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Cataclysm War | Chapter 88: So It Begins (First Draft)

🕑 Added 2026-01-29 12:19:15 +0000 UTC

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Hannibal Forge

I appreciate the thoughts and the comment! Thanks for engaging! I won't spoil what happens, but I hope you enjoy it!

Hannibal Forge

HEH just wait.

Redsennin94

Tftc! And i was hoping the grandparents would be more of a ,,i play the bad guy for the sake of humanity" but every time we see them they become more fanatic. Not really a fan of the religious fanatics. Same as the Svartfenn. They make cood allies

Hannibal Forge

Heh just wait.

Kaywye

This is great. I want Leonidas to show his grandparents and Yvrain what exactly they have arrayed themselves against. For the longest time I was willing to give his grandparents a bit of a pass simply because of who they were related to...but after seeing what they've done amd how they think, they need to get spanked.

BW13307

Can’t wait for them to get what’s coming to them, the grandparents sound more insane every time they’re shown though I can understand why and Yvrain is obviously in way over her head especially considering she didn’t bother to head Xarinas advice.

Hannibal Forge

Glad you enjoyed it brother!

Jb

This is so nice to get off work and get to read this thank you

Mr Exar Kun

Tftc I wonder if his grandfather will call off the attack or even turn on his own forces rather then fight his own blood?

Hannibal Forge

We have the advantage of narrative insight!

Silver Dawn

This whole offensive sounds misguided and doomed to fail. However that is reality, bad or lack of intelligence has been the downfall of many would be conquers throughout history.

Hannibal Forge

Good catch! Thanks. Thoughts on the Chapter overall?

J Snyder

Culpable- ‘Deserving of blame or censure; blameworthy’ ‘…they would be far less culpable to the usual means of suppressing others of their rank.’ I think you should replace culpable with ‘vulnerable’. Unless I’m missing something culpable doesn’t work here.

Hannibal Forge

Thanks for the feedback, Bryn!

Bryn

Thanks for the chapter! Looks like all the ingredients will be there for some serious empire building by the end of this battle

Hannibal Forge

Would love feedback on this!

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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