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40. Masquerade

🕑 Added 2019-11-14 03:25:26 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

No spoilers but I already have a plan.

Xtriver

Perhaps she could devour some mages potential, and once she is strong enough begin to learn. The potential she devoured up until she is able to tap into magic would be nascent and of course have no immediate impact upon her power once she is able to wield magic. Ari is already exceptionally powerful for her age, giving her more than necessary without struggle simply because she reached a milestone would take a lot away from the story. However if devoured potential could be stored for future growth, not an immediate boost but more of a long term gain. I think that would fit in with her bloodline abilities quite well.

L Pedersen

Yes and it's been hinted that Ari's sire has some nasty magic shit going on. I hope Ari picks that up once she gets stronger

Mecanimus

Mages that are turned retain their powers (like Melusine) but lose a lot of their potential. Masters can develop an ability for magic.

Mecanimus

Hssss ;)

Mecanimus

And you are correct. Edit made, thank you.

Mecanimus

No spoilers ;)

Mecanimus

Still writing strong. And I have plans. It's been almost two months I think, it's too late to stop now. ;)

Mecanimus

Well it would not be enough, but the good old "Fuck off." mat is better anyway.

Joseph

From the dream, I thought vampires can not cast spells?

Man I'm pissed. I hope she gathers her allies and fucking murders them! Oh sorry about the language Ariane, please don't eat me 😱

carebear90

Just admit, that you're stalking me. ^^ Joking aside... I'm allways open for suggestions. Every time I find something "new" (for me), I'm wondering, why nobody ever recommended it before. I agree with the "lesson"-part. I don't dare to assume, any of her allies are safe now from "death for character growth", but it is an important lesson at this point. She seemed to get cocky a bit in the last few chapters. Understandably so after her success over the last decade. But while she got away from Charleston with a scare, it wasn't really a faillure. Here she made a deal, she couldn't keep, because she didn't took the situation seriously enough. And I think it was pretty well established how important deals are for her bloodline. I like this solution to bring her back on track. I still hope, she expands her household a bit. ^^

blub01

"Instead of answering, I run towards the darkness. Fillmore does not pull the trigger, not that it would stop me, but even the most soundproof ceiling " I feel like this is cut off.

L Pedersen

Hey Matthias we share good taste in fiction it seems. And yeah I really think this was a very skillfully written scene. Red got just enough character that I felt her death but she wasn't around long enough to make me feel like she got thrown under the bus. It's actually really hard to put into words why I'm so okay with this death even though I'm not. I think it's because it serves to teach Ari important lessons and let her grow as a character without having to kill her vassal Dalton or her friend Loth. So good job authorperson, I salute you!

carebear90

I'm only glad, the redhead died so soon and not later, after there was a chance to form a real relationship. The sadest part for me in "vampire the masquerade: bloodlines" was, wenn they kill your ghoul and you can't do a thing about it. Other than send her on her way, because you know what would be comming for her otherwise from a previous playthrough. But the first time hit me harder, then I would have epected... As did this scene... I wouldn't have expected to have any impact on me at all from just a few lines of dialocue. This was very well done.

L Pedersen

yesssss.... There will be a reckoning....

j0ntsa

She can stilln return the favor and butcher them all

Svensonsen

I must thank you. I'm really happy I found such a talented writer.

Svensonsen

It was nothing!! I'm just glad that it helped you to develop your story and style.😁😁 I just hope you continue to grow and develop more story's with time. Please keep it up!! It would be disastrous if you stopped.

Mecanimus

Glad you liked it and the party part was hard. Cheers!

Gardor

Another reason not to get a welcome mat. Whether or not my neighbors are vampires, I don't want them getting any ideas.

Mecanimus

Thanks for the day zero support Sven.

Mecanimus

Glad you felt something. Don't worry we'll see them again.

Mecanimus

It's more based on intent than form in my story. So yes.

ColourMyAlphabet

Aww, I was looking forward to a new member to the crew. Poor girl, "feels like everything but victory" for you and me both Ari. It may have taken more time, but I really enjoyed the party scene, good job and thanks for the chapter!

Svensonsen

Thx for the chap.!! Really good as always. This is a real story

L Pedersen

My god but I want her to track them all down and make them suffer. Fillmore. Belinda. That aristocratic man who led the soldiers. They must all suffer before they die. Though it's probably a blessing in disguise that redhead died before the bargain was complete otherwise Ari may not have had a choice about what came next.

Gardor

Do written invitations count as permission to enter a house?

Mecanimus

Failing is not the same as breaking an aoth, fortunately.

MagicWafflez

... poor ari, she didn't keep her word... i hope she'll be okay, this seems a lot worse than the pig incident... at least in how she felt about it.

Mecanimus

Apologies for the delay, the early party scene was harder to write than I anticipated. Enjoy!


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