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51. Prince of Azure and Gold.

🕑 Added 2020-01-12 15:18:55 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

Edit made thanks!

Mecanimus

Edit made thanks.

SV

The order of Gabriel is collection religious fanatics -> is a collection of religious fanatics

Parker Groseclose

Thanks for the chapter, some corrections you may want to touch up I made it clear that I was not jealous but the two pretty faces I front of me are still worried -> in front of, not I front of “Loth sent me to central America poppet, however I did not stay here. here->there When I left Georgia, I only had clothes on my back. ->I only had the clothes on my back

Joseph

Her life is potentially very long and it is not impossible she may at some point end up in his reality. Securing his protection and a trip home now in that case would be a easy add.

Mecanimus

Haha you’re more than welcome. I could say a lot about your observation but that would be a spoiler. The only thing I’ll say is that Sinead has not charmed Ari using magic. He doesn’t have to.

L Pedersen

Ohhh I enjoyed that. I really like the interaction between Ari and Sinead, it's also nice to see that, for a time at least, she'll have someone else she can rely on who knows her completely. Though I do wonder about their exchange after they first return to the dream. It seems like Sinead charmed her but maybe it was just good old manipulation? Or maybe to Sinead they're inseperable and the distinction is pointless. I also can't wait to see what else they'll find in the prison, I wonder if there might be another vampire in there? Or perhaps some other supernatural critter since it seems very odd that the order would keep a vampire alive for any reason rather than just killing it as soon as they could. And I wonder if the princess will be a female version of Sinead or something more interesting. Gawd I love this story so much! Thank you so much for rendering thy thoughts into print and allowing us to partake of them!

Mecanimus

I got something in mind. Don’t worry.

Mecanimus

Nah it’s really against his philosophy.

Crushow

Perhaps a trade, so Ari receives the prisoners of his kind? I doubt Sinead likes everyone of his race, and when he finds a way to return to his reality.

carebear90

"Unbound favors" are allways a go to, when dealing with fae-like creatures. But in this case... I don't think it's as much a problem of asking for more as it's a problem of not knowing the stakes to properly evaluate the worth of her service to him. Those are strangely only discussed the night before the mission. Well... she definitely should have secured his service for the rest of her time in Marquette since he will be the reason, that it will be a lot less safe there after this rescue operation.

carebear90

I'm really looking forward to interactions with this pricess of the blue.

Mecanimus

That’s a good point. I don’t know what more to ask honestly, Sinead has nothing.

Crushow

Hm, Arianes reward for help seems.. cheap. Sorta disappointed that she didnt ask for more than that.


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