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Regarding Plot Holes in B1 & B2
🕑 Added 2026-01-17 01:06:07 +0000 UTCHello folks! Quick update.
I am aware of a few lingering points of unresolved frustration in Books 1 & 2:
Leonidas' [Psionic Communication Skill]
The lack of Parents' perspective and Grandparents' military buildup POV.
[Platinum Chests]
Ceruviel's [Rebuild the Archon Order] Quest
Various character inconsistencies
I'll likely address these either with retroactive edits during second drafting, on impulse, or in the case of Book 1, by editing / adding content as needed during my pre-publisher edit sweep. If you note any that aren't listed here, please tell me in the Comments and I'll add them to my list!
Thanks for pointing them out, please keep doing so, and I'll 'publish and notify' whenever a chapter has been significantly altered to fix a plot point, so you may get alerts for existing chapters as they're fixed, with a (Second Draft) tag instead of (First Draft).
As a note and reminder: I am a Pantser, so I often write things with zero pre-planning and put them in based entirely on "What would be fun here?" without thinking about it too hard. I don't plot my books basically at all, barring some very vague key story beats I need to hit, which explains why sometimes it can be... chaotic, for lack of a better term.
Thanks for reading, I'm off to write more!
Comments
Hannibal Forge
You'll see parents' POV soonTM.
Kaywye
I'm like everyone else. "Oooh loot boxes!" That being said, I just assumed you would get to the parents when you got to them, and the other two were happening in the background without explanation. But hey, if you can give us occasional tidbits from their pov, I will be thrilled.
Hannibal Forge
That remains to be seen!
Thragnar
I meant the rebuild quest is something I figured would take a good long while, kind of an overarching sub plot. The chests, im curious about, but he's already got an upgradeable armour set. So I'm not sure what they could give him that's worthwhile.
