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Skyvenom: Chapters 24-25

🕑 Added 2024-09-21 17:00:08 +0000 UTC

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guillaume nguyen

First time I heard his name, I had Spider Dave in my head for the better part of the day XDXDXD

Readeon (Patreon Reading Extension)

Wooh, that's a long one!

AnythingAtAll

Yeah, Deuxan is making no effort at all to show some hidden moral grey in them. This whole trial almost makes their politics sociopathic. I know politics tends to be sociopathic, but Deuxan puts those qualities front and center. They almost seem proud of it. Seriously, what happened in Deuxan for so much of its society to be this predisposed to callousness, if not violence? This is now exhibit number 'I stopped counting by book 6' of Theo showing his proficiency in politics. I doubt he'd have thrived as a politician in Earth, but he's so in his element in the Nine. When was the last time Nauda or Fiyu played politics in the same scales as he had, much less as competently? I'd even say he was pretty creative in playing to Deuxan sensibilities, the way he said he seeks "to end this." But I think the best showcase of that is how he navigated the conversation with the Demon Court. I'm even more clueless about Deuxan politics than Theo, but when a Stronghold basically kidnaps you, you understand every word you say is serious business. I'm surprised that they actually have more freedom than it seemed in the Wakespire epilogue. So obviously influenced by Vistgil, but apparently not controlled. That makes them even more interesting because they're not representing anyone's interests but their own, at least directly. They've gone from obvious antagonist to somewhat loose cannon. That being said, I'm not impressed by how much resources they've expended for alleged information on the Tereaves based on the word of a bunch of random people. Surely they'd run a background check on their supposed informants first. Although they did seem eager, maybe even desperate to expand in the Wakespire epilogue. They seemed oddly scared of the Salebrante. Definitely a loose cannon that I hope doesn't explode. I didn't know there was an appendix posted in the past that's apparently written by Dave. That changes the conversation with the Mercury Stronghold. Theo's caution is absolutely warranted, but I feel like if he'd accepted, he would've gained a *very* powerful ally right there. Then again, maybe getting through this whole mess without help from Dave would make him a lot more receptive to offering his protection for when Vistgil inevitably finds out about them. Though now I'm wondering even more what the Mercury Court is even going to do here. If they're already a neutral party, then they can't have much of a role for the rest of the book. But then again, I don't think they were introduced here just to be a teaser for future books. Maybe as a bulwark against the Demon Court?

ZJJ

Fair enough. It's true that the Deuxans don't care about the details of their lives so I can understand why Theo might reduce those relationships to such terms in that setting.

Sarah Lin

I guess I understand your critique, but I just meant Theo to be making clear that they offended his two allies in two different ways, since none of them know him.

ZJJ

“…There he hired mercenaries who nearly killed my first companion," Theo gestured to Fiyu and then Nauda, "and then his family invaded the home of another close ally." I’ve been wondering, is fiyu the “first companion” and Nauda the “close ally”? This seems an odd way to designate them if so. Nanjuma could be the ally whose home was invaded, but that leaves out Nauda since “first companion” is singular. Or is Theo simply using his terminology loosely since the Deuxans don’t care all that much about the details?

Sarah Lin

Fixed, thanks.

ZJJ

It's interesting that Theo was referred to as Bartolo by Tabrien in this Convocation, but Esaire switched to Peanen in Deathseed and Nourise referred to him as Theo in Chapter 20 of this book when talking to Nauda. So is Theo's name going to be spread among the other courts or will one of his aliases hold on a while longer?

ZJJ

Small typo: "And just how did that come about? As the Silver Gourmand said, you have already traveled many wor(l)ds, but Slest as well?"

Runcible Technician

Political escalations are rarely done well in fiction, but this is pretty damn good. If you consider that skilled crafters are the equivalent of battleships in international waters it's easy to see how Inter-world Wars could start with the right spat in some random place at the wrong time.

benjamin ireland

What a lovely present to finish off the evening with

Elliott

Haha final paragraph is a great chapter finish. Impact!

Tokufan178

Thanks for the chapter! Theo’s (justified) paranoia holding him back the dramatic irony is pretty great. Looking forward to what accilonia has to offer

Slightly Morbid

It's nice to be back on track with the original plot.

Adamanus

Nauda's Aathali fruit might help them more than I thought. Also, I can't help cracking up at Emperor Dave. He doesn't even go by David.


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