sure Theo isn't able to cast it completely. We've seen the latter a lot. His main weakness seems to be his casting time. Beyond his gravitational fields, the moments when an enemy gets the drop on him is almost always because he's too slow in unleashing his techniques. *Especially* his singularities. That seems to be a consequence of creating such intricate cantae flows. All of his techniques are lethal or super effective, but they all require the kinds of cantae flows only an optimization nut would obsess over. I'm not sure how he could mitigate them since they're hard-baked into his soulhome, but if he could, he'll be facing off against soulcrafters a tier above him regularly - and winning every time. On that note, I'd actually like to see Theo playing support more. Theo alone is a lethal soulcrafter with multiple blindspots that can and have been exploited. Theo with allies is unstoppable. Having combat partners covers for his main weaknesses. His slow casting time is mitigated by his allies keeping the enemies busy and that also buys him time to fully manifest his singularities. Not to mention, Nauda and Fiyu are really good at keeping enemies busy. Nauda is a wall that doesn't budge so her opponents are always engaged. Fiyu can strike from anywhere and her hits are almost always lethal, so her opponents are constantly on the lookout for her, knowing that taking attention away from her means a quick death, but often not immediately knowing that doing so takes attention away from others, who can themselves get good hits in. Which is perfect for Theo's singularities. Sartozi would've been able to run away as a Stronghold, but one moment of Nauda binding him and it's over. Fiyu would have a harder time keeping him in place, but her and Theo could keep him in a catch-22. If he focuses on Theo's singularities, he'll constantly be stabbed by Fiyu. If he focuses on Fiyu, Theo's singularities will keep chipping at his strength the way they did against Nifanos until he has nothing left. All three of them? It's not completely a guarantee, but I'd bet on them winning. That's likely what Sartozi realized by the end. Someone at some point was going to get another good hit in, anf another, and another - then it'll be over. I really do wonder how a full-blown fight would've gone. The main trio can keep Sartozi in check. That leaves four Deuxan Authorities against the party's three, which seems imbalanced, but there's still Krikree and Senka. Krikee always seems to be forgotten by her enemies until it's too late, while Senka is Senka. Again, not a complete guarantee, but I think the party would've won. Not without collateral damage, but they would've won. However, as always, politics. Even if they killed all the Deuxans there, they'd just bring bigger forces to bear against them. It's better this way. I won't deign to give Esaire anymore attention after this since the Armaeu are clearly still going to stick around for a while, unless he does something notable other than obsessing over Theo. It's frustrating that they're still here, but like I said last week, I fully trust SL with where she's going. I think the final boss will be Sartozi. Fiyu and Nauda already had their badass moments against him, but not Theo. I think it'll be Theo vs Sartozi in the end. Not sure who the others will be fighting, but the book is just starting so we're probably going to see who in the coming chapters. They're entering the higher levels of soulcrafting now. Fighting Strongholds was going to happen sooner or later. Man, I really hate Deuxan. I'm hoping they meet a powerful figure that isn't so uppity, inflexible, dishonorable, and violent for a change. Sartozi had some semblance of honor, but that's not nearly enough.

Elliott

Thanks for the chapters! Interesting to see a Stronghold in battle again, it feels like he must have *plenty* more techniques up his sleeves. Minor typo: “left Theo completely what taboo” -> “left Theo completely lost on what taboo” or something similar.

Patrick

Meh. I've loved this series, but Esaires continued existence in this series has been killing my interest.

Tokufan178

Esaire’s true power is xianxia feud escalation

CommodoreCaptain

I love seeing how mature Theo has gotten, yes the poison is hampering him but he immediately shifts to support opposed to trying to brute force through it. I hope he ends up using it as a power boost at some point and shows Esaire that no matter what he’s better than him.

Imp

Esaire is such a hack

FoolRegnant

Deuxan really does like to make everything more complicated than it needs to be. I just finished a reread, and it really is amazing how much of the conflict throughout the series has been caused by Deuxan arrogance and cultural inflexibility

Donncha crowley

Esarie is unkillable and will be the final villain 🦹‍♀️ of the series

Mr. tj333

Interesting developments.


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