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54. City of the Night

🕑 Added 2020-01-29 15:02:01 +0000 UTC

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Mecanimus

Aaaah life on the frontier.

Garbled Sounds

Damn. This is one damn eventful town. How many people died publicly in the last year we've witnessed? Dozen? More? Now there are even explosions.

Mecanimus

All edits made thanks!

Nicholas Paterson

Here's my uncalled for editing. I've recently noticed that I'm obsessed with commas but don't have the english major needed to remember their rules properly, so feel free to ignore any and all comma related corrections. I will help you… Fend them off.” -> I will help you… fend them off.” Merritt sits down and heavily and upends -> Merritt sits down heavily and upends? yourself to me Merritt dear. -> yourself to me, Merritt dear. (I think) my pleasure to accept sweetie. -> my pleasure to accept, sweetie. be rude do have her -> be rude to have her “Say I have a question. -> “Say, I have a question. staple of any good vampires. -> staple of any good vampire? “I don’t know it just feels silly. -> “I don’t know, it just feels silly. turns cold and aura gains -> turns cold and her aura gains? add to the vacarm -> vacuum OR vacarme? “Huh huh.” -> “Uh huh.”? Oh, no the crafty witch -> Oh, no. The crafty witch OR Oh no, the crafty witch?

tibbish

Sounds like it had a lit fuse too. For practical reasons it had to be quickly lit if it was to be timed to explode with her nearby. She'd probably be able to see the person who lit it running away or perhaps even smell them. Seems highly risky at best if they actually know what she is. So yeah probably a diversion. Maybe to rob her or burn down her establishment?

carebear90

Well... you didn't make us care about the priests. Everybody cares about your redheads. XD

Mecanimus

I kill two hundred priests no one bats an eye but kill two spunky red head and everybody notices lol

ColourMyAlphabet

If you drink too much you'll end up like the other devourer spawns, the authors gives us our dose of chapters weekly so that we don't go insane

Mecanimus

Fuck I always mix the two.

Mecanimus

ALL WILL BE REVEALED

ColourMyAlphabet

Oh no, nononono, he's doing it again, he's killing another redhead! xD

carebear90

Hmm... someone blowing up a storage shed? That seems suspiciously like a diversion. I mean... I don't think it has enough strategic value to matter economicaly, and it shouldn't kill anyone. So either someone waited for her to walk by and blow her up, or someone wanted to do something else while everyone is distracted.

carebear90

"I cannot help but smile when seeing her. Because I am such a good guest, I give her the fangless version." Isn't this her home? Why is she a "good guest"? Shouldn't she be the host?

L Pedersen

Whenever I refresh my patreon tab and see a new chapter I actually go "Wooooooo!" That ending sure came out of the blue, I have no idea what could be going on here. Was someone trying to get Ari with IED? Also where is Ari going? It's been hinted that she just needed to wait a little bit longer for her schemes but I didn't think it meant leaving her territory? The tone of it made it seem like she would never return to the dream once she leaves. Or does she expect an extended absence? I thank thee for thy offering but my thirst is unquenchable!


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