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Cataclysm War | Chapter 31: Law and Order (First Draft)

🕑 Added 2026-01-08 22:15:19 +0000 UTC

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Mr Exar Kun

Tftc

Dominick Ruiz

Tftc

Hannibal Forge

Glad you enjoyed it!

Hannibal Forge

Nope. They're there to stay.

Alexander Rodriguez

Great Chapter! I’m glad to see some of the other characters get to experience some of the mindfuckery Ace had to deal with when he was going through his tutorial. Based on my interpretation of the story so far most characters who learn what he’s had to go through haven’t truly understood how ‘real’ the tutorial was for him. This looks like a solid basis for others to understand him on a more visceral level. Looking forward to the next one!

dragon

I'm sure that was quite the mindfuck, to suddenly have all those false memories and then realize it wasn't real, also question, will the false memories fade away/vanish similar to maybe how dreams do after you wake up?

Hannibal Forge

Eh, I think that's just a level of stereotype that is silly to me. Synthra is more likely to be omega hormonal. Aylar is too naturally level-headed imo.

Kaywye

Okay, finally was able to read this chapter. Is is well written with a good scenario, and a believable solution, showing what kind of sovereign Aylar would be. I'm glad you didn't go too hormonal with her being in the family way. I've read many a story where a practical but reasonable queen gets pregnant and turns into a terror for the sake of her unborn child. Glad it didn't lean that way.

Hannibal Forge

Good catch!

J Snyder

The Dagger-Master of the Guard continent, Ilsan Matrovar, saluted and bowed thereafter, speaking only once she straightened. Not sure, but is “continent” supposed to say “contingent”?

Hannibal Forge

Which part appealed to you the most? Heh. Give me something Bryn!

Bryn

Thanks for the chapter! This is one of my favourites!

Hannibal Forge

Glad you aren't bored by the lack of action!

Durabler

I love this chapter, giving them the raw emotions of what could be, I need more, thank you for the chapter!

Hannibal Forge

No worries man <3

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter! Working on feedback still.


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