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"Take these away from me..." - Part 1
🕑 Added 2023-01-29 17:53:27 +0000 UTCThis story directly follows the events of I've got to stop eating these
The feast is set, the terms of the bet are agreed, and Kari and Yaz are hungry. But which of them will end up eating the most, unknowingly dooming themselves and their spouse to the direst consequences? Will Shelly regret setting such punishing terms? Or will it be dumbbells at dawn for Tim?
Only one thing is certain: they'll both do anything to avoid losing!
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Hope you enjoy this. I've had to split it into three parts rather than the initially planned two, just because the next section wasn't quite finished yet, so apologies if this cuts of a little abruptly, or feels like a bit of a filler episode! (It's definitely filling for a couple of characters, hah...).
The next part is nearly done, and should be posted before the end of next week.
As always, thank you so much for your support, and please let me know what you think. Feedback of any kind - good, bad, even ugly - is very welcome!
- Picture from We Made it Big to come later today for Stuffed Tier patrons.
- Update on other projects tomorrow! 😊
Comments
Adriano Ziffer
Well, the cliffhanfer is surely a nice touch: I bet that they're gonna be even.
Joe
Incredible story!! God Kari really is a greedy hog, love all the pig comparisons she engenders in her sister in law, she is the walking definition of a greedy piggy! So fat and full of herself my god. Her vs Abby over a box of doughnuts would be fantastic
