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Skyvenom: Chapters 44-45

🕑 Added 2024-12-07 18:00:06 +0000 UTC

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guillaume nguyen

Theo still haven't understood that he needs to stop waving his flag XDXDXD

Adamanus

I agree about the missing Authority tier singularity material though. I feels like Theo should worry about that more. I'm sure there's a plan to fill it in eventually, but *Theo* doesn't appear to be fretting over one.

John

Krikree has been established as a member of the group for long enough, and is an interesting enough character for us to be interested in Krikree POV’s absolutely. And beyond that I would find it weird if someone disliked them because she’s so lovable as well

ZachRE

I would imagine the reason he's ok with letting the basement stay empty is that he doesn't have the perfect ideas for it yet and just the fact he has one makes his Cantae more intense all by itself. Even opening a small part did this much for him. A massive empty basement at this time is just limitless possibility to him.

Sarah Lin

Fixed, thanks.

Sarah Lin

Fixed, thanks.

Desertopa

I might be wrong, but I didn't understand it to be important to fill out one's basement before progressing to the next floor the way it would be for an ordinary floor. IIRC most people who build basements don't even start on them before Stronghold, and if it were more advantageous to fill them out early, I'd think everyone who could possibly manage it would make a point of trying to do it as early as possible.

Elliott

Sarah I know you’ve written before worrying about deviating from the “main 3” viewpoints, but 1. this is awesome and a lovely contrast of insight compared to the ascension of Nanjuma (whom the audience don’t know so well) and 2. there are loads of us who would love reading Krikree ascending *every* week! 😍

V M

Theo's basement is still completely empty, and he hasn't made a second cantae core. It's not immediately evident to me that he'd proceed to ascending without these progressed. Anyone understand why he's OK with these being incomplete?

Fleetpanda

He was testing to see if Theo would be cautious enough not to fall for vestigil traps. I’m hoping this is him though. Something like a “ok you passed”

FoolRegnant

Well, I get the feeling Dave may have gotten impatient with Theo's cautious nature

ZJJ

In rockworld she read about ascension… I just noticed this when I reread the chapters. Apparently Navim-thinkrock taught Krikree not only geometry but also how to read! I remember the time when lines on paper representing the idea of people in a hive had no meaning to her—she just ate the paper and declared it not food. Krikree-sister has come so far! I’m so proud of her! Oh, and great job Navim! Maybe someday he’ll be Navim-sister?

Tokufan178

You’re probably right

Accio123

I may have misinterpreted it, but I thought it was possible she may have been referring to meeting Theo for the first time as her strange encounter especially since the power lifter her off the ground was likely Theo's reversed gravity

AnythingAtAll

Krikree not queen!! ✊✊✊

ZJJ

Edit suggestion: Once he would have took out the largest loan he could Once he would have taken out the largest loan he could

Tokufan178

Thanks for the chapter! Super happy for Krikree, and repurposing the meat was genius, now I’m curious about her strange encounter. I feel like the trio has constantly been on the backhand with aggression the whole book. They’re not in a great spot sure but you’d think some offense would help with their defense.

holothuroid

You can forcibly Weirkey people? I didn't know. Very cool. This sentence has unusual grammar: "Once he would have took"

ZJJ

I really liked these chapters! Now, was Theo abducted by Essaire or did the Mercury Court spirit him away to talk to Dave?

Jerek Kimble

Ah thanks. Do you remember where? I wanna go back and read it for my own memory. I’ll reread it all if I have to but targeted fits my schedule right now better

ZJJ

He said he would wait until his fifth floor unless he found the right material... although I'm not sure why.

Travis Smith

Please don’t ever kill off Krikree. Krikree best scout!

Mr. tj333

Oh damn. Good chapters.

Jerek Kimble

Krikee!!!! I like that she is keeping to herself rather than trying to become a queen. Did I miss Theo getting a central material for his Authority floor?


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