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Chapter 3: Page 140-141 (REVISED)
🕑 Added 2022-04-17 17:17:39 +0000 UTCThe dialog when I first published these pages didn't sing to me. It didn't have the same weight and the black speech bubbles shows that the Prisoner wanted to be seen as a god-like figure. Which makes it even better when he gets punched in the face. The original pages are included in this post for easy comparison.
These are minor changes all in all. But I think it adds to the story and I wanted to post them here first.
