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Cataclysm War | Chapter 38: What Words Cannot Explain (First Draft)

🕑 Added 2026-01-10 22:44:02 +0000 UTC

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Mr Exar Kun

Princess-cum-Queen... 🧐 hahaha tftc.

Dominick Ruiz

Tftc

Hannibal Forge

Glad it seemed to hit the mark!

Kaywye

Yes. All of the yes. Very well written. Everyone has their agency, and everyone weilds that agency with consideration of others, while still aiming for their own goals. And the kiss that felt neither forced, nor...what is the word...ineffectual? Not the right word, but similar. At any rate, we'll done. I am out for dinner atm, and reading this while waiting for my food was a great way to spend my time!

Hannibal Forge

I take it you think the kiss felt natural as an escalation then?

Hannibal Forge

I take it that the kiss felt justified and not rushed?

87894354

SQUEE!!!! I mean, uh, thanks for the chapter.

BW13307

I liked it, great setup for their relationship, the acceptance that they’re not in love yet but there’s definitely something between them and how the potential futures of the dungeon influenced it, it was nice to see in the last chapter as well how he was better at reading her body language.

Hannibal Forge

This one made me nervous. Would love any and all honest feedback.


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