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Skyvenom: Chapters 34-35

🕑 Added 2024-11-02 17:00:08 +0000 UTC

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SF

Great stuff, as always, thanks!

ZMX

There might be a typo in Chapter 35. "Theo had no idea the full extent of their resources" -- should this be "Theo had no idea _of_ the full extent of their resources"?

AnythingAtAll

It's time for Krikree to shine!! I'd been waiting for this moment, especially after SL mentioned that she'll be playing a big role in this book. Nyuba actually brought up a good point I forgot. It's highly, highly unlikely someone like Krikree ascends past Ruler - but that just makes her ascension to Authority all the more exciting! What could her form be? How will it affect her? Will she become incredibly smart? Strong? A queen Slescan? A hybrid worker queen, even? So many possibilities, and I'm glad it's going to come at a pivotal time since it just makes her ascension all the more important. Which it is! For a minute there, I genuinely thought Lalye was hitting on Theo lol. Not sure how I'd have felt about that. Probably just confusion more than anything. I'm pleasantly surprised and a bit confused (pleasantly) though that she had such a quick turn around on Theo. It's usually the most zealous that don't change and she certainly seemed plenty zealous. It's unlikely we see more of her given that Ostic's own non-Stronghold representative Chlira barely got any screentime as well, but I have my headcanon on Lalye's 'backstory' given her own words. She probably never guessed in a hundred Deuxan years that she'd become an Authority, and she probably got help from Sartozi or his inner court, but she ascended regardless. That leaves her both grateful for Sartozi's help and suddenly keenly aware just how many responsibilities are saddled on an Authority, much less beyond. That's why she was so angry. She got a taste of power, found out how hard it really is to be in that position, and felt incredibly offended that a bunch of outsiders would spurn not just Sartozi's 'kindness' to her, but also all the responsibilities that anyone in their position would entail in a Deuxan court. 'Cause the gang is certainly causing a lot of paperwork right now. Then when she saw that Theo isn't actually a dismissive, reckless git, she realized he and his friends really are just caught in a difficult situation, then quickly reevaluated them. If I were to guess, the Strongholds who'll be on Esaire's side is the Treasurer and the treacherous Tatian while the other three will be on Theo's side. Of course, given the gang's propensity for trouble, this will probably be wrong and Nyuba will start a vendetta of her own for, uh, raising a worker bug like Krikree to Authority and violating the sanctity of oppressive Slescan castes. Or something. At least Nourise and Sartozi are very unlikely to turn against them at this point. They're a good embodiment of that age-old adage. The world doesn't hate you, it just doesn't care. If Theo can keep them happy, they'll stay in their lane. That Immortality Furnace sounds like a textbook case of either an incomplete Conduit or one that is complete but only as a semi-Conduit. That will probably fail him eventually, and it's an interesting point of failure that implicitly tells us his character beyond the demeanor he's already shown. He must've been a greedy man who earned a lot of money in his lifetime, then felt his mortality eventually drawing near. Given the lack of Conduit materials in Socirro, he decided to take a shortcut and leverage his main resource as the fuel for his lifespan. Now he's known as the Treasurer. What would make it even better is if he actually did have a chance to make a better blueprint that could've housed a Conduit at some point in his life, but his arrogance led him to believe he'll be fine as long as he has the money, and he ended up being semi-right. Either way, this is once again an example of this wonderful Doylist feature of soulcrafting I love so much - it is as much a reflection of the soulcrafter's inner character as it does their strength. What does a money-fed Immortality Furnace tell us about the Treasurer? I'm anticipating some more miscommunication between Nauda and Fiyu, but I'm expecting them to be no more than minor events. I was so happy that Fiyu actively made an effort to end their usual miscommunication cycle and actually talked. It's an interesting conversation, too. The gap between Tatian and Ichili customs certainly seem exaggerated in comparison to our own Earth culture, but they really are dealing with fundamentally similar problems. I don't think there's a solution to their predicament since it'd be unfair for one to force the other to her preferred relationship pace other than compromise, but that's exactly why it's so important they constantly talk about it. Only they can figure out which middle they want to meet at, and it's a middle that'll change as their relationship also changes. When that kiss finally comes... Lastly, there's this detail I found interesting. Lalye didn't make a big deal about two women being in a relationship. Is Deuxan fine with same-sex relationships? Is it just Socirro? Is it the entire Nine? I doubt Lalye was just being polite since she's already been established as a former enemy and is an equal, not a superior.

ZJJ

Could the Immortal remodel for an immortality conduit and then buy the desperate catalyst--aka bottled ascension--from Krimmile and get the same result as ascending to Dominion? Maybe Theo could broker the deal and get a discount on his desired thought-made-flesh sublime material.

Drew

lmao at Fiyu shadow-slapping Nauda when she meant to caress her cheek... genuinely hilarious

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters. Glad to see Theo staying ahead of his problems and having his nerdy obsession be used on an interesting problem. That level of assistance could seriously be valuable. Will he sell it again as something that E cannot match?

holothuroid

[Krikree Authority. Reader very happy.]

Travis Smith

Thank you for the chapter!

Nandan

Thank ye for the chapter! The final sentence of chapter 35 made me laugh. I can understand that he has no intention of becoming a tired old man again. But he still thinks of himself as a cynical, bitter old man, which seems close to being tired of life... and is a tiring mindset, certainly.

Delta

“Theo explained what he knew, beginning with the basics and then even including the secrets Senka had told him about keeping the materials and formations in the soulhome through ascension.” So tantalizing, I wish we got a little more detail. I suppose that will come when the gang make their own Immortality Conduits! Thanks for the chapters!

Tokufan178

Thanks for the chapter! It’s good to see the gangs esoteric knowledge paying off beyond soulcrafting, sometimes I forget how much more they know than the average person. I’ve really liked the strongholds through Skyvenom, they’re like the embodiments of their kingdoms but still feel like people. And seeing our protagonists rise to the level of negotiating with strongholds has me more excited for the return to norro yorthin and how they’ll influence the region. Was feeling somewhat down on the politicking a few chapters ago but I think it’s coming together really well now


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